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I'm interested to see how James carrying Tasha while flying will work out.Minor prediction here I haven't read ahead on the story on the other site because if I do I might unintentionally give something away in these chapter comments.So my minor prediction is James with Tasha on his back will do the same thing at the building that he did out his bedroom window and for a moment it looks like they are going to fall until at the last moment before hitting ground they become airborne.OK take that with a grain of salt. I have to think that for Tasha to get her wound fixed James parents would have to find out everything. I like the exchange James and Casper had about the anime they were watching.Casper wanted the politics to make sense.Since when does politics make sense?
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If Amado wants to see America they are going to have to take him to places like New York etc. could be fun
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That is something you just can't make up. I bet CL and other authors will use that in future stories When you mentioned adopted family are Tony's Aunt Uncles and cousins Ok with the boys?Also does Tony's dad have family around?
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Perfect way to win over Brad,Tom and Charlie good food.When they bought the ingredients I was trying to figure out what she was going to make.Dandelion is a flower right?I had no idea it was edible.I have to admit first reaction it doesn't sound good to me but I would try it.What is it called?It's not called Dandelion salad is it?
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Nice suspense in this chapter the guys that write action movies got nothing on you.Casper and Tasha have to come up with a place for Tasha to hide unless she has an ability we don't know about yet.These people consider her a threat and they'll be searching for her.
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I get that Brad's Mom was grieving but her logic just boggles my mind.I would hope Tom's parents would look at that situation and try to do something with their son before it's too late but I'm not holding my breath.I'm proud of Tony's Mom and Dad also
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Tasha might be a bad ass but she's inexperienced when you plan something like this you got to do some recon on your foes.Im sure she'll find some way to escape but I hope this will be lesson learned.I'm guessing Casper and Tasha will eventually meet Peter and then game on.I'm wrong more than I'm right usually but I hope I'm right
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So many questions I'll just wait for the next chapters to play.Kevin and Bob are still eunuchs?Geez I wouldn't wish that on anybody well except for one public figure who shall remain nameless .Ronald McDonald? Nope keep guessing. @NimirRaj is absolutely right that it was a dumb question Mr. Romano asked considering what was just said about Jack but I think Mr Romano asked that out of concern for his sons so I'll give him a pass on that.Julian and Justin attending that school probably reinforces Tristan's desire to attend there and although you didn't say yet bet Ricky's a hottie also. Something I didn't consider on my comment on your last chapter.Nobody really dies in your stories they always seem to come back so maybe Grandpa Ron is alive after all
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There are three basic truths in life death,taxes and the older members of your family telling stories about you when you were growing up.Sounds like a good match maybe Amalia can be a teacher here.
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Are there full blooded Italians with blonde hair?Not that it matters I'm just curious.BTW how is Tony with the Italian language because she probably speaks mostly Italian. I hope around Christmas time or even Thanksgiving somebody from Brad and Tom's family calls them an Aunt Uncle,Cousin anybody and tells them that they miss them and disagree with their Dads did.One can hope.
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HEY!!! WATCH YOUR LANGUAGE!! uh English that is.😆
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Like the start of this.I'm curious why public school is less of a hassle than private school I guess he would be known in both places. BTW my name is Kenny does that mean I'm going to be Tristan's driver in the future? And speaking of that how will @Ronyx react to find out he passed away?
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My thinking(such as it is lol)if she was aware of the nature of Peter's group I would think that would make a person a little more stoic and know that James would get the best care imaginable and most likely every move of James is probably being observed by somebody in the organization so she would be reassured.Of course she would still be a caring Mother but less anxious but I get it James is going through a horrible ordeal. Another possible outcome is James got attacked because he is Peter's son.If that's the case Sarah would be one pissed off Mama
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I know he said they have a lot of chickens but how many do they have?If they end up being a popular item at the market they may eventually not have enough for themselves and family.But I don't know about these things I may be way off.I did find the line "How does a dead chicken look healthy?" funny
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Well this chapter answered a question I almost asked in the last chapter comments .The doctor he is seeing is aware of Peter and what he does and the office probably aligned with the organization.It hasn't been revealed if Sarah is aware of Peter and what he does you would think she does know but she was far more emotional and worried about James when he went back to school that tells me there's a lot she doesn't know. Nice cliffy there at the end.Nathanial/Casper is her what? patient?son? can't wait to find out
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I thought there was going to be another lady for Tony to meet I guess the family read our comments and learned their lesson lol.
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Jacob tells Kayden Trent's a bad guy and then what does he do?He force kisses Kayden something...Trent would do🙄 Cho now knowing may be a good thing if Mark comes close to finding out Cho could run some interference or something. Why do I think that if or when Mark finds out it will be in front of the Grandparents
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The boys are really ambitious and hard working. My only reservation was it might be getting too big but Tony is smart and said to them to have a downsizing plan if they leave.You never know what will happen in the future but if the boys get teaching jobs here and stay permanently that would be great.
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When Samson spoke with "Father" the word special was used among them just like Tasha used the word earlier I found that interesting. Okay that explanation James said to Casper was....uh awkward lol.Now here's what I would be thinking if I had this situation when I was 12.If a person could sense my emotion and he was cute and he touched me for some reason well I would be afraid he would figure me out after he read my reaction.It has not been established yet if James has gay feelings but if he does that could be an issue here
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Happy for both Kevin and Dex. Although it was the right move for Dex parents to know jeez you can argue Kevin's mom over reached on how it was done.It should have been been up to Dex to tell his parents. And then she had to be there also? Jeez.You can definitely imagine her as a mother-in -law. I like the ongoing gag in the story when Dexter's Dad said "we kind of always suspected that Kevin was gay" Kevin's Mom thought it was Important for Dex's parents to know meantime . they all are clueless to the stuff Torry does. Loved the story
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Please forgive me I didn't really follow Brad's story too well.Is Charlie living with Brad and Tom now?And why did he have to leave?If I sound really confused sorry
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Amazing the family got together a few times and no mention of Marlene asking about the jewelry.In regards to what @Kev said if Tony ever got serious enough to talk marriage I think she would have to know the boys are part of the package. Forgive this non-farm boy being unfamiliar with the term but Tony said he missed a clutch what is that?
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The camping gear was a awesome gesture besides Tony will use it in the future.With all the sausage and salami and vegetables there if I lived there the only shopping I would do is I like flavored sparkling water other then that everything is already there
