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I was going to try to work in a later chapter something about Desmond getting a piece of Ash

There's a show I haven't watch but it has been promoted a lot .TBS has a show called The Joe Schmoe show.The premise is the main guy thinks he's doing a reality show but its all fake and everybody is in on it What LiveFeed did sounds a lot like this

I'm going to guess here Wen had sex with Jamie and had visions of a relationship.When that didn't happen...........

I would say an album seller @Summerabbacat They first came here in the late 70's being a opening act thats the first time I saw them and I remember my friends and I liking them better then the headliners (who I don't remember😄) in 79 the Black in back album went #17 whthe BnB single was #47 and that patteren continued. I remember their highest charting single Moneytalks reached #23 and that came from a #2 album. They have like 5 songs that are in heavy rotation o classic rock stations. Interesting story about one song in the late nineties Our local baseball team The San Diego Padres had a pitcher who became a hall of famer he was the closer and he would appear in the last inning to close the game and make sure the teams wins. He took a page from WWE and used Hells Bells as his entrance music as a result that started getting played on classic rock stations

To expand on what @pvtguy said I get Tim being upset but he isn't pure in all this he participated in the not telling Tony thing.And how the hell was Tony suppose to know what Aaron's parents was going to do? BTW no mention of Aaron younger brother if they haven't seen each other all this time maybe Tony can find him

"OK. I can live with that." Oh really Mr. Logerman? How good of you for something that was YOUR fault. But someone once said 'The customer is always right"🙄 You were right there is a lot of foreshadowing here. I won't take a guess so you won't to rewrite anything

It would be too tempting to come back in the dark and piss on your grave. Don’t rest in peace.” Correct me if I'm wrong but that's the part you said would be relieving right?

Based on my last chapter comment about Lucas possibly being a racist well we find out Lucas uses the N word freely. Doesn't necessarily mean he is a racist when I was in HS living 5 miles away from the Mexican border our school has a lot of hispanics and a lot of Filipinos because of the Navy presence in town but very few African Americans(I think only two).I bring this up because my peers in private conversations used the N-word freely I'm sad to say but interestingly they rarely used the slurs pertaining to the other groups I mentioned.I bet they didn't think of themselves as racist and it's possible Lucas doesn't think so but at best it does show he's ignorant. “I just know something bad is going to happened,” lamented Neil. “I can just feel it.” I agree with @Cane23 but not in the way Neil thinks. I think something is going to happen if Lucas goes back to Uncle Boozer the Loser(You like that one @Lee Wilson?) It doesn’t work like that,” laughed her mother as she placed a plate of eggs and sausage before her. “Yuck!” exclaimed Emily. “I don’t want this. Where is my cereal?” Brett looked at his older sister’s breakfast in the plate and asked, “You don’t want that?” “Yuck,” she replied again. “No!” “Good,” giggled her brother as he took the plate and scooped its contents onto his plate. He sat beside Brett. After looking at the food on his plate, he turned to him and asked, “You want this?” Brett didn’t say anything as he stuffed some eggs into his mouth, picked up his fork and scooped Neil’s food onto his plate. “Thanks,” he said with a mouthful of food. How can you not like eggs and sausage? I hope Emily isn't becoming another Stacy from the other story in the making.Meanwhile Brett having three breakfasts he's another King Kong Bundy in the making

Let me check your keyboard....OH!!!! The O on your keyboard is very inconsistent no wonder it kept saying 100 instead of 1000 ,See you didn't mess up and you're not stupid.

I have to agree with the 100 soliders comment by @drpaladin. Perhaps they are really exceptional with their discipline and special abilities. It will be very interesting to hear all this happening from Ash point of view. I'm picturing after Ash succeeds🤞🙏 The first thing Desmond does is gives a big time kiss to Ash

Haven't started the chapter yet. Did they give a reason why no pain meds? That doesn't seem to make sense. I appreciate your efforts in writing this chapter. I hope you seeing the doctor tomorrow will turn out well. I have to ask were you on meds in previous chapters and stories?....It would certainly explain a lot😄

For some reason I looked through and I did not get a notification for the chapter .Maybe you have to follow the Story and not just the author perhaps. I'm in agreement with the reader who put an equal amount of blame on Tony and Aaron. I've had my heart broken but maybe not to the degree of Aaron.Tell you what if Aaron had returned Tony's communications then when Tony hit it big he would have asked to Aaron come to him he would have footed the bill

You think?🤔 It didn't hurt AC/DC or Men AT Work

Okay @Summerabbacat tell us which song it is. I can't see it either. You mentioned Air Supply and 1980 I remember 2 songs from that year from them .Every Women In The World would not make sense in regards to this story so I'm guessing All Out Of Love

Tune in?🤔.......Uh what channel is it on?

Sounds like this would be war in the worst case scenario. I guess the authorities would have to get involved. But first speak to Uncle Joe . Good thing Bobby was there

I remember this line from chapter one "It wasn't until many years later when their paths would cross again." That was in reference to Carlo so at the time I assumed Bart and Carlo would connect again but on the other hand Noah's name is in the title of the story so do I have the general idea right? Noah and Carlo will cause complications for Bart? 'Two Guys, Par Four.' How did you come up with that title?.......Part of your collection @Lee Wilson🤔

I once had to carry around a wad of cash because the guy who was doing some work for me would only take cash. That got me plenty nervous so I would be scared stiff if I was driving a van with all that treasure. So book three huh? I'm not asking for any spoilers but will we meet Devin and Mac's future child?

This is the first I heard of this I'm so glad GA is doing this and you are participatig

No wonder I never see drunks with blisters Drunks always pee on their hands

For some reason I missed the notification for chap 1. I assumed Matt being a well known author did a lot of traveling and Aaron would show up later but @CincyKris has me now wondering what happened. You mentioned this will post on Mom-Wed-Fri it is Sunday where I am so I guess it's Monday down Under. You should have added "For you Yanks who can't figure it out that means Sun-Tue-Thursday for you"

By the title of the chapter I'm guessing there is going to be another Noah in the story? 🤔 Or did I misinterpret? BTW I was familiar with the song. "Um, yeah. I guess putting them in a clear container with the 'standard' movies may not have been the best idea. Well it gave Noah a clue...that and the rainbow gay pride shirt Bart was wearing (joking of course)

He can still write the shortest epilogue on GA by writing "And his POS father mysteriously fell in a lake that was filled with Piranhas" (Alec would be rich enough to arrange that).

Can't add anything to this great chapter. An exceptionally hot young Latino man came in, sat at the bar, ordered a gin and tonic, and said to Andy, “You are one hot guy. I sure would like to get into your pants.” Before we found out that was Miss Fantasy I briefly thought iy might have been Rickey from your other story 😄

Well since you're the author I guess it's good that you're on his side