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Chapter 26: More Talking
weinerdog commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 26: More Talking
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Chapter 158 Blown & Tossed by the Wind
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 158 Blown & Tossed by the Wind
@Dodger has said a couple of times the trust is set up to where Don can't access the money.That of course doesn't mean he might have found a way to do it illegality if so that would be be a whole other issue and Don would be in deep doo-doo but I wouldn't even know if that would be possible. -
Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
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Chapter 1 - The First One
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The First One
The fact that these attacks come out of nowhere is disconcerting this particular day seemed to be a calm uneventful day so what brings it on? I have a really good buddy who's impossible to dislike every time you interact with him you walk away smiling.A few years back he was telling me his doctor prescribed medication for him for his anxiety I had no idea and he was the last person I would associate with that.Which is why when Luke's doctor said "Turn the dial down lad." well geez the guy you work out with at the gym or the guy you're having a beer with at the bar can pretty much tell you same thing "Pull yourself up by your bootstraps" "Buck up" for a doctor this guy sounds pretty simplistic- 17 comments
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Chapter 26: More Talking
weinerdog commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 26: More Talking
Well the stage is set if that's the right term.Will Alec be more assertive in this next conversation with Finn? And how will Finn react?Based on how Finn was when Alec left I see no reason why this won't be okay but I've been surprised before.I hope River designs an awesome selfie Alec can send Finn. So you were intent on dying this weekend? Do I see the makings of another story coming?If that came of as flippant I didn't mean it to but I find that comment interesting. Fried candy bar? You mean a regular candy bar isn't unhealthy enough?- 37 comments
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In this case either word is accurate
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Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
All the baggage is gone from Puppy's life at the moment at the moment BTW I have relatives in Austrailia but I never been there do you know where they are going?If they are going to Adalaide this would be a good time to go.🤔I'd like to watch Puppy and Steven bicker So Puppy says he's through with men?We all know how likely that is.Hope you revisit his life down the road.I'll be interested to see how he's doing.Thank you for the story- 13 comments
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Put THAT in your next story description trust me the readers will come
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MORE!MORE! I"M STILL NOT SATIFIED
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I normally don't lobby an author to put something in a in process story that would make me more annoying than I am now. Having said that I know this one character hasn't been mentioned at least I don't recall in this story and it makes sense since the story centered around Jay and Loe but I hope at the wedding you mention in passing that Matt's Dad Brad was there.
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Gee you don't think I was too obvious do you
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Oh man if that ever became the case I would be going on the lam
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Make up fake accounts if you have too.....Who said that?
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Chapter 158 Blown & Tossed by the Wind
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 158 Blown & Tossed by the Wind
For a very brief moment I thought the Pastor had a little bit of intelligence but the more he started talking about the gay topic the more he sounded like the idiot he is and I'm convinced they should not sail I just hope nobody gets hurt or even worse dies. Assuming they all survive I hope Robbie stays at Rory's house for the time being.There is still a slight worry there Rory is cute if the stars line up just so its not out of the question that Rory and Robbie have an encounter -
You heard the old saying about New York,New York the city they had to name twice or words to that effect. Well this is the chapter you have to read twice
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Chapter 10 - It's Got to Stop
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 10 - It's Got to Stop
Welcome back I was worried you got sick or something. I'm glad Steven and Puppy seem to be on the same page.It sound like Hunter is going to be an issue in the future- 9 comments
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I'll go do that now I hadn't done so yet because along with the choices they give you like Addictve/Pacing,Characters etc. they haven't added "Kbois edited it" I've been waiting for that .
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I'll make no comment on this being posted on Sunday I'm guessing anything I say will get me in trouble with one of you two.S will will be posted at the usual morning time on Wednesday? @kbois was right this is a excellent chapter.When Jays dad said "Jay Clarence Petermeyer" that reminds to the truths in life besides Death and taxes and that is if your full name is being used either your Parents are pissed at you or you just got arrested for being a serial killer. Aidan saying the sign off was awesome😀 After the question “Okay Jay, what would you order if you were first in line?” Kbois must have edited out the line "Dirty Dr Pepper because @Mrsgnomiesaid it was so good.
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A Dillan In Wolf's Clothing
weinerdog commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in A Dillan In Wolf's Clothing
Oh jeez Am I as twisted as you or what as soon Zeke spoke of being a fruit in a school play how come I just knew he was banana? How does the station dynamics work is Maya and Jerry above Mr. Allison?I thought being station manager he could over rule Maya and Jerry unless I'm mistaken -
9. No distance will make us grow apart
weinerdog commented on gor mu's story chapter in 9. No distance will make us grow apart
Curious if Lauti insecurities will be a continuing problem but I'n really glad they did THE deed. Don't quite know what to make of Lauti and Lauti(Cappa) getting on well. Didn't see that coming -
Are you proposing to me?
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Are you proposing to me?
If you ask me getting another day of brand new banter between you two is lot like getting a new chapter.- 151 comments
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I think the word Deja vu fits here somewhere
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Rafe,Joe and Daeran sound like me when I was in classes although if I had a shapeshifter professor who changed appearances every 5 minutes that would keep me from sleeping. wonder what Mr. Surf actual original appearance is. There's some reason why it was mentioned Rafe witnessed an aide taking something out of a student's hand and I bet its ominous
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Are you proposing to me?
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Are you proposing to me?
So it's the best chapter because its @kboisfavorite chapter right?....(crickets chirping) ,uh right? Of course that's right- 151 comments
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Are you proposing to me?
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Are you proposing to me?
I don't know how you do it the chapters keep getting better and better. Some quotes from the story. "Almost on cue, Jay and Aidan start pouting"---Now I know how President Biden can get things done in Washington D.C. when negotiating bring those two along to pout. “I twiple pwomise I won’t pee on you!”And since Aidan’s sleeping with us, Carson has to,too----I'm sure Aidan will keep his twiple pwomise but he didn't promise that Carson wouldn't pee on him. Aido Potato? Mya Papaya? Any of you reader who are expecting newborns speak to @Mrsgnomieabout choosing a name. On a more serious note I'm not sure anyone else has mentioned this possibility/probability but we hear Loren's stance on having kids but given his expierience growing up I bet if he hears about a neglected kid from someone in his circle of friends he would not hesitate to adopt the kid or two....or three- 151 comments
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