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Do You Ever Dream Of Cat Boys?
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Do You Ever Dream Of Cat Boys?
Will Matty play the cat boy again and get caught? Rusty is still hiding his feelings, may need to address them after the game. -
Chapter 3: A triangle none of them even realizes is there.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: A triangle none of them even realizes is there.
Wow, Elena is worse than a wicked stepmother! David and Ben finally connect and it’s amazing, but will they find each other again? Or is Jim going to get in there and be hurt and then act like his mother towards Ben? Such intrigue. -
Seems like maybe Keenan should have taken off his clothes for the ritual too. If he’s smoldering now. Maybe next time😉
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Mini me is very persistent. And Ash still needs to learn why she is named after him…
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Chapter 8 - Dozi & Agrell
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Dozi & Agrell
This story gets more interesting. Here I was thinking that since all 3 types lived in this city that they had some understanding to get along with their neighbors, but apparently that’s not the case. -
I love both of your stories, and this I’d definitely a fun way to collaborate. Good to know that there is more coming in Elijah’s world. Kage as his guardian continuing is awesome. He was so loved. Interesting that the Fae king is the reason for the Guardians to come back into existence is interesting. looking forward to more.
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Great story. The jump in time for the epilogue was a little surprise. Glad that they are all getting along and stayed together and improved each other’s lives. Happy ending was very nice.
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Fantastic chapter, the travelers got back safely, and then an amazing beach birthday party. So far we’re just getting Joel’s perspective on sexuality on the ship. It would be great if it was shared by everyone. They are quite diverse in makeup and not had any issues so far. Love this story.
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Merry Christmas, with a Cliffie… hopefully everyone is safe and whatever exploded does not cause too much damage.
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Good for Alex standing up to defend his boyfriend! Hopefully Karl can help, and then maybe some therapy and if Ed gets a job he will be more secure in himself?
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Wow, an amazing time getting closer. It’s sad that Rusty’s background is makin* him struggle so much inside. Maybe they will talk more at breakfast, and hopefully Rusty asks Matty to come to his game.
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Nikio and the Salamander - Journey's End
VBlew commented on Refugium's story chapter in Nikio and the Salamander - Journey's End
Great ending to a very interesting story. -
That was a crazy end to what had been a great time out. Bill needs some anger management it seems
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Fun story, from an interesting perspective. Bruce became the center of attention again, for a bit.
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What an awesome Christmas Eve for these two. Great short story!
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The extended family is growing. It seems like the house was similar to Richie’s original, but heavily modified for their needs, especially Armand’s studio and workshop.
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The first group of humans to travel this fast! They went several light years in this day of setting out the sentries. Good thing they have Joel with 5he big picture thinking to get the lander converted. Athena can build the harpies while they are in hibernation. Now for a fun birthday at the “beach”
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Doctor Rusty, At Your Service
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Doctor Rusty, At Your Service
Loved Dr Rusty/Master…. Matty kept up with whatever the Dr ordered. Rusty is so hooked😊- 29 comments
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Great chapter with a cliffhanger ending.
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The Epic of Gilgamesh in a Nutshell
VBlew commented on Refugium's story chapter in The Epic of Gilgamesh in a Nutshell
I had heard the name Gilgamesh before, but not known of the history. Beautiful interpretation. It is interesting how mythical stories have similar themes, especially the flood story. -
Fun chapter. Grandpa got some time with his grandson and all of the men got a date night.
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Matty was so sure that Ray and Hannah had something on him he was distracted during their game playing. Rusty being angry that his father is coming to see him play is getting to him. Hopefully the slumber party will let him open up to Matty more. They are good for each other. And Maddox is so supportive of his friends.
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Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
VBlew commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
A great story about this time of year, and helping your friends and neighbors who may be struggling. The men have big hearts and were quite generous with their winnings. -
Nothing Clears the Head Like a Walk in the Moonlight
VBlew commented on garfwiz's story chapter in Nothing Clears the Head Like a Walk in the Moonlight
Thanks for a long chapter. Lots of things happening here. The walk as wolves and howling really seemed to help the clan in FL. Hopefully in the next chapter Tala can reverse the spell on Matthew’s father and the Alpha. Who is this mysterious “rancher”. I think the comment about it being Faolan is a red herring, but I could be wrong. -
Ash wants to be the one in charge in bed, but is still enjoying Cove’s leading the action. And still is feeling guilty over not being able to commit to their relationship in the past. Cove is taking this slow as he still loves Ash. Baby steps.
