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    A Memo To Elon

    weinerdog commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in A Memo To Elon

    I have to admit I'm not smart enough to truly comprehend this.A memo to Elon made me think of Elon Musk and what you wrote was positive which does not make me think of Elon. I have decided recently not to follow politics as much because all the vitriol has turned me off. So I can only gather that this is a response to what he has said in the news. Do I got that right or am I off ?
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    Never Enough

    weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Never Enough

    presenting his tiny hole filled to the brim with cum. Filled to the brim?🤔 I have always associated that with coffee..... Gee thanks @Laura S. Fox I'll never think of coffee the same way again😄
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    Chapter Sixteen

    weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Sixteen

    “Oh, for gods’ sake,” Rory snapped. “Let me see your shoulder already.” I know you said this wasn't perfect but I'm curious unless I'm mistaken this is the first time in the story a phrase that used "God" while in previous statements the word "Cion" was used in place of where God would be used,Did you mean to write "Oh,for gods sake," or was that a mistake? So Kieran finally decides to consume what Rory consumed and then they get horny🤔....... Were Rory and Kieran the first ever to use viagra?
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    Chapter Sixteen

    weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Sixteen

    That would apply to me also the only difference is after seeing Rory naked and Rory and Kiernan having sex I would have forgotten all about the creature
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    Chapter 13

    weinerdog commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 13

    “That’s all that boy does. It’s no wonder you don’t want to stay there.”If there was ever any doubt that statement right there shows that Lucas Grandmother doesn't give a F about Lucas. Another thing to consider is all these references to his Uncle always being drunk has me worried that this is foreshowing of something very, very serious happening and none of it good
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    DM told Ken "Staring is gay but joining us is cool" Apparently it extends to Staring is gay but BJ's are cool.....Works for me.
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    I'm so sorry for what happened to Graham. I"m glad you're planning (or already did) a story on Olly. I assumed he was straight but the story didn't directly say one way or another. I san see a few possibilities like Olly is happily straight but then a guy stirs feeling he didn't realize he had . Or Olly is straight but his best mate turns out to be gay and Olly becomes an ally for the homophobia his friend is going through. But I'm betting you have a better idea then that. Was Chase based on someone you knew?If you did know a Chase I bet you can do a two or three chapter story on his life😄
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    Chapter 59 S2

    weinerdog commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 59 S2

    Sounds like Devin's limitations are going to constant source of aggravation for both Mac and Devin. Maybe Gramps and Pops will have some words of wisdom. “I requested the cleaning crew wipe down the seats and tables, as well as vacuum the carpet, because the passengers on our last flight were a little rowdy and made a mess. When that was first mentioned I was thinking metal rock band then they explained it was members of a fraternity....not much difference in the damage that can be done by drunk frat brothers and a metal band🤷‍♂️ “I’m going to advise the owners of this jet to only allow people to book flights for business related purposes.” Uh Captain Jack? Taking a metal band to their next gig IS a business related purpose ..just saying
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    Chapter Fifteen

    weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Fifteen

    And what kind of self inflicted suffering do you do before sex🤔
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    Will Jerry get a call from his mom asking "So Gerald how was your first day tell me everything" "Well Uh....uh"
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    Identical twins revealed in the last chapter?🤔.....Ok what soap did or do you write for😄 I'm making a recommendation right now
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    All good things must come to an end and THIS was definitely a good thing. Was surprised by Mike's call. There is still a lot of story to tell here I'm thinking
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    Chapter Fifteen

    weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Fifteen

    in case things went sideways. You do you mean in case?????? This is you writing this after all Rory went pale. “You’re not—gonna suck the venom out, are you?” Kieran snorted, rolling his eyes. “That’s not how it works.” There's a joke with the line "suck the venom out" Were you thinking of that joke when you wrote that? BTW Im disappointed you don't actually suck the venom out. Well you certainly put them through enough in this chapter. First Ewan and the Soldiers then the pack of dire wolves then the snake biting Rory and finally the bandits.That's four obstacles in 9,105 words. For all of you out there that's one obstacle every 2,275 and one quarter words. Boy I shudder to think what you would put them through in a 15,000 or 20,000 word chapter
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    I agree with @chris191070 when I think of gruesome I think of @Lee Wilson oh wait what I mean he's an expert on this no,no uh......Shut up @weinerdog
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    This is certainly different, you could have given me a million guesses and I wouldn't even have come close to something like this.Try to solve this one Columbo.
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    Prologue

    weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Prologue

    My first reaction is there is nothing that says they got the wrong guy or Jonathan didn't do it.So this is the first story of yours I've seen where the protagonist is not just flawed but truly despicable(from what I can tell at least) So this will be interesting from that standpoint
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    What happened? Only 2.587 words🤔 80%. of your chapter is missing ( Sorry couldn't resist😄)
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    Both families had a minor freak out when they went to Treetops.So I can imagine how they react when the BIG surprise happens
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    Nobody here knew about that. I guess you just fingered yourself
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    Thinking about Jim enjoying himself watching the guys .Odd thing the reaction now would boys will be boys but if he does this the next week after he turns 18 he could be brought up on charges🤔
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    I'm guessing the title of the next chapter has to deal with their assessment of Jerry. Just spoke with Ronyx he's wondering if he can borrow a few of your characters for his next story
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    Cutie doesn't know Romey is into Thayer I would think.Unless Romey is bi more heartbreak for her. Oak Island? There's a show on The History channel called The Curse of Oak Island any connection? I watch The History channel but not that show. If there is someone that looks like CO and Thayer on that show I'm watching it
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    Is THAT what you needed the lawyer for?
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    Many Other Boys

    weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Many Other Boys

    Which means unfortunately as soon as Jamie finds out about Cottontail's older brother😤
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    Something that I never thought of. A male gay marriage would not have a maid of honor I'm assuming. So why not Leandro and Olly be best men? One thing that wasn't covered in this chapter did Raffa continue riding a motorcycle? Hate to be downer but Gray's plan of a surprise marriage? Raffa's family be supportive their relationship but how do they feel about the conflict with the church? There are some Maverick priests and ex-priests who would do this.Maybe thats what they would want
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