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Well so far this is different AND fascinating some with rusted carcasses of old motor vehicles parked beside them, I now have an idea what happened to some of my old cars two young men and three young women – all of whom perfectly fit the modern-day description of a hippie, with long hair, clothes that ranged from shabby to way-out, and bare feet. Do Cheech and Chong appear in this? The first boy laughed. ‘No, most of us don’t go by our old names here. We consider ourselves to have been reborn. We’re starting over in a new environment, so we’ve chosen to change everything about us, starting with our names.’ ‘Oh . . . I see.’ ‘I’m Arlo, by the way,’ the boy said. ‘And you’ve met Taren and Nova. The others are Wren and Luna.’ In addition to Cheech and Chong is Moon Unit Zappa here also?
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A Graceful Exit / Epilogue
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Graceful Exit / Epilogue
Great stuff❤️ A bunch of random thoughts that do't connect in any way (So from me what's new😄) "Oh. I guess since Rich is OK with it, I'll have it and he'll take care of me." We said a lot of things about ML all of them accurate but what we didn't say enough about is her general cluelessness For most of the story ML was the most hated character but in one short appearance Uncle Doug became the worst character. He also never remembered the details of that fateful day. I guess that's a good thing. When I have vivid memories of my worst moments (obviously not as serious as Ed) I cringe with shame.But he still remembers that he probably is responsible for the killing so I hope the shrinks helped him and it seemed like they did. Just a thought since you have all the players later on in life some with multiple children how about Billy's now 18 year old child contacting him? If I remember right you're going on vacation .Enjoy❤️ -
Don't worry about posting new chapters concentrate on getting better.🙏I was told this by someone who said this worked for him so I'm just throwing this out there and you probably thought of this yourself. But perhaps acupuncture or acupressure?
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Where the hell did you come up with THAT ONE!!!!!
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What a coincidence I'll just be happening to be passing by tomorrow
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it seems that people are constantly finding priceless objects You're not kidding about that two example that pop up to mind are a guy at a garage sale saw a plain white album sleeve with a hand written Velvet Underground on it for 75 cents. Turns out it was a demo recording BEFORE they became well known that was never released and if fetched $155,000. Another was a guy who saw one old worn out painting for $4.00 and bought it also because he wanted to use the frame. When he took off the frame he found a copy of the Declaration of Independence and carbon dating determined that it was from that time and it was worth 2.42 million
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Like @drsawzall and @Lee Wilson I'm also wondering if Pa will win. “Because sometimes there are really creepy guys hanging around outside the ladies’ room and hitting on the women as they pass by. If there are more than one of us walking together, the creepy guys will usually leave us alone, especially after we all give them a piece of our minds.” I have always heard comments about women going to a public restroom together and comedians tell jokes about it. But after what what I read here it all makes sense.Did another woman tell you that @Bill W? And if we’re lucky, it will be a huge sum that will last for several lifetimes.” Well since they are going to live several lifetimes they are going to need it and that means @Bill W will have more stories to write oh wait.....That would mean @Bill W would have to live several lifetimes also.....Is there something you're not telling us @Bill W🤔
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Part of me wanted to leave an angry reaction because of Larry but that would be dissing @Altimexis and since this is autobiographical that wouldn't have been right. Larry is obviously academically smart being in this program but in all other ways he's a moron. I have no doubt that one day you’ll carry a computer around in your pocket, Well Dr. Ellis sure got that right I assume he's based on someone you know. So did this Professor also see these little computers being also part of a phone?
