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Now that's a reference I never expected

So it looks like the Braunigan will be the obstacle they will face.Is this journey so important to take that possibly fatal risk? IIllia and Pacha could have a plan to abort if it becomes too dangerous but we know that won't happen because then the story will be over. Is it possible the Hartonin race doesn't exist no more because of the moving of stars? Sort of like unintended consequences? If what I just said was nonsense cut me some slack I"m out of my element on this topic. Element ...that was an unintentional pun.

I doubt Armand and Colin planned to live the over the club forever if they do indeed adopt the baby it's time to think of a house. Given the dreams Armand has had his current painting might reflect that and I would think the painting will create a lot of buzz in the art world

You already have the next 4 cued-up don't you😄

It will be interesting to read story with these guys as the protagonists.Will they have any reason to have communications with Charlie and Co.? Two mouths?Could you imagine a typical attorney using two mouths I would like to amend one statement made "being a bachelor was much the same everywhere in the galaxy. You cooked, or you starved!" In my case and many other friends I know it's "You have a microwave or you starved" BTW I have a craving for some rrretachuf

The naughty step? That's worse than the corner huh? Uuuummmm!

The abandoned child really shook Armand up as it would anybody.I don't know if Colin and Armand taking on an infant is something they could do. Three somewhat grown kids is a lot different. But I bet Armand has a idea but what?

Please enough of that I don't want to hear any MOE of this

Out of many sad moments in this story you just said the saddest words "only one chapter left".😭 Alec scenarios that he comes up with are valid but the problem is he comes to the worst conclusions,There are going to be moments in relationship even with people who don't have Alec's issues I hope the therapist gets through to Alec that somewhere along the line that WILL happen just like with any other couple BUT it won't necessarily be fatal.The way Finn is when Alec has these moments should tell Alec how committed Finn is to this. I think it cool Finn was able to make friends with Luke and the others will Alec ever want to go back and visit? If River and Ken go back there that would be even more reason to.I guess you'll cover that next chapter you have a lot to pack in. In your previous story you had Seth and Noah with the family at Christmas it would be Cool to see a little of Alec with the Larson family at Christmas (Just a thought) Only one small tiny issue after 3 three chapters or thereabout of Alec being in Washington state you finally had it raining.It would have closer to being accurate if you had it raining the whole time he was there 😄

As alluded to by other readersI don't think the Neo-supremacist would be mentioned unless they figure in the story at a later time.There might be one or two still out there and they might see them being on a cruise as a good opportunity. Hope I'm wrong

Devin hasn't told Kyle and Brady about what his siblings did once they find out I bet they have a contact through their business that can help Devin with that

@kbois uses YOUR story chapter comments to say something about HER story now how could she do that? Where did she get..the...idea....to...do......OK I better go now

No offense to the boys or anybody that likes ties. but I don't like ties some people call them neck chokes I'm one of those. I do remember as a kid we went to a steakhouse with a cowboy theme and if someone showed up with a tie they would ring a cowbell and the waitress would cut the tie off. I was 12 years old and was selected to wear the tie then the pretty young waitress cut off my tie and kissed me on the cheek. I bet my older brothers wished they wored a tie . Living close to the Mexican border on Halloween vans from Mexico filled with kids would drive down our street and kids would pile out and trick or treat maybe Armand and Colin could do something similar with the kids from the orphanage

It's actually a week How you ask? Haven't you heard The Beatles song "Eight Days A Week"?

For me this was a very interesting history lesson of Great Britain of the past Secretary Roy Jenkins is very eloquent except for the part where he referred to being gay a disability but the way society treated these people in that sense it might have well been a disability. On the other hand Sir David Maxwell Fyfe a man with a dignified title sounds every bit as bad as the worst ignorant racist homophobe from the Deep South in the U.S. I'm surprised such an intelligent man like Winston Churchill allowed a policy like this to take place

Every moment spent with me is "ass-o-clock" .So I've been told

You interrupt your vacation for that? Hey you know your priorities can't let that pass right😆

That scene where Richie sees after all that time Marie was a real tearjerker .Although you gave no indication of this I had in the back of my mind Marcel and Marie hmmm hey you never know what may happen in France. It will be interesting what Colin finds out after speaking to Richie's family attorney

Let me tell you how good this story is .It was really late and I was ready to go to bed when the notification came up so I started reading and I couldn't stop and now I'm done and it is really ,really late but I don't regret a second of it.I'm way too tired to write a review so for the moment I'll borrow a review @Mrsgnomie once wrote for another story which read "Wow just wow!"Read this story you'll have a good laugh

All due respect to @FanLitonce you start this story there was no way to stop reading. If this was a movie my guess is the best way to describe it would be romantic comedy I hope @Mrsgnomie isn't offended by that romantic comedies are not my favorites but if they were all written like this I think they would be my favorite. For me the key to this was all the characters were delightful and a hoot.In addition to Nolan and Jensen there is their niece Anna ,Jensen's Dad,Nolan's sister Jenn and Nolan's Friend Mark just to name a few.Also the use of humor was incredible here are just a few of my favorite lines: “Hardly recognize you without Bryan’s dick down your throat.” “I’m not trying to sound like an entitled asshole—” “I know, it just comes natural to you.” "swim shorts disintegrating"(BTW is that really a thing) "Never assume you can’t do worse."(I did root for a few teams that challenged that statement though) In addition there was also some twists you don't see coming such as Bryan and Nolan's connection.I must have smiled though almost the whole thing except for what I just mentioned not too many stories do that for me.Very,very well done. Before I end this comment I do have one question Mark said "And Jensen, I’m assuming you can give Noe a ride home? Since I’m being sent to the corner and all.” Did @kbois sneak that line in when you weren't looking😄

When you do this counting the days I'm curious what you're thinking on how you number the days When she gets back will you give her a day to rest and re-energize or are you envisioning as soon as she walks through the door and even before she unpacks its straight to going online and posting the next chapter?......Never mind I think I know the answer

Thanks. You know I was just wondering "How much longer?" 🤔 Well now I know

Something tells me he won't get the chance

I have stopped driving because I was starting to miss things on the road even though there was nothing wrong with my eyesight I had a few close calls on the road and it was because I didn't notice and react so I decided I better stop before someone gets hurt or worse One thing that I noticed leading up to my decision is that there are a lot more morons on the road then I realized. I would see all the cars around me and think to myself how many out here are drunk or high it's a frightening thought If the accident were more serious I believe GG would have visted

This is the first story yours I'm reading .I got a notification but for the life of me I don't remember clicking to follow you🤔.But I am familar with the readers who left a comment and they are a good judge of what a good story is so I read the two chapters and I like what I'm reading so you got a new follower but I still don't know how it happened LOL