CincyKris
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I had flashbacks to my 7-year life in corporate culture. "cheerleader for change’ - and yes, that was one of the vomit-inducing catchphrases used within head office" This made me laugh out loud! Office Space was a documentary, not a comedy. I have worked for a family owned independent garden center for 16 years and I will never go back to cubicle hell! I love the direction this story is going.
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I can't believe one of them actually has a conscience. The run felt free and jubilant. Unless they accept a cheetah into the pack, Cyn will be the fastest (and would still be faster on a longer run). That has to be empowering to a prey shifter. And finally, I'm very happy for Arric and Kieran. I'm also happy the bunnies didn't get trampled.
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As foreign and antiquated as Eloise's attitude seems to us "normal" people, this has been status quo for the wives of the noble, rich, and famous for centuries. That doesn't make it any more right than slavery or domestic violence. I suppose if you married for status, money, and things rather than for love or companionship, this "stick your head in the sand" solution she suggests makes sense. Not that Patrick's current responses are any healthier. Of course, the solution we reasonable readers have suggested would not make for as good a story!
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Patrick is spiralling. He at least realizes this, he's just not ready to let go. I don't know if telling Chloe will give him a much needed reality check or a partner in crime. I really really want him to read the script. I want to read the script.
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Wow, Essell stood up to the council. We finally know what name they call themselves. Timok may be the weasel we thought he was.
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Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
Getting Steurm out of the way would certainly make things smoother for both Mesker Park and for our boys. I'm happy that Vincent is doing well with his training. Is it my imagination or did this chapter feel like it was setting the stage for future drama?- 20 comments
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Lets see....... Is Michael the black haired guy? He is an actor, so probably not the writer. I believe that chapter 3 "the Patrick poisons Ford" chapter stated that none of the 3 harem boys were living in the condo, this one is. So, is this boy #4? Who is the brother? Was he also adopted as a baby? Twin? if you couldn't tell, I love this story. I might be a little obsessed.
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I'm loving the direction this is taking! I read the beginning summary and was not expecting a sweet romance. The script is adding a deliciously creepy layer. Patrick was taking control of his situation, albeit slightly psychotic control, now he is thrown off-kilter. My vote on the writer is the black-haired cheatee.
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Aww you made tear up! Thank you.
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I don't know if I can add a lot to the other fine reviews. Very well written and entertaining story. The characters are flawed and interesting, the story is engaging and addictive.
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Wonderful ending! I can see these two making it work. In my head Tom is going through multiple boyfriends, none of them quite meeting his particular standards or them leaving him, frustrated by his doucheyness. Kat never was quite the same after that embarrassing fall on the runway. The plastic surgeon couldn't get nose quite right. I think she signed on for a third rate reality show. Drew is still pining away after Joel.😁
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Loved the love! Still hoping Kat goes to Paris and falls on the runway! Breaks her nose maybe.
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The great thing about reading a completed story is I don't have to wait!
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Please tell me that Kat gets a brutal take down!
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Tough chapter to read. Both of them are being self-destructive idiots.
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That crumbling wall I mentioned in a previous chapter is laying all over the ground. He doesn't have the courage to build it back up yet.
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Very satisfying chapter! A glimpse of the future? I have a feeling the real drama is right around the corner.
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I'm happy that Andrew went after Aubrey. He's going to have a hard time convincing Aubrey that he's ready for a committed relationship.
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Well that did not end well! At least Tom's and Kat's duplicity is now known. Let's hope Aubrey doesn't run off to Iran!
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I think Andrew thought of his "player" lifestyle as harmless and without serious consequences. He's starting to look at it differently. I still think that Drew is the insider source, of course we now know that it is Kat's source, not Aubrey's. I look forward to all the drama leading to Tom's downfall (hopefully).
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I personally agree with Aubrey's beliefs, but my family are Christians. I'm perfectly ok with them believing differently from me. I don't want anyone telling me what to believe, why on earth would I tell anyone else to not believe.
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I knew I hated them for a reason! I agree that Kat's bro got his heart broken by Andrew. Doesn't excuse Kat for what she's doing. A good sibling would try to build him back up instead of trashing his crush. She's a total user and hypocrite.
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I think we got to know Aubrey a lot more in this chapter. Right now he seems like a very wobbly stone wall. Seemingly well put-together at a glance, but a small push away from falling apart. The thing is, the only way to properly fix it is to knock it down and rebuild! He needs to get rid of the bad influences (Tom and Kat), but I don't think he's quite ready for that yet.
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I'm guessing it's Drew also. Andrew is immature and has a one-track mind. I mean "delicate dance of courtship", really???? Aubrey is too mature, but also has a one-track mind -- every prominent gay man must be a good role model. That's not fair, look at how many famous straight athletes are man whores! Both need to compromise on their extreme values or we won't have a good romance to read!
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Yes! More days (and weekends) like this and he'll be more likely to make the big jump.