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[Memory, October, Sophomore Year] – Visceral Reaction
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, October, Sophomore Year] – Visceral Reaction
When this story started Alexander was easily the biggest douche of the three. After. This chapter he might be the least. Although he still had to say "Roman not Greek" Brad probably doesn't even know Lyn vomited because he was too busy looking at the two boobs showing the four boobs- 29 comments
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Baker got off cheap IMO. But I can imagine this will be the gift that keeps on giving for Baker everything being on Facebook an all. Maybe you already have but I see material for another story with these characters .Perhaps from Zack's POV. And speaking of another story It's not prom night, mum,' I protested. When I read that line I was thinking of them actually doing that and The Catholic school's reaction to it,
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The Aftermath, Or, Nelson Hears the Truth
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Aftermath, Or, Nelson Hears the Truth
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The Verdict and One More Problem
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Verdict and One More Problem
Well I was trying not to pile on while this one not as good as the other ones but here goes ML is also known as Mrs. Lincoln, Why? Everyone took a shot at her in the balcony -
Coffee with pods is the best but while the Keurig machines are affordable the price of pods is outrageous so it's drip for me also. BTW how do you make instant water? Just add water?🤔
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You just know there is going to be a scene later in the story with all three of them and voices will be raised and big mouth Carl will spill the beans about their encounter
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Perhaps Baker was only going to go to the party and keep his distance.But after seeing that text it will most likely spur him and his goons to do something at the party especially if there is some alcohol around. Not that Baker needed any encouragement to do something stupid
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The Verdict and One More Problem
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Verdict and One More Problem
You talked about the possibility of continuing Ed's story I could definitely see if after 6 months Ed goes back to school there will be some who think he got off too light. Did Claude have a younger sibling? "Just once, though, right?" "Right. [spit take} cough, cough choke. Sort of like a lawyer saying "Just a white lie" . She wants to have a threesome, well, actually a foursome." Well the more the Marie-er (No that wasn't misspelled)- 42 comments
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Whatever the hell Brad is thinking. it sure won't make it in a "How To Have A Happy Marraige" book
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I sort of see a situation where Jeff and Paul could be going to school together the coming fall🤞 On Monday we learned that the tour operator insisted dinner had been included and that we must be lying. Oh really! Someone should have insisted that a trip be taken back there and ask the Amish ladies themselves if they charged the students for dinner. Would the tour operator have call them liars? Interesting In didn't know about the Amish using modern power tools to make furniture. I see Werner von Braun got mentioned. You should have wrote it where he was the guest speaker. I wonder how many in the group would have called him a Nazi
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I second that.
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A Friendly? Welcome Back, and September Brings Trouble
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Friendly? Welcome Back, and September Brings Trouble
Nobody has said anything about the ML part of the chapter so here goes Nelson's father was a junior partner in one of the largest legal firms in the area. Well even if ML doesn't love Nelson he is still the most practical choice for her marry. -
A Friendly? Welcome Back, and September Brings Trouble
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Friendly? Welcome Back, and September Brings Trouble
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Judging by your stories.......It's just you😄
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A friend of mine son went to a Catholic HS and they knew he was gay and nothing happened from the administrators......Of course he was also the football team star quarterback....gotta have your priorities you know
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I think Davin said Colt has never stayed there make me wonder if Colt is oblivious to how the twins feel and how they apparently hate that house. Joel and the twins know what it's like to have parents that suck and Colt doesn't I bet he's unaware of how lucky he is
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not really being too into pizza at all, OMG what a weirdo Joel is (kidding) he IS right about the too much sauce and not enough toppings a lot of places are guilty of “I’m going to go to Faith’s,” Gavin said as he downed his second beer. I watched as he cleaned up the condensation ring before throwing everything away. “Why?” Davin asked as he stepped into Gavin’s path. “You were just over there.” “If you need an answer to that question, Dav, then I feel fucking sorry for you,” Gavin said as he winked and shouldered past him. Gavin had a similar comment in another chapter I think it's another clue about Davin “I can’t wait to get out of here,” Maybe with Joel when the time comes If Wes and I had tried that, he would have punched me and we would be on the ground, both of us trying to better the other, but that hadn’t happened in years. Not after I outgrew him and put on muscle. Since you said we. are not even at the halfway point yet could you add a flashback scene where Joel And Wes were younger and Joel kicks Wes ass for the first time?.....I know it probably doesn't fit the story but I think us readers would want to read that anyway😄
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