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Ms. Shelton idea has some merit the big question is how seriously will the school any school implement it. I don't know if Brenda dating The Vice-Principal will be a good thing or bad thing for Neil Come on, Guys,” said Owen as he stepped between them. “Cut out the gay shit. This is what started all this in the first place. If we had stood up to Lucas from jump street, maybe none of this would be happening now.” Owen must have read your chapter comment @Lee Wilson
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Note to self: Don't invite @mastershakeme to any parties
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Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
weinerdog commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 24 Game, Set, Match
I really thought The Ghost was going to be tougher to catch but it is the MOB!!!! “So, we’re going to have to detain you, Ms. Merz, Ethyl........Merz??? I didn't catch that before was that intentional @JLynch? So Thayer's emotions are all over the place after his encounter with Cutie? Simple solution Three-way with CO and Cutie Arms crossed, Shamus poked a finger against his lips, a smile beginning to form on his face. The boy is actually starting to enjoy this, he thought. The description of Ozzie’s encounters with Elliott became increasingly graphic. Perhaps he has some other stories to share, Shamus thought. Sounds like Shamus is going to use Ozzie interview for one of his chapters in his story.....Sort of like you just did...🤔 I ask again are you Sha..... Nevermind -
That could mean Rod and DM would be cousins I didn't know you wrote for soaps
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Nuestro primer año (Our first year)
weinerdog commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Nuestro primer año (Our first year)
It sure sounded like this was going to be the final chapter so glad there are a few more chapters. sss Shane (I forgot how many S's you used @Summerabbacat) got off cheap. In the US prisons sex among inmates sex offenders are the lowest form of life and they have a bad time in prison I assume it is the same in the prisons Down under. 'How much longer will I be stuck here in this dump?' While I get Raffa's frustrations perhaps that wasn't the best way to put that in front of nurses who will be tending to his needs I figured that would be an alternative Raffa might actually enjoy but refrained from saying that aloud. We already knew where we could get some cannabis-based products. Hmm🤔 my Doctor has prescribed for me pain gel for aches but perhaps I could I ask her being prescribed that......For medicinal purposes of course (I'm sure I'm not the first to say that) -
Rod's Mom just has to speak to DM's Aunt the only difference possibly is Uncle Asshole may not hate gays (I have a feeling that's a BIG if) “Fine. Go back to your faggot friends and hide behind your mother’s skirt. I’m leaving. There’s got to be a bar around here somewhere. What that moron is totally oblivious to is he's doing pretty much the same thing his Son did .Yeah I know Rod Jr.is a kid while he's an adult (legally but not in other ways)
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“Yes, she certainly knows how to make a good impression with her male customers,” Pops pointed out. Mac didn't mention how much they tipped her....Knowing Gramps and Pops probably more than what they paid for the meal. Purgatory Resort huh? Well most of us will not be good enough to go to Heaven but also most of us are not bad enough to go to hell so the majority of the customers are going to be going to Purgatory (In my case🤞) so IMHO brilliant marketing👍
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Chapter 23 Tomorrow (Today)
weinerdog commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 23 Tomorrow (Today)
I bet Thayer and CO activities are going to be interrupted yet again. The interview Shamus is going to have with Ozzie should be interesting to say the least -
Can The Viscount do mind control? That would explain Desmond and Scarlet (well maybe not Scarlet) And like an idiot, Lachlan continued to brush off his generals’ rising concerns of mind-control. Has anybody considered Lachlan is also brainwashed? In his case only a light rinse was needed. “Heimdall’s smart, too. Smarter than all of us put together, I’ll bet. If something’s going on, he probably already knows.” Well here's a thought......GO VISIT HEIMDALL
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Don't even start on the length. Now who would do that?
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Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
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Didn't they think of the curtain that goes all around the bed? (Come to think of it that might be one of the reasons for that)
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The weak passed and there were no more Indian visitors. Or so I thought. Bobby implied the Indians were not a threat but David said they "tried the door" no knocking so that's a sign of concern
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Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
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Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
Dumb question where did Rod get the liquor from? An obvious guess could be from one of the older kids but what if one of the older kids is one of Jake's older brother? Based on what was written I don't see a reason why Rod would drink so much. Perhaps Rod's dad is also physically abusive and Rod is thinking if he talks about this to him and tells him everything even about Jake Rod's dad might freak and say something like "You're afraid of a f--king f-----t? and start whaling on him. Just spec. -
Wolves are usually pack animals I guess this one was the runt and the rest left him behind when he got hurt.An animal will repay an act of kindness so I think Wolf will be a friend.I just hope no yahoos attempt to shoot it
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Chapter 22 That’s The Way She Goes
weinerdog commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 22 That’s The Way She Goes
Smokey seems to be about as incompetent as the Sheriff in Smokey and the Bandit. Romey just had an experience of a lifetime I can relate good for him. Now will Thayer freeze him out at work the next day? Thayer squeezed his eyes shut, an attempt to block out what was happening. Think of something else, be somewhere else, with someone else, he repeated over and over in his mind. Sounds like he was trying to get his boner to go down.Reminds me of a Simpson's episode I saw where Homer kept saying"Think unsexy thoughts" I have the perfect solution for that I'll anyone who has that problem a pic of me just wearing a thong that should quell any kind of horiness -
Chapter 22 That’s The Way She Goes
weinerdog commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 22 That’s The Way She Goes
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I hope Raffa gets to describe in court his experience in the hospital using the same words @Mark Ponyboy Peters used in this chapter.Raffa's mind racing every day he is not having any feelings in his legs etc. that should add some extra time to Animal's sentence(You know calling him Animal is an insult to animals) Could Mike get in trouble for t-boning Animal? That might sound like a stupid question but in the stupid U.S. he just might. There was once a case where a cab driver witnessed an elderly lady being mugged the cab driver gave chase using his vehicle ,The mugger unknowingly turned into a alley and the cab driver had him trapped the cab driver gradually inched his car toward the mugger until the mugger was pinned between the cab and the back wall of the alley guess what? The CAB DRIVER got in trouble.What would have happened in Australia?
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I get Jamie's thinking by using the reality show to show off his drumming chops maybe somebody from the industry might notice him. But has there been anyone who parlayed being on a reality show into being in a good band?🤔And since the show is emphasizing his negative qualities I don't see how this helps
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Rod Apologizes and Domenico Returns
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Rod Apologizes and Domenico Returns
Being Uncle Asshole is one thing but I hope he wouldn't become Uncle Wife beater if he finds out about the calls and DM being gay. "No vote, Gene?" "Well, I don't know him enough to have an opinion, Bill. Not voting is better than an uneducated no." Gene is a smart kid,I wish adults would take the same approach to voting like he does -
Chapter 10 - Forgiveness
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Forgiveness
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Lucas told Ned he's running away so you would think Ned would realize that Lucas has no time to come back to "kick his ass" in addition to needing "big-boy pants" Some reasoning ability would also be useful I tend to agree with @chris191070 about Alex/Sammy. Alex might have good intentions when it comes to his younger brother Jerry but he seems to think Gerry is gay and Neil is gay ....problem solved. They don't even know each other yet it's not that simple.
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The other real question is can @mastershakeme lower herself enough to try to be as stupid as Lachlan to try to write from his POV
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What will the Viscount have Scarlet do? “Seems like we’ve been neglecting our studies.” I guess they are going to have to do a lot of cramming...ooh bad choice of words
