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AS long as they remember to use it

One of the better theories I heard is Aliens have visited observed for awhile and then left thinking "Man the life forms here are lame especially the humans"

My quote wasn't letting me type any text have no idea why Any way what I was going to say after quoting "Magic, mystery, machines..." Hmm is this a Scooby-Doo episode ? All you would need is the Dog...........Unless you count Snave

Did Devin and Mac talk about this with Barry? If they didn't I could see this biting them on the ass somewhere down the line. They still bowl where Mac's parents live? I ask this because San Diego where I live has only one bowling alley left and I heard there are plans for that one to close down.I grew up here there used to be quite a few.I wonder if the military bases in town still have them. So Mac and Devin's parents are spending the day together tomorrow can you find out if they are having fun?............Oh never mind my friend who is reading this story with me just explained everything to me

That would suggest alien technology wouldn't it. This wolf is the first creature they have come across who didn't want to eat them............At least not yet🤞

I am a long way from being done with this chapter and in a few minutes I'm about to have a phone appointment. But before that I'm going to take a guess those wolf creature they are seeing with the heat vision I'm thinking are humans that can turn into a wolf or is this case a wolf like creature like some other authors do. After I get a chance to read the whole chapter I'll see how far off I was

This would have been a good chapter for Tuesday July 4th Seems like every chapter is scarier then the previous one

If you are into crime drama ,mystery and suspense then you have come to the perfect place.This beats any police drama you may have seen at the movies or on TV hands down. I won't say any details about the story for fear of giving away too much as the other reviews covered it well.What I will say is think of any great suspense writer and this author will compare favorably to him/her.The author has said this was his first attempt at this genre which makes my statement in the previous sentence even that much more incredible

Parker strikes me a somebody who has a lot of humility so I don't know if he took you up on it.I bet other readers have told you this but the story you just have to read from Parker is A to Z some years have past this your message to Parker was posted so I'm guessing you already found it but I thought I would put it out there in case you haven't .I have now as of this read time two of your stories and I have been blown away both times is this going to happen everytime? IMHO those are ALMOST as good as Parker's A to Z trust me I mean that as high praise. BTW while I'm here I looked up Hailey Idaho did you know Bruce Willis invested a lot in the town and started some businesses there? Did you consider putting any of that in the story?

I love how you have all the characters from your stories cross paths.It sounds like Zach has been instrumental (just realized the choice of words I assure you that wasn't meant as a pun 😄) In what Larry is going to end up doing .Zach makes a very compelling case

Another Altimexis story that's all I need to know. I find the last sentence of the story synopsis " he learns that sometimes the shortest path to one's goals isn't the straightest one." Very interesting

Did you go into writing this story thinking you were going to use that. Imagine what the Navy would think if they knew their influence in this story

Over 80% of this the readers didn't see coming but one thing the readers DID see coming was Zampa was going to play a big part in this. Arguably without Zampa Harris gets away with everything.Would they have found USB drives otherwise? Or the cameras?

In the last chapter I was beginning to have suspicions about Harris not because I am so smart because I'm not but because of all the comments in Ash and Ember that referenced Harris so I had a clue . I have to go back now a look at those comments again . It was genius how when the story followed Harris and Stefano doings they had valid thoughts but absolutely no clue to why they were doing it Brillant Bullet proof vest does make sense for Timothy after the conversation with Robin I do recall Timothy going into the trunk of his car a "piece of equipment" How well does Corbin know anatomy? He knew enough so the bullet would go through and through could he know enough to avoid or minimize hitting a vital organ. I'm guessing not. All along we assumed Harris was competent (though dirty) but maybe he isn't Stefano was always a few steps (or more) ahead of him. And I would have to think with not much digging he could have discovered Stefano's family connection to Luca

A lot of stuff revealed here my random thought in my last chapter comment turned out to be true .Dumb luck A couple of things just don't add up to me.If the Giovanni Family means to harm Corbin I don't think Luca would have had everyone at the restaurant bow to Corbin. And Jenoah did exactly what Corbin asked of him and it appears Jenoah did nothing hinky. I have a feeling something isn't as it seems

"Jamie, it is not that I wish secrets kept from any of you. But it is my experience that a soldier's assets are best kept hidden until needed. Should we need them, they will become apparent, I assure you." I see what you are doing there Geron .There is going to be a point and time where death is evident but TAH DAH!!!!!! One of Dorf's secret talents will reveal itself and save the day.If I'm right it will be fun to see what it is. "which would include at least one change of undergarment." After what they already been through and witnessed I think they are going to need multiple changes of undergarments

I had wondered why Stefano up until this chapter made no mention of Luca's family being in town. Could it be Stefano is actually related to Luca in some way? It would explain Luca's odd attention to Corbin and how he was always steps ahead of Harris

James learned well from Marcel who then has apparently has passed it on to Peter,Jimmy and Billy. Warning if you haven't read the chapter yet don't do it on an empty stomach

Wow I would have loved to see that encounter created visually by a talented filmmaker with all of Hollywoods special effects unfortunately they probably wouldn't include Jamie and Garvin being naked. For lack of a better word the mind control Jamie was under is it still there?And did that contribute to the brief argument Jamie and Gavin had. Silas said "It is good to be standing in defense of something again." what was he in the past? Dorf and Silas said the from their perspective the encounter only lated a few moments. But look at how many words you used to describe everything no wonder your chapter are long.This isn't another War and Peace is it😄

I would love to hear your other reasons

Did you notice what we didn't see this chapter? I wonder what Stefano is up to? I would think that's because Stefano HAS to be aware of Luca'a family in town and he has even more reason to be deliberate On original Star Trek episodes only non regular characters died usually a member of the enterprise crew. With that kind of thinking in mind the last thing Harris said to Timothy in their phone call was "Be safe" I immediately thought uh oh Timothy is toast

Corbin is concerned about Paul being sucked into his mess with Luca's family but looking at it from Luca's perspective is it in his family's best interest to kill a first responder firefighter? Especially after Paul just might have helped stop the fire from spreading to Hailey and therefore saving their restaurant. Everyone is assuming Robin and Stefano are in cahoots. I'm thinking about what Harris was thinking of when in his thought he knowss Stefano will find Corbin.So is it possible Robin is really working with Harris to set up Stefano?

All your smart readers have come up with all the plausible theories I would have thought of.I'll add a thought nobody has mentioned (yet) You refer to how would Luca react if he knew what Corbin did? Now usually he would be furious with somebody who did that but is it possible Luca respects the reason why Corbin did that? When Corbin and Paul left the restaurant everybody bowed as Corbin passed obviously at Luca's request would Luca so that with someone he's planning to kill. I don't know Mafia etiquette but I would think not. BTW is Bruce smart enough to know what kind of family his new BF is in?

As far as Luca knowing about Paul I bet Luca scouted the town before they made thier move it would not surprise me if they know all about Paul,Karen and anyone else who stands out. As far as who is Stefano speaking to I bet Idaho has a lot of small places where people in WP go he most likely figured out who to talk to Although this would not be smart I prpbably would have done the same thing Corbin did with the bobcat(And I'm a dog person not a cat person) but jeez I know I wouldn't be able to keep it