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Oh I'm sure thar character named Krista was just a coincidence

The way Alexander house and Grandfather(What a piece of work) was portrayed explains a lot of why Alexander is like the way he is

Now wait just a damned minute. I’d sworn this wasn’t that story. Jeff, you absolute bastard, this wasn’t part of the plan!. Is breaking the third wall a trope? Very well done.Maybe you can take it farther by having Skylar say " Oh and I saw your chapter comment @Philippe" flash of teeth that should’ve been illegal in three states. That's the second time in this story you mentioned illegal in three states.What are these three states?🤔 I want to avoid them So this beach party there's a good chance Ryan and Gabriel are going to be shirtless.......I'm there you have to to tell us @Jeff Burton the time and place. Oh I won't be attending the party I'm going to find a good lookout spot....with a powerful telescope

Make it two cold pints and you're home free

Episcopalian is pretty much Catholic lite ....Or maybe Zero Sugar?Eh whatever you want to call it

You make a good point about the coach.Perhaps he's a moron also and thinks having a gay player no matter how good will mess up team chemistry. I'm sure @Krista will have some reason why the coach won't be able to get Joel back otherwise the story ends here😀

Yeah he did. And when his therapist checked out the chapter HE booked a therapist

even my sheets had been stripped from it. Part of me wonders if she had them burned because a heathen laid down on them. I know there is still more to know about Lisa but at the moment I dislike her more than I do Cindy from The Best Year. The Twins will notice Joel's baseball bag so it will be interesting to see where that leads to

In addition to everything else it seems like Elion and Holden will be a thing “When darkness rises, four hearts shall bind. Two Fae, two human; two anchored in shadow, two in light. Only through love’s consummation shall their bond fully awaken, allowing them to forge a prison of shadow from which the dark lord cannot escape.” “You know,” Ash murmured playfully, nuzzling Desmond’s temple, “this explains why we’ve all been so desperately drawn to each other lately. It’s destiny, Des. We’re supposed to save the world by making love. You see Thats why this happen The sacred ancient scriptures demanded it........Not because The author's a perv

Haven't Started reading yet but when I saw this WARNING: Incest I thought well gee WHO!!! can that be🤨🤔 Some readers may get incensed about that.(hee hee)

I remember Tony thinking that kid looked familiar. How old was Aaron's brother when he last saw him?

Hearst has a plan, I promise. He will be quite sneaky, too. I think I MAY know (Huge if) Either Angus or Wen won't be able to resist using the stuff Hearst already told them. That's where not signing the NDA will come in. I'm thinking of a few other details still to revealed that will have to happen for Angus and/or Wen to fall for the trap Hearst is apparently setting

BTW (This may make you want to have The Zamora's move) I was born In Columbus Ga. (well actually Ft .Benning hospital) but it says Columbus Georgia on my birth certificate

Yeah I had that thought also. Who ever it is he might have a story similar to Tony's

Damn I have to fold all I have is😇🐆🤨😊

"Are you with Webber yet?" "Just heading over there now." "I'll be sending a car over as well. Taylor was shot yesterday evening." "Dead?" "Yeah. It was likely a high-powered rifle, from a distance of two hundred yards or more. There wasn't much left of his head, but with woods across the street about that distance away, it's a good bet that's where the shot was fired from. Right after that exchange you had 3: The Killer but before I read that part I thought to my self 'AHA I know who the killer is...Leon or Stephen from the previous story

Saggio has had only two cases? That can't be right🤔 On Magnum P.I. they get a case every week usually involving the local police or FBI sometimes even the military where national security is at stake

“Those are cut so low my hip bones would need their own OnlyFans. How am I supposed to hide my boxers?” Kenzi gave me a look like I had just asked why rain was wet. “You don’t wear any. It's settled any business I own or manage I'm going to have Lex set the dress code oh sure there will be some employees I wouldn't want to see in Lex's dress code but there would be plenty more that I would want to see. My chosen saint is St. Michael the archangel same as Ryan...what does that say about me🤔

@Jeff Burton you talk about putting more tropes into this did you write that country song where the last verse which had nothing to do with the rest of song went like this "Well, I was drunk the day my mom got out of prison, And I went to pick her up in the rain, But before I could get to the station in my pickup truck, She got run over by a damned old train." The last verse made it a "perfect country song" because it has Mama, getting drunk, prison, a pickup truck and a railroad

Then they san sing Get along home Cindy,Cindy ....but oh they'll have to marry her someday ..forget it

"I don't think any of us are going to understand this well," Charlie said. Well Charlie now you know how I feel when I try to understand @Geron Kees

I think your writing a story rule book says you have to have a minimum number of a-holes in it.I think it's rule 2A. You got rid of all of them in the epilogue now you have to create brand new ones for book 2....Can't wait😄

There is one fairly gross "present" a character received for Christmas. Hopefully it won't make any of you sick. I was halfway through breakfast when I read that and said to myself "Oh great" but it wasn't so bad. WHAT I'm about to write is going to be more graphic ten what you feared what you wrote would be but I think it's a valid point Mel involuntarily gave three other residents of the Muscogee RYDC a Christmas present of his own. He spent an inordinate amount of time showering afterward. His ass also hurt for almost a week. Don and Sandy's presents from their fellow residents weren't quite as bad. Don discovered he didn't like the taste of cum. Sandy's gift would have been worthy of inclusion in a remake of Brian De Palma's 'Carrie.' However the dozen or so tampons tossed at Sandy were all used. One thing I think that should be stressed to School kids a whole lot more is what goes on at places like Muscogee RYDC like mentioned above. Sure the people in those places are stupid and arrogant enough to believe they will never get caught but if you show graphic depictions of what happens there and then end it with a statement "Are you sure you'll never get caught and end up in a place like this?" Along the same lines smugglers who transport their illegal drugs by having someone swallow a baggie before boarding a plane and then later pass it out.Authorities should post a PSA that show the stuff being passed out of someone's bare ass and then state "This is where the drugs you buy come from...are you sure you still want to take it?" I apologize if I was too gross

uh...........Isn't that enough🤔

I guess all these words you have in your head (and Skylar says) have been said to other people you interact with so of course you have this free time to write and read😄