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I love that Cyn has a family group again, and one more supportive than his original one. He even has other former prey species to bond with. I'm surprised there were only two bunnies --- cause, well you know.
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No! We don't want to break their bond! I loved the tenderness that Essell and Garjah showed in the first part of the chapter. This council is practically bipolar! They can't decide whether they want to be rude, scary, nice, funny, helpful. This is a long dinner!
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My sister and I shared the camper and A-frame house. When we progressed on to Barbies, we still used them even though it made the Barbies look like amazons! I can't believe I just now picked up on the doctor names! I loved that show. I'm hoping we get closure on the dirty judge and any other child molesters involved with Thing One and Thing Two.
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I loved it! That chapter took twice as long to read because I had to keep wiping my eyes and blowing my nose! I was a little worried about the injuries to Bruce and Kyle, but I had confidence in you. Also, I had Weebles and Little People as a kid, yes I'm that old. Great chapter and thanks for the memories.
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Another great chapter! I wondered if there was something more than the death of a "coworker" triggering such a big change of living. The death of a partner has such a profound effect on people. I hope that Craig doesn't let James go because he is afraid to take a chance.
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What a great and fun chapter! I'm happy that Cyn finally has a real home and family now. But I think we could use some were-spiders to back up our new enforcer. I wouldn't go against them, would you?
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Chapter 22: Irishman Incoming
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 22: Irishman Incoming
I fully agree with my co-readers that an Irish / Texas alliance sounds good. I think that our favorite pack needs some cushion from Steurm, and some allies. Steurm would be the type to take advantage while Vincent is occupied with Stefan. -
This chapter had a foreboding feel to it. I'm worried about their future.
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I'm loving this gentle, romantic story featuring real people around my age! Reading about young folks can be fun and new (I'm reading your Pern stories right now and loving them), but I can relate to these characters and there are considerably fewer stories with middle aged love interests. It doesn't hurt that I love home improvement shows and old rustic buildings.
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Essell will be responsible for bringing pasta to the Four Arms! Just wait till they discover bacon and doughnuts!
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Chapter 21: Phony People
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 21: Phony People
Stuerm seems like the type to throw money and might at any problem and assume that will fix it. He will hopefully under-estimate our heroes as too young and inexperienced. I like how the relationship is developing between Cyrus and Kaplan. -
At least your vacations didn't involve saving the universe! Or have they???? Maybe your wild, vivid, technicolor imagination has some basis in reality! Welcome back.
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This is a beautiful, heartbreaking, teerjerking ending to this series. You must read the other clockwise stories first. Romance at it's best!
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This was beautiful. Thank you so much.
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I don't usually comment on many-year-old stories when I read them, but this one made me smile. And it made me hungry, I really want a honey roasted pecan nut muffin now!
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Ready for the pack meeting or ready for fun???? I bet you know my vote!
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To say this is a complicated romance is an understatement! Jonah will make you laugh, may make you cry, will certainly frustrate you! You'll also be cheering for him. Don't pick your team too quickly amongst his suitors or you may regret it! I'm glad I found this now, so I could read in a couple sittings, it is addictive.
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This was pleasantly unexpected! It's hard to be yourself when you are nervous and intimidated, hopefully Essell will calm down now. Although knowing our neurotic hero, learning he is "important" will just have the opposite effect!
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This is a wonderful story about two men who struggle to communicate how much they love each other. Will they get their HEA? You better read on! You won't regret it.
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I understand your explanation for why the parents acted and reacted the way they did, and I don't hold Kyle or Megan in any less esteem for loving and forgiving them, but I have little empathy or respect for them. I keep coming back to all the people that went through the adoption process the right way and to them letting the fictional politician get away with molesting young girls. There is honest ignorance and there is willful, self-serving ignorance. I believe Kyle's parents fall into the latter category. I also wanted to add that I am loving this story. A romance that feels realistic and steamy, a good mystery, cute dogs, and a story that invites debate and interaction between it's readers! You hit a home run!
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While I'm no longer ready to have the parents hauled to jail, I still think they got off easy. They were so desperate for children (and selfishly refused to wait it out like hundreds of thousands of other hopeful adopters of babies, or adopt older children) that they overlooked obvious warning signs of illegality. They agreed to stay quiet and lie to their families to get their babies. Were they really ok with a politician getting away with (and presumably still) molesting young girls? These parents aren't evil, they loved and still love Kyle and Megan. But these are the type of people that allowed that monster to operate for years. I think there is a saying something to the effect of "all it takes to allow evil to flourish is good people looking the other way."
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I loved this series and the daily morning commentary. Tomorrow will seem a little empty. Working from the bottom seems to be a safer way to make changes that will last. These boys have a lot of knowledge and experience in their young brains. I wonder what I would do in their situation?
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I wonder what went wrong. It didn't seem like they changed anything big enough to cause this. I can't believe tomorrow's chapter is the end! I'm going to miss this.
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I'm certainly not an expert, but I have watched an awful lot of crime shows on tv. If a death occurs in the committing of a crime (like kidnapping, rape, and false imprisonment), the offender can be charged with homicide, even without a body. If she bled to death because of the problematic delivery, that would still be homicide (murder would be hard to prove). Even if he didn't get that many more years, it would almost certainly keep him in prison for a lot longer.
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I was half excited the last 2 chapters would be posted this morning and half dreading the end. Do we know if there are any other dkstories books to be re-released?
