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24 chapters? Try 36.I will say it does look like we are coming close to a resolution.

It doesn't make sense that the Uncle would lock everything up and not let Tony get his clothes.There is something more there and it's not good.Jim and Tony had gone through a lot but if the end result is they met each other then you can refer to that saying about 'mysterious ways"

I think G wants Tyler to fail at the training so he ends up in the safe house but what if it doesn't work out that way?If Tyler somehow ends up in the field it would only be with Zeke that makes one think of all the possibilities

Those must be kids pajamas

This place definitely it has a small town feel to it with Anna bringing a extra hamburger and Mr. Thomas calling the grandparents to br prepared for a guest Jim must be very well liked in town.

That's one part of Zoltan's plan I don't get.I'm sure he didn't tell Gus that he can't see Rick even if Zoltan has some kind of leverage on Gus no way would Gus take that.I have to assume Zoltan will think Gus will contact Rick on his own and Rick would say they can't see each other anymore.If Rick doesn't do what Zoltan wants him to do well he probably has a plan for that. After he finds out the blackmail didn't work Zoltan most likely handles Gus finances I could see him using that in a way where Gus would have stay with them.Is this where Debbie Beck comes in? Perfect kind of Karma. Willy's way out of the hole he put himself in was foiled by the person he raped. BTW can Heinrich still afford to fly into town?Maybe a bus trip?🤔

Brian's thinking is even more off than Davey's mothers.I don't know what Brian thinks he could have done anyway even if he brought back the recipe for the AIDS cocktail treatment they do today it most likely was too late. Davey and The President are in agreement on not building but the way events are going to happen is going to determine whether they would do that or not maybe Bush later on might want to.

The only way what Caleb said makes any kind of sense is he thought Casper was dangerous but how did he come to that initial conclusion?Of course he would think twice about that anyway now after he found out if he does anything to James he would have a PO'd Tasha to deal with. Is this how kids make friends these days “Hey, guys! This is Casper. He’s a doof. Can we friend him?” Interesting.

Now that I think about it The government would do that if for no other reason is that they would be afraid Russia and China would

When I came across the line "She said that wasn't going to happen because my dad wouldn't let it" I took that to mean it was his Grandparents but if it's her side of the family even worse

Well obviously his Mother's reaction was horrible but then to call her husband's parents not her parents which would have been bad enough but her husband's family to tell them not to let their Grandson stay with them is just the hight of arrogance

Good story.This is no big deal but the only thing I would have done different is to reveal the words she written and if it said the father knew. Thank you.

Can't say I'm at all surprised at Davey's Mom reaction and although her reasoning is flawed it is certainly understandable.But I get a feeling this will never get resolved in this lifeline she won't ever let this go. I"m also not surprised Sean came back from 2004.So many many things have gone wrong in this lifeline that if they had the chance go back a third time they would take it. I mentioned this because maybe Sean from 2004 had observed enough to maybe try to build another one of the invention they would only do that if armageddon or something close to that happens but seeing how things are going they might have to try. Another thing Sean said about how the guys in Modesto acted toward him it looks like not only Brian but Trevor and Brandon are also different as a result of not having met Davey earlier.

Well it's a good thing they had the talk.Matt and Aidan needing time with Brad well you can't argue with that.I have no experience in this but what is the proper etiquette here how much visiting by would be too little or too much? I understand Matt wondering what if it doesn't work out with Seamus but I'm not sure he should have expressed it in those words to Seamus.I think it would have better if he said what if something happens to my dad instead

You just had to let everyone know @kbois was wrong didn't you

Wow I knew Hideyoshi was a bad ass but wow the was they handled Lewis really brought that point home. My first reaction is Lewis will find out it's Father he finds and since he has worked for Father might be conflicted .This would set up a Hideyoshi vs. Father showdown. Or I have it all wrong and everything I just wrote is invalid LOL Now that Peter told James about stress bringing out powers will he on his own make the connection that's what happened to Casper?

David mentioned Alex making unbelievable noises.I hope nobody on the crew is a fink and tells the King.I know David said there was no protocol but on the yacht while it's at sea who's the boss David or the Captain.As far as those rules and laws go imperfect humans made those laws so why can't humans change them?

Wow all these rules about marrying into a Monarchy are these based on what other countries like England did way back when?

Wow this lifeline is worst then his first lifeline at least in his first lifeline his relatives died in conventional ways.I was so worried it was going to go down like this and in a otherwise very good story you can say it was unrealistic that the military and intelligence community didn't understand this well enough. It has been brought up a little by other readers like @NimirRajin the last chapter comments.Davey is excited by Brian coming but he more than anybody else should understand there's a chance this won't be the same Brian. I remember in Do Over Davey saying Brian had been a borderline bully in this timeline Brian doesn't have the advantage of meeting Davey when he did so his personal maturation process may not be the same.

I was anticipating Zack turning in the assignment to Mr.Raffe but this was good the first day with his friends after Zack's being gay was out in the open.And Adam and Sam showed that they are real friends. Zack still has a few things wrong he mentions being worried about about incriminating himself in that assignment as if he did something wrong.Zack you did nothing wrong your POS Dad did

Hideyoshi said to James something about keeping the crime fighting to themselves is that a good idea?Also James and Casper keeping secrets I think they both proved they could trust each other so what's up with that?

Philip's Dad knows a lot of people.What would be cool is when they raid Farmers place they find some stuff on Sturgis.Thanks for the cool video

George already knows what's up😝Brilliant telling his mom he doesn't want to sleep with Alexandra until after marrying her.So all that time around Alex won't look suspicious

Very complicated relationship.Somewhat like a older sibling relationship he messes with you but nobody else can.

Well the condition that she has to get pregnant within 4 years makes this a little complicated.There has been people who has married and had kids only to later say they are gay so I guess it is possible.As long as Alex and Alexandra are OK with it.What if it was found out David wasn't capable of having kids for a medical reason what would The King do then?If they have a plan for that scenario maybe they could pretend that's the case.Sorry you're the writer here and I am trying to write it LOL.Interesting to see what happens