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So, Michael is the author of the screenplay. Have we met Hunter yet? Michael and Patrick come from opposite sides of society but are in similar positions. How much fun would it be if this was the same P.I.? Hating Ford. Can't wait for his viewpoint!
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Always Stuff to be Learned
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Always Stuff to be Learned
I have to agree with the others, it feels like there was some intentional drugging for behavior control. I hope this is not an extremely accurate representation of private group homes in England. I know that Americans (and probably any large overpopulated country) have issues with the foster system, but most kids in group homes would go to public school and have access to popular culture. I would assume this is the same for state run homes in England. I'm loving this gripping story! -
The dinner from hell is finally over! Time for dessert!
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Just had a thought reading Danners' comment -- could Ford be the author?
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I realize we are still collecting clues this early in the story, rather than discovering answers, but you keeping us on our toes! I have so many pieces of the puzzle floating around in my head already and now I have the surreal dream. Looking forward to reading more of the script and hearing from the P.I.
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I had flashbacks to my 7-year life in corporate culture. "cheerleader for change’ - and yes, that was one of the vomit-inducing catchphrases used within head office" This made me laugh out loud! Office Space was a documentary, not a comedy. I have worked for a family owned independent garden center for 16 years and I will never go back to cubicle hell! I love the direction this story is going.
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I can't believe one of them actually has a conscience. The run felt free and jubilant. Unless they accept a cheetah into the pack, Cyn will be the fastest (and would still be faster on a longer run). That has to be empowering to a prey shifter. And finally, I'm very happy for Arric and Kieran. I'm also happy the bunnies didn't get trampled.
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As foreign and antiquated as Eloise's attitude seems to us "normal" people, this has been status quo for the wives of the noble, rich, and famous for centuries. That doesn't make it any more right than slavery or domestic violence. I suppose if you married for status, money, and things rather than for love or companionship, this "stick your head in the sand" solution she suggests makes sense. Not that Patrick's current responses are any healthier. Of course, the solution we reasonable readers have suggested would not make for as good a story!
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Patrick is spiralling. He at least realizes this, he's just not ready to let go. I don't know if telling Chloe will give him a much needed reality check or a partner in crime. I really really want him to read the script. I want to read the script.
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Wow, Essell stood up to the council. We finally know what name they call themselves. Timok may be the weasel we thought he was.
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Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
Getting Steurm out of the way would certainly make things smoother for both Mesker Park and for our boys. I'm happy that Vincent is doing well with his training. Is it my imagination or did this chapter feel like it was setting the stage for future drama?- 20 comments
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Lets see....... Is Michael the black haired guy? He is an actor, so probably not the writer. I believe that chapter 3 "the Patrick poisons Ford" chapter stated that none of the 3 harem boys were living in the condo, this one is. So, is this boy #4? Who is the brother? Was he also adopted as a baby? Twin? if you couldn't tell, I love this story. I might be a little obsessed.
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I'm loving the direction this is taking! I read the beginning summary and was not expecting a sweet romance. The script is adding a deliciously creepy layer. Patrick was taking control of his situation, albeit slightly psychotic control, now he is thrown off-kilter. My vote on the writer is the black-haired cheatee.
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Aww you made tear up! Thank you.
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I don't know if I can add a lot to the other fine reviews. Very well written and entertaining story. The characters are flawed and interesting, the story is engaging and addictive.
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Wonderful ending! I can see these two making it work. In my head Tom is going through multiple boyfriends, none of them quite meeting his particular standards or them leaving him, frustrated by his doucheyness. Kat never was quite the same after that embarrassing fall on the runway. The plastic surgeon couldn't get nose quite right. I think she signed on for a third rate reality show. Drew is still pining away after Joel.😁
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Loved the love! Still hoping Kat goes to Paris and falls on the runway! Breaks her nose maybe.
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The great thing about reading a completed story is I don't have to wait!
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Please tell me that Kat gets a brutal take down!
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Tough chapter to read. Both of them are being self-destructive idiots.
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That crumbling wall I mentioned in a previous chapter is laying all over the ground. He doesn't have the courage to build it back up yet.
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Very satisfying chapter! A glimpse of the future? I have a feeling the real drama is right around the corner.
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I'm happy that Andrew went after Aubrey. He's going to have a hard time convincing Aubrey that he's ready for a committed relationship.
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Well that did not end well! At least Tom's and Kat's duplicity is now known. Let's hope Aubrey doesn't run off to Iran!
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I think Andrew thought of his "player" lifestyle as harmless and without serious consequences. He's starting to look at it differently. I still think that Drew is the insider source, of course we now know that it is Kat's source, not Aubrey's. I look forward to all the drama leading to Tom's downfall (hopefully).
