weinerdog
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Man you have it written in such a way that I don't know who to trust.Are Kellen and Jordan evil?How about Mike?I know thats probably way off but I briefly thought those things while reading this.Did Jimmy shoot Jack?No I'm kidding about that one..You and your damn magic eight ball. So you're writing from Area 51?I guess you want to make sure @Wesley8890 can't get to you.
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I hope this isn't beyond Mark's ability to help.My thought would be to contact a VA office.But I guess you need to find a last name first .
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Your Prologue used the work shelled shocked that makes me wonder if this is set in the past for that word isn't used these days.Whatever the women's complaint was I'm sure isn't valid.Billy most likely didn't say anything to the police
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Good chapter in getting to know some of the cousins.So at the end J.C.said he" heard his voice".That implies the person isn't physically there.I'm going to guess it is T.J. using that ability to reach out to J.C. mentally.I don't think it's Tristan otherwise we would hear Ja-wack-sin.But T.J doesn't call him Jackson does he so maybe not .Is there a distance limitation as to what Tristan and Damian could do? I ask that because maybe they could take care of some of the bullies in Iowa.Not kill them of course. Would it be immature to say to @Wesley8890Nyah Nyah I beat you?Yeah it would so I won't say that.
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Would it be your story if it didn't????
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Maybe Jack hasn't redeemed himself yet but he took a huge step.Where in Iowa did you say these boys are?Never mind just thinking out loud.Okay since nothing crazy happened this chapter I'm bracing myself for.Readers we should all be afraid.
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Nice chapter.Apparently Tyler worried about Ariel finding out.It happened before they got together is so I don't see a problem but since it is written that way then maybe it would be a problem for Ariel.He was a little fragile in the past so I hope not
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For a moment it sounded like the end but I guess there are still a few loose ends.Now fess up you said Troy wrote some stories about the place you're Troy aren't you lol.
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Jeff doesn't know how to be a boyfriend at this time. After years of being ostracized all of a sudden a number of people are being friends with him and they are all cute and of like mind if I was in that position I would have probably done the same thing.I said before they should all be FWB.But it does look like Jack has a different kind of feeling when it comes to Lyle.
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I don't have anything new to add from the other excellent reviews.But I will say this author stands right up there with anybody's favorite established author.Judging by the reaction count and comment count word didn't get around when these stories first appeared almost 10 years ago.Maybe GA was a different web site then.This authors stories are as good as anyone's this review and rating is here so maybe more people can discover these stories
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Surprised to hear about Nick but sadly that happens in life.Billy is in the best possible place.I heard about people that can do what Billy can do.
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So that explains your story and your writing
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If it's not bad then why would Jack tell J.C. they have to get to Iowa?Oh no just after I typed that I thought of a reason I hope I'm wrong
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Haven't you had enough hospital scenes yet?Now the question is was it just an accident Tracy had or did the bad guys set it up?I'm also thinking did Dominic's dad meet with foul play? While Kelly is a piece of work we didn't hear Murray say anything in regards to Kelly threatening Jack was he also part of that?
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I was thinking about that you think Tristan can make me forget the 2016 election happened?
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That was an awesome move by Tony to bring Nick and Billy
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Pretty soon they could run a child daycare
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By your standards calm chapter good but calm.So that that means Kelly saying"Tristan?" means another beaut going to happen.Let's see Kelly is Emily's friend so she had an affair with Tristan and then...AW I'll wait to see what you come up with.
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By your standards Then after that who would do all the stupid whackjob stuff?Oh of course Grandma Helen resident asshat
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What's the big idea posting this as soon as I go to the shower?lol.I think it's a little too soon for Jack to have an Epiphany so I suspect the upcoming conversation isn't going to go well.Hope I'm wrong I'm a romantic I want things to go well. A question about a previous chapter.After Grayson tried to commit suicide did C.C. consider telling Grayson that they know where T.J. was and that's he's okay or maybe somehow letting T.J. find out what Grayson did.What that thought to be too risky? BTW what does losing your memory have to do with talking like you're in the 1950's.Neato???
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It's been relatively calm for a number of chapters are the bad guys still an issue?are they laying low?
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We weren't cheating on you Ronyx what happened was......oh,er never mind
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Wasn't a bad idea
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WOW !!! What a shit move by Jack saying it was domestic violence I hope the family intervention sheds some light.It might be a case of Helen and Jack sharing the same wacko gene.There was a line in there that said Alex could not help at the hospital because he's family but Alex would not be family unless the hospital knows Mike is related?Does J.C. know about little Tristan mind reading ability?That would be one way to find out WTF is going on with Jack.
