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Now the story sets off in earnest ..Kyle Brennan...I like your vibe already ....Old Morgan needs to lighten up a bit ..and you are just the remedy for that..😉... I can't wait to see the chaos they are going to unleash along the way to Bristol...Kyle's non-stop yapping and Morgan's weary disposition....that's definitely a mismatch made in heaven😉🤣.

And someone dorky who never shuts up 🤣

Since the first paragraph of this tale...had been waiting for Julian to fight back.To extricate himself from his cruel,selfish ,undeserving association called family..Am glad he finally does it...He finally decides to own himself. I like that he finally accepts that he never mattered at all...That he was just a place holder..Now he gets to be himself. That scene between Dean and Julian was just so beautifully solemn. Those two lads love each other unconditionally..That Dean chooses to end his friendship with Nathan shows how much Julian means to him. That right there is friendship goals🤣...A pity Deans bats for the other team. The most important part of this chapter for me is the last portion of.it...It shows us how each of these characters evolve through time... These boys grow into men.Dean,Aiden,Nathan,Julian all have evolved from when we first saw them..I had to read that closing part four times...It was so heart wrenching to experience Julian's metamorphosis. He is literally a phoenix rising from the ashes in that last scene ...Now I can say that the story has actually began...all the chapters before were the preamble🤣... Thank you @vanalas for this gem of a chapter .

Are we a pair of sociopaths🤣...because I am also waiting for just desserts to happen ...

This is yet another intriguing entry..and it's just chapter 2..I get a feeling we are in for a large dose of family drama and secrets...Dare I say it's going to be a blast .

What is worse than a conniption?..For I wager that is what the fervent Daisy will get...That Michael is a rebel without a cause...at 14..That is scary. Like you I also somewhat expected a two-spirit bomb in there... For some reason, I don't think Skye is that horrible...I think his vanity is some sort of armour for him..

Yeah ..that's quite right..😉

To borrow words from Darth Vader Isendar Vargan chocked on his ambition🤣. That being said...I bet Jolanda must be rueing the day she sought out the darkness ...She realised in this chapter that she is merely a gnat in the grand scheme...I loved it. I long for he day when all the characters will converge and start taking the war to the forces of dark. they could really use a win...

It better be after ones of their 'fights'..when they are all sweaty and cooling down..

If I was to rate a chapter out of 10....This is a solid 10...It delivered everything and more ...The action, the emotional drama...the politics ..It was beautiful... In this chapter...that interaction between Madame Xue and Peter was Gold standard writing...I was not just reading ..I was experiencing the full gamut of emotions Peter was ...the hope and fear ....If it was tv ..that interaction would be Emmy award worthy.... The Dr. Wu and Andrew interaction was something else too....Andrew has never felt so vulnerable before. It must be scary to hear that your cognition has been impaired by someone ...that is the worst defilement one can be subjected to... The last part of the chapter was equal parts scary and thrilling for me...Will is scary...When he give the confirmation for the initiation of Project Samson...I was left,Like General Bradley, dumbstruck..

Oh I do have some more colourful words would use in reference to him...but Momma raised me never to be too mean...She stressed moderation😂😂... Thank God indeed...they only exist on page ..I don't know if I would refrain from physical abuse....Robert just reminds me of my Dad somewhat...the shamelessness and all

Bad bad boy😂...Especially since you rank among the authors whose works are hard or almost almost to fore casts..

Oh dearie....your analyses are the second best thing after @CasualWanderer82 updates when it comes to his work... Fore casts are for the lazy and faint hearted..

I did call him spineless and stupid and you tried to defend him..haha... That man is just an embarrassment to literary fathers

One can only hope too...what really hit home for me was craven Robert's reaction to seeing Julian come home 'unexpectedly' and his attempt to divert Julian...That for me was the final blow ..

That portion of the chapter is epic..movie magic vibes all around. I have waited to see Andrew and Enrico physically interacting with each other(action wise) since the first moment Enrico made his appearance in Carter's Breach .....You just made this lad's day sunnier😂😂 Thank you!

This family doesn't deserve Julian ....Julian needs to completely extricate himself from this situation....I have mentioned it before ...second chances are not infinite..What the Hayes men do to Julian in this chapter is intolerable cruelty .... Arthur and Aiden ...those two don't have any scruples...Robert on the other hand displays a craven abdication of his fatherly duty, he fails to do the right thing and in the end does prove that he is Arthur Hayes Spawn after all .In failing to stand up for Julian when it comes to Nathan to appease Aiden shows that like Arthur, Julian doesn't matter because he doesn't carry their blood. Any other story would be the moment when Julian finally wakes up but knowing @vanalas and his flair for wringing as much despair as possible from the protagonists...we are going to have to wait for that moment to come.😂 Thank you for the update ..

@austinbiguy..I never meant it as reprimand ...am sorry if it seemed as such ..I only meant ,though was vague, that the arcs resolved as they were meant to ..

That is his forte after all😂

Both have flair for a monologue...Hannibal would talk to you about his choice cuts of meat without you knowing you are to be the cut on the menu.....Enrico would talk to you about the consequences of making bad decisions....and then he would snap your neck for good measure after...He does after all loathe guns..

Especially when served by a dapper Mexican...who loathes barbarity😂

Looks Like you have a side Sir 😂 😜

More like ...he is fucked and he knows it😂....Even Smith was left sputtering like an idiot ..at least from that phone call.. Good morning...

Another supernatural tinged story...count me in already! I like Michael....he is the wilder version of Kane.. That is going to be a lot of fun..reading about these two brothers I mean

You and @vanalas ought to start a club...He also knows how to wring as much despair as he can out of his characters....Chapter after chapter see his protagonists put through the wringer...hihi