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Thats what he probably is working on as we speak (type?)

Jamie has shown he's not the sharpest knife in the drawer at times. Was Angus posted was something he should have considered Not only me, but my brother and sister, too. Had forgotten about that .I hope you have plans for them to reconnect, as his Hawaiian shirt and flip-flops – which Hearst could see peeking out from under the desk Oh so thats where Thomas Magnum from Magnum P.I. went after he left Hawaii

I might also see if there was anything new and interesting on the Nifty story website – somehow Big Brother didn’t know what that site really contained – at least not yet! Man I was born too early however if that had been around when I was in HS and did what JJ did my grades would have THAT much worse then they were

I'm confused about Dallas. I'm not certain he means his warning as a threat. I suspect there's a backstory there that @Mark Ponyboy Peters hasn't told us yet but will in a future chapter. I think that Dallas wasn't with the goons at the library is a clue

I'm glad Ace told Leo about Taylor I hope Taylor gets in the frat

Here you go, you bastards! Bastards?????? Yeah like were the one's who had Kieran kidnapped Good chapter though

When I’m not wearing the deliciously boring uniform of the Catholic high school I attend I’m always dressed in black and wearing punk rock or heavy metal t-shirts. This will be interesting fodder for @SummerabbacatI can't wait😄 There’s a campsite with cabins and old railway carriages set up as dormitories just outside of the town. It’s all in a national park.’ Now why do I think JJ is going to be rooming with someone and something will happen?🤔

Preston may still be perceptive enough to notice how Bailey was reacting to Devin well actually he did but it would still be out there for Preston to come to the real conclusion.However if another life or death incident presents itself where it necessitates Devin switching from Bear to something else even if Preston doesn't see it it would have his gears turning

Although Clint wouldn't ever say anything he seems oblivious to the awkwardness (as well as being illegal) of an adult doing things with somebody underage. “A small scoop of vanilla ice cream will be ok,” I heard that chocolate is poison to a dog so to those who may not know this chocolate ice cream may not be OK She was walking beside Devin and sniffing his legs, and she kept looking up at him confused,Hmm that sounds familiar like someone might of said that in a previous chapter comment.Anybody remember that?🤔

Only SOME???🤔

OMG what have you done now @mastershakeme????? I had a whole lot of things to say about the chapter up to that point but now???🤔😲 I will admit it is a hell of a cliffhanger

To me it again proves something, lawyer jokes are not exaggerations (at least for some lawyers)

So kiss for breaking his sculpture? My next thought would be what would I have to break for.......never mind

This is getting better and better...no pressure😄 “So… can I sneak a grab at your ass?” Oh Look Gab a fly just landed on Sky's ass swat it.....Hey you're just helping a friend out right? Then Gabriel, in his endless surprises, produced a guitar from behind one of the loungers like some kind of beachside magician. OMG you went back to the 60's for that one was Frankie Avalon and Annette Funicello there? This is sort or related and unrelated at the same time. Another classic trope.One time Wayyyyy back when a friend and Were watching a movie on HBO Tango and Cash when they were in prison my friend said " Watch they are going to use the prison scene as an excuse to show their bare asses.Sure enough a few scenes later there's Stallone and Kurt Russell walking naked to the shower bare backsides facing the camera😄

Normally I would be neutral BUT if I had to choose it would be Ryan after being with Madison the guy deserves a break Of course @Jeff Burton the solution is simple .....A throuple😲

I noticed one of the tags for this says autobiography is this referring to you @CLJobe?

We appreciate the effort you ARE putting in this @Geron Kees so just concentrate on getting better. Chi Baradee, focused on the conversation, suddenly smiled. "You people tend to allow humor into your conversations in the strangest of places!" Gee I can't think of anybody around here who does that.....

To add to that I would like to see where this left off to be told from Zack's perspective

I said this in another story chapter comments but to be able to able to write three stories that are so different one in particular and do it at the same level of excellence is amazing. Jamie's father (I forget him name at the moment but I won't waste my time looking back to find it) interesting how he places so much value on education when he takes action that even the most uneducated person wouldn't take. It's like he had no idea how his BS criminal complaints could turn around and bite him on the ass. Luckily Detective Jenson is a competent, uncorrupt detective.He even knew more than Jamie that Luca would be there for him.

Oh I bet @Laura S. Fox will just LOVE!!!!! hearing that

There is still a lot of story to tell here .As others have mentioned the shelter for homeless teen is obvious but there's other stuff like what were the details about Zack's situation ? Is he also gay? And geez Aaron and Zack's parents pretty much let TWO sons go by the wayside.I think they may have surpassed The Monolith as the worst charcter(s) in the story.Some legal action HAS to be taken against them. That was what it felt like for me when I first spotted Thompsonville from the air as I flew down from Brisbane. I knew the place, but it still felt quite daunting, That leaves me an opening to tell one of my stupid comments I love to say in a when we are in a town we never been in "Well I wouldn't have known the old place" And somebody would then say "You've never been here" And then I would say "That's why I wouldn't have known it".....BOOOOO

Oh I'm sure thar character named Krista was just a coincidence

The way Alexander house and Grandfather(What a piece of work) was portrayed explains a lot of why Alexander is like the way he is

Now wait just a damned minute. I’d sworn this wasn’t that story. Jeff, you absolute bastard, this wasn’t part of the plan!. Is breaking the third wall a trope? Very well done.Maybe you can take it farther by having Skylar say " Oh and I saw your chapter comment @Philippe" flash of teeth that should’ve been illegal in three states. That's the second time in this story you mentioned illegal in three states.What are these three states?🤔 I want to avoid them So this beach party there's a good chance Ryan and Gabriel are going to be shirtless.......I'm there you have to to tell us @Jeff Burton the time and place. Oh I won't be attending the party I'm going to find a good lookout spot....with a powerful telescope

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