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This is one of those chapters where a comment is like desecration...Like one of those beautiful moments that you need not explain but feel.. Thank you @LittleBuddhaTW...this was a superb offering!

Okay...I take back my word ..Sarah McLeod needs to be defenestrated ...no more diplomacy . I rarely have, if ever ,any negative word concerning Andrew but this time I feel I have ....Ned being taken is failure on their part ...They knew he was a sitting duck and yet didn't take any measures to secure him...especially after last chapter when they knew who Sarah is. I know Mr.Lydon is working his magic on page as we speak but damn if I was not frustrated with Andrew and his team!

If this was primetime tv...I would name this episode ..The unraveling...We are given front seat to Lyn's psychic dissonance and I for one have to admit it was tough to witness.. The ambivalence Lyn displays during that sexual encounter with Alexander has to rank among the best pieces of writing in this story so far... @Cane23 aptly stated that the sex was about control and tenderness from Alexander's perspective..I like to believe that for Lyn it's about trying to regain some semblance of control over his emotions at that particular moment..He has literally had his belief system upended when he witnesses the blow job between Luke and Brad. So he is running on 'emotional fumes' so to speak ....I equated his new found 'dominance' with Alexander, braving through the pain and discomfort of taking Alexander's more than considerable weiner as a form of self-flagellation ..Like he is punishing himself for the wasted time ,effort and the shame . That being said it was nice to see our Alexander get a win albeit a temporary one...

Consider me shocked!🤣🤣....now the plot can kick off properly....all other twists have been teasers🤣🤣

Oh God!...what a way to wake up! The best moment was the expression on General Gallagher's face 🤣🤣

Well ..this time we have a grandpa from hell

When does pretence become real ?.This story attempts to answer that .We are introduced to our protagonists Zayn Monroe and River Flores who strike a bargain to pretend to be a couple for a family reunion. What follows is beautiful chaos as we they navigate family dynamics. one snark after another. The story is beautifully set up with good pacing, well written characters and witty dialogue. A highly recommended good read piece !

Good to see you update .. I hope you recover soon... Thanks !

That is not Will's MO...that's the current US Senate Minority 's forte 🤣

May I get a front seat, please?😂

Oh my!...Ivas suddenly gets agency...that is marvelous...It's always nice when you add these new characters who are interesting!

God...the day thr Order is eviscerated will be my happiest day!...That outfit is just too powerful ..they have reach even in the US government... You once said Andrew and Will have been a bit calm....now is the time for the two to let loose.....Silas Abernathy cannot keep winning....at the rate it's going am going to get stress😂😂

I would be more than pissed too....

If this were a lottery @drsawzall would be rightly smiling...when you mentioned wanting to hear a theory...he put one forth ...that it was a set up ...I started thinking it was after reading the last chapter involving Cash and Haven...but then was like that was too meta, too neat for you to spring on us😂...I have to say you are unapologetically bold @Inkognito...😂😂 Thank you!.

Oh Killian....you never cease to amaze me...his penchant for placing himself in unsavoury situations is becoming taxing! That last scene is bad...Both Noah and Killian are to blame for whatever happens next!....I always wonder how Kane ,who is younger , always manages to come off as more social savvy and mature than Killian.

Oh Dr...am hoping for the same too....that man is so nasty he needs to be pegged back a bit ....Unfortunately I don't think it's the case....Jake seems too immersed in the charm of Haven to think of something like that ..

When you put it like that....I am going to go crazy waiting for the update notification😂

They should have known better..

I love me fantasy....it had been a while since you had served us a fantasy dish...Am so looking forward to it....The pacing and dialogue and so far are good...Looking toward to getting more.. Thank you!

Brig.Gen Gallagher just climbed up the shit list..the funny thing is he is scared of Andrew Carter in the brief interaction we get up there..

He was already showing Small nether region energy.. he was after all just recruited .😂

What a mess!...Haven discovers that he is not as that big a deal as he thought of himself.

It's on days like this, that I wish it was possible to release two chapters at a time....That was one hell of a chapter!..The Order means business ...and the CSIS seem Ill equiped to handle them.....I almost wish Enrico was around😂😂😂

We do have a knack of self-sabotage..don't we?

I know it seems so...but here in Uganda it happens...cliques are frowned up seriously😂..