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Personally ..am waiting for your deep analysis😆

We will just have to anxiously wait till next week or sooner when the new chapter drops😉😆

Can't wait....you know I live for the 'Laura S Fox has updated a new chapter' notifications ...on this story and the Sunday offering you give us 😉😉

Oh Maestro ..you just gone and done it again!😉...I think @Laura S. Fox will give us a glimpse into Alexander's life...Right now we have got one into Lyn's background...am sure soon we will have a front seat to Alexander's too ...He cannot be that flawless or well adjusted as Lyn has made us believe

Looks like I have someone who shares the same sentiments towards Alan..haha

The philosophers are talking😆

You stepped up your game long time ago...the moment you hit the last full stop on Brother-in-Awe😆😆

Haha....that is unlike you!😆😆...Subtlety is more your thing😉

Great chapter indeed...but can't help but feel there is a storm coming. Well am Team Jordan after all😆 but I feel like it was a bad idea for these two fellas to sleep together again when they had the Brandi situation ..That is like papering over the cracks. I understand that being young means making mistakes but this is one big mess @KKirk.I am just excited to see how you are going to resolve it. Thank you for the update!

No way....why must I be Leo😆....why can't I be my name sake Sam

Let's form a hunting party and go after that beast😆

I was hesitant to say that too....that's why been relentlessly praying to the Literary Diety ..and if my prayer doesn't get answered ...I have promised to literally go after @CasualWanderer82 too 😜😆....One can only take much before they cannot anymore😆

Oh cannot wait to see how the evolution comes around!...hope it's an organic one😜😜

My oh my. This chapter is a case study of how looks can be deceiving!..I felt sorry for Lyn..Having to pretend to be something you are not just to fit must be terribly taxing on one's psyche!...and to think he had to do that for four years..eh...just realized this chapter just given me insight on the first chapter ....Lyn is a textbook example of Overcompensating ..eh Thanks for the update!

Whoa...two updates back to back after so long is really nice...Thank you! I find myself hoping our Simon is nearby ...anxiously gonna wait for the next chapter update

Duh...am one of your ardent followers...you would not punish us like that..eh ..I would literally enter the story and do the work ..for the good of mankind literally!😜

Oh no...oh no..This is bad ..Really bad!..I know it's a story @CasualWanderer82...but I felt a tear drop after reading this chapter..For the harmony and serenity that is going to be broken by this unrelenting passion!..Even writing this is painful. I prayed to the Literary Diety that you would not go there ..but alas my 'prayer' was to no avail😏.When I got the notification that you had updated was pretty wary of opening it because somehow I knew you were going to drop a clanger on us.. I have somewhat recognized a pattern in your writing.😀..Whenever you update promptly ,usually one of the chapters is emotionally draining ..I shudder to think about the next chapter because I know you are going to throw us off the precipice. That is the power of your writing!..Am going to one day make a wish...to the Diety that one day you will write a story that is just two people falling in love..organically 😜😃😆..I know convention is anathema to you😜...but a lad can wish..eh As always..thank you for this update!.

Ian...is like that persistent cold that never goes away...only he is the virulent kind...That leaves despair and destruction behind . Am just happy Galex is back on....anything else they will overcome..😂. Thank you for the update!

This was a really warm and beautiful chapter...you have captured physiotherapy in such a way that it doesn't seem clinical.Like reading it could feel the connection that Josh has with these people who are helping him on way to recovery. I almost forgot was reading about a teenager who is in recovery. Thank you!

Indeed....drama is the spice of life in your literary universe 😂

You have no idea how much I want those witches to be pegged down..😂....they remind of the witches of the Originals TV show...always scheming for something ..

Looks like he knows he is losing Cal...Remember the previous chapter when he didn't seem that happy that Cal was excited about his date with Jordan. I am inclined to believe that subconsciously Cal has been moving on since he already knew he couldn't be with Alan in real relationship.

Great chemistry does not always equate to a good relationship....Alan's actions in this chapter are those of someone who is running scared because he knows he fucked up.Now he is just realising that he could have lost Calvin..Not to mention he has never been honest from the beginning of their sexual relationship.

I think he is just knowledge crazy....haha

You are not predictable .haha...It's just that some of us have read almost all your body of work and it's always a given that the Main characters always have shit awaiting them each time they are happy