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You have to be more specific .Saying dumb ass in this story is way to vague

I was also thinking about Logan making a move. If I remember right Logan is not in band so there will be a lot of times Toby is away so Logan might have opportunities. You mentioned in a chapter comment that Oliver's and Toby's self defense training will come into play. I hope it doesn't involve Logan going too far .To be fair there is nothing that suggests Logan is that kind of person I'm just trying to consider all the angles

A lot of this reminded me of when my Mom went to my Dad's work office to clean out his desk. I was only 4 at the time and we had gone there a number of times visiting before and I don't know why but when Mom opened the door I expected to see him there. a lot of thoughts go through your head when you do do something like that as I'm sure it did for Darren

I'm surprised Aedan hasn't gotten more grief at school over his dad. During basketball tryouts I was picturing Aedan getting fouled hard (by the same flag football guy?) The kiss would have been the perfect opportunity to tell Jake it was a birthday kiss. Happy Birthday

If you were in single digits I would get. But where I am our temperature is in double digits and so is yours see not much difference at all

This is looking more and more like Bethany may be bummed by the end of the story. Unless of course they like the idea of a thouple

I know I said next installment would be on Monday, but to get everything posted by Christmas, I might have to speed up the schedule. So let's pretend today is Monday. No complaint's here it's great to get as much of this story as we can. So today is Monday cool........ Oh shoot I was supposed pay back some money to somebody on Friday..ah such is life. Now on to read the chapter

A perfect chapter in so many ways but then then there was this ‘Yes, and we understand them fully. But you don’t need to worry. If anything happens and it looks like we need to get out, we have somewhere else where we can go to. And Rick knows where that is,’ added Tom, to which Helen nodded I take that as foreshadowing and the bad guys are going to find out where the boys are. And I don't think it will be a betrayal from Adam but they might have found out about Adam's connection to Rick and perhaps will trail him

So in other words........Trash EVERYTHING!!!!!!

Well if one had an attractive neighbor or two I bet they would vote hot.

In San Diego they say you pay for the weather yeah like all the business here are responsible for the weather. Okay fine but do they have to charge for every one degree Fahrenheit over 55?

You forgot Holy shOOT holy shOT Holy shMOELY Holy shED Holy shoD

No wonder the TV networks keep showing re-runs

We got to know a little more of the past from Alexander's interesting POV but we are at pretty much the same place. As I said before I would think it wouldn't be my place to tell Bella anything unless she was a good friend. But I MIGHT say something to Brad about what a POS he's being

Not to belabor the point a few other readers and myself Made last chapter but Just to be on the safe side up to this point, we had deliberately not told the boys where they would be going, as the fewer people who knew their whereabouts the happier Helen and I would be. So why did he tell Adam he was going to Newcastle? If it was me I wouldn't even tell my Mother not that she would spill the beans but she or anyone else could inadvertently give away a clue. Adam doesn't even have to be one of the bad guys ,what if he worried that Rick is fooling around? And Helen god bless her is also just as clueless. Rick told her about wanting to take Adam to meet the parents...she didn't bat an eye. Curious if Rick's sister will make an appearance

“She also wanted me to give you a kiss from her,” Five said with a mischievous grin. “But I don’t think I’m gonna.” Hey that gives me an idea I'm going to try that on somebody...hope it works.....If you stop hearing from me you'll know what happened

Well if you like the kind of story of someone losing their soulmate and their complicated way back from that then you'll love this. True that is not an unusual premise for a story on GA or anywhere else but this author's style of telling the story will appeal to you

Thank you for a great story, And I echo @Seraph statement about meeting again,Perhaps with Marvin POV and of course plenty of appearances from the others(Well except Dailan Mom)

Timothy and Jason’s family were spending Christmas somewhere in the Mediterranean on their yacht, there wasn’t much else for him to do in Glacier Bay anyway. Geez that's an interesting way to spend Christmas. “You couldn’t fill a thimble with your baseball knowledge,” Percy said dryly. “I’m the closer.” That could be interpreted in sooooo many ways You kept referring to Mario as a boy I guess he's old enough to drive a vehicle but how old is he? I wonder if Mario and his sister come back in the story at a later date, You're the author and you don't know?

I have to say synopsis has me interested .On to the story

For some reason I never thought about this before but people who's mom died while giving birth every birthday is a reminder of her death that has to be a quite an experience once they are old enough to ponder that. Loved the chapter it did have the feel of a final chapter but it's not so I can't wait to see what happens now.

WOW,WOW,WOW!!!! lot of stuff happening .Bunch of Random thoughts here hope I make sense The main concern I have none of them directly heard from Cliff yet who knows what Erin/Gary would do if cornered . Monica snapped. “Jesus… How the hell does anyone ever get anything done in this house!” She would never know she's never got anything done ever “Shaun. Listen. If the place is seriously abandoned, there might be some type of paper trail. Probate, medical transfers, estate changes, something. Find the local courthouse. Look up the property records.” Considering Sam has been a moron most of the story that was pretty damn smart then started sweeping candy bars, chips, and a family-sized pack of Oreos off the shelf.At the register, Dallas tossed up the mountain of snacks, the energy drinks, and added a pack of Camels for good measure. You know Dallas missed his calling as a nutritionist They even got a little playzone for them to smack each other with foam chairs or whatever.” Oh swell our future WWE'ers

Let me guess...another explosion?

I don't think the worse yet but here's something to consider along with @akascrubber comment ‘Taking a fugitive to our secret hideaway,’ I answered as I got to my feet and wandered down the almost empty carriage a little. I noticed Casey glance at Helen, but all she did was give him a wink. ‘I have no idea what you mean by that, but I’m sure you’ll explain it to me later,’ he countered. Adam IS asking questions about the case and Rick volunteered the info about a hideaway and why should Rick explain anything about the case to Adam? I hope this is what @drsawzall calls a red herring

As rough as that was at least Silas has a way to find out what happened where others wouldn't Are we going hear the conversation between the adults? I picture Grandma and Caleb's mom exchanging snarky comments