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Good thing there are no women on this journey.What if their suits clash with their shoes or something?
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Okay sounds like some abuse is going on and Neil is the victim.Explains his surly demeanor.If West somehow finds out about this then he seems like someone who would try to help.He's due to go out of town soon with the family will he want to find a way to stay behind due to the Neil situation?
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Awesome all the way through except maybe Mike making bail. Matt said I love youIt was also awesome that Seamus sees Brad as the Dad he wished he had and should of had One tiny gripe Matt could have put the pancake he dropped under the faucet for a few seconds.Oh wait maybe he called five second rule if that's the case then it's cool LOL
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You would be surprise that fans of groups and singers never forget them and there is still a market for doing performances well after they peaked in popularity.Tony could always do that but on his terms.A lot of performers never stop because they know nothing else so good for Tony and Jim.When I was a kid if you Told me The Rolling Stones would still be still be active in their 70's I would have said you were nuts. Glad they still go to Anna's.I know the shack means a lot to them but will they ever remodel it?GGreat story
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The only reason that I mentioned in the last chapter comment that Bush would have Jeb go back was based on a comment @NimirRajsaid about Bush using the do over for his own political purposes.Well in this chapter he did just that and then I knew Jeb was going to die because no way the author was going to continue the story with Jeb Bush being the narrator LOL. Davey communicating with the two Brians was a nice touch.Was it a dream?Or did the two Brians actually communicate by hearing thoughts?I'm not sure but I think Davey forgot something he said "Watch out January, 1981, here I come!" But didn't Bush set it for 1979? Also this this is a machine made a little differently and it was a rush job with taking shortcuts maybe he may not even arrive at the set date it might be off give or take some months or even a few years there are some unknowns with this machine
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Operation Butter Biscuit
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Operation Butter Biscuit
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Operation Butter Biscuit
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Operation Butter Biscuit
Are you going to write the part where Mike gets arrested?Hope so.Twenty grand a month is a lot of embezzling for anybody.I wonder if some of it went to Kelly's parents they don't need it but they probably loved the idea of ripping off Seamus. BTW operation Butter biscuit????You couldn't do better than that?🤔- 52 comments
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I hope things will be explained in the next chapter but as for this one I'm not really sure what happened and why. All I know is James is messed up and Tasha is taking him back home how does that accomplish anything?But I'll reserve comment until we find out more
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Why is the old agent even bothering to call Tony he had his chance and he blew it. The British tour sounds exciting
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Mrs.Graves sounds arrogant and someone who usually gets her way.She's going to find out the hard way Tristan isn't somebody you tick off.Tristan can't use the disappearing nuts thing on her.What's the female equivalent to that🤔 Something tells me I don't want you to answer that
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I almost missed this chapter I deserve some demerits for that.Jim is doing a great job I think they should create a YouTube channel as well as a Facebook account
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Has Pete been in the story before this chapter?I don't remember one way or another.He would an adult now unless he got murdered. One of Farmer's entries rang so true to me.A couple of time walking out of a restaurant that was close to a part of town where this activity goes on I had a a few of these kids approach me for a hand out I had a pretty good idea they were hustling.Like Farmer I wanted to take them home feed them have them take a shower wash their clothes etc. but it's just too risky to do that .But I almost did anyway.
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The think he withheld the name for just that purpose.I guess we will find out in either the next chapter or the one after that
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Wed, Thurs: Kayden and Trent
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Wed, Thurs: Kayden and Trent
I wish Audrey would say some other words in French to Mark.Hey Audrey I'm glad he's not my father also.I wonder how Mark would feel if some Frenchmen talked smack about the Korean language? While reading this I was thinking couldn't they come up with a plan to get some leverage on Ivy?She sounds dumb enough to be set up.But then Mitch may have a idea I hope it's a good one.Anybody know how to hack e-mail accounts? I may have mentioned this before but I have a feeling Mark is going to find out about everything in the presence of the Grandparents -
I can certainly see Bush doing that.If he is 100% certain or close to it that the machine will work without any snafu's then this might sound nuts but I can see him sendin Jeb back who better then to contact his earlier timeline self right?I read somewhere once that he wanted Jeb to run for president first before George W. but something is going to happen similar to what happened before where Davey has to do it himself.With Sean and Mr. Rush help Nobody mentioned this yet When Davey told Sean and Mr. Rush that he and Brian were kissing Sean said "It's about damn time".So I guess David's reaction to Davey and Brian wasn't all that irrational
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OK I'm a little confused nothing new for me.I thought I read that 23 was called that in part because she's 23 years old and I thought I read Caleb was 15 years old but he was referred to as 13 .It's not a big deal but .... As far as what is happening James is really motivated because now they are suppose to capture Charlie so now it looks like the whole gang is going to get involved in this .And I just had a horrible thought while typing this is that girl that 23 is suppose to capture ...Is it Bex?
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I've read a little over half your catalog But I haven't read any of your Doorways series yet so I guess it's time to do that.I see the other two stories were one chapter with 25,000 plus words so it looks like this one will have multiple chapters am I right? The Darkness Between Doors? Well that describes my bedroom at night but this about something else LOL.See you when I catch up.
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That is such a one sided contract since Tony's own written songs were out there I think they could have found another record company willing to go with different conditions.It used to be the norm for record companies to select songs for the artists like Frank Sinatra and Dean Martin but when the Beatles came along and they wrote their own songs that started to change.Two albums a year was common in the sixties and seventies until some artists with some leverage told the record companies 'You'll get it when it's done".Two albums a year today is almost more rare these days but not unheard of. Here's a thought record one of Tony's concerts for kids at the hospital and then make and sell a DVD for charity something to do with kids.
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Did Farmer have a day like this planned way back then?It would seem so with all this detailed information he left for the police to find
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Well it seems like a couple of years of maturing made Brian be a lot more like the Brian of the previous lifeline.It's too bad that he had to lose not only David but also Sam his brother as friends.I didn't want to predict Brian getting hurt or killed because of an attack but I sort of saw it coming it seems like the most unthinkable stuff is happening in this lifeline such as being surrounded by communist countries and actual attacks on the homeland.With the worst case scenarios that are coming through well it doesn't take much of an imagination to see that the person Reagan picked go back in the new machine will probably die leaving Davey to be the one to go again because there is no other choice and of course most likely followed by Sean only this time he might have to go back to sometime in the later seventies because I think they said he couldn't go back the same time as before.That itself means a lot of changes again
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The one thing I kept saying to myself is if had someone like Brice interested in me I would grab on and never let go. Having never had happened to me what happened to Danny I cannot judge I'm glad it worked out.Brice was right Adam did make a mistake.
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One thing I noticed no mentioned of the Mom when Grandfather fell ill.You would think Jim being gay would not be such a huge deal that she couldn't try to make some kind of peace with her Mother and Father.
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I'm sure I don't remember this right and it will take me awhile to look at what chapter this was but did Jacqueline appear in a previous chapter I think with Peter? I may be mistaken I guess Casper is vulnerable also will James or Tasha talk to him?
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Remind me never to get on your bad side
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I'm surprised the Dean spoke to Jim .Some are legitimately busy but others wouldn't take the time to speak to Jim
