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What a wonderful surprise from James, getting married with all of those family and friends around. Edwin didn’t seem to have time to talk about turning the island over to the people living there, and it would be nice to see the perpetrators of the yacht bombings apprehended.
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Chapter 1: Christmases I’ll Always Remember
VBlew commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Christmases I’ll Always Remember
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Sad way he had to loose his mom and stepdad. The books seem important. Wondering if there is more to the Princess Bride than he is aware of? The other book titles make sense given this dark threat. Was his stepdad a fraternity member too?
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Ed knows, and Alex thinks it was a dream… playing cat and mouse. Hopefully some honesty and conversation coming.
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Rusty is so hooked. Matty is so quick on his feet, mental acrobatics just to keep up with Rusty’s questions. Love that he has contacts for his cat outfit, adds to the mystery.
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So with that ending of this chapter, Corbin is back to having to make a choice between Mike and Pete…. Grrrr. It really seemed like it was going to be Mike…. The storyteller is really keeping the reader guessing!
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So happy for her, this was a good chapter, detailing what someone would need to go through in those days to even apprentice. I’m wondering if everything is digital today or if they are still using film for some or most movie theaters.
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Can’t believe that I had not recommended this story before. Done. I love this world and can’t wait for the next story.
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Very interesting encounter in the Stairwell. Maybe they both need this friendship more than they know.
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Great chapter, loving the interplay of Kavan and Gideon, they keep dancing around each other, and the role playing during their “dinner” was interesting. Congratulations to Ry on his promotion.
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Straight Vs. Stray (Cat)
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Straight Vs. Stray (Cat)
Fun tutoring session by Rusty, Matty just needed a little push to have that alternate personality be the aggressor….and cock blocking Rusty was icing on the cake.- 38 comments
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Great chapter, Rafe made up for his temper with his friends, and the competition starts, with a win for the home team.
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That is some progress if they could talk for 3 hours.
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Alex is on a mission, and it does not seem like he will back down, and Ed does need a friend, even if it is a teenager.
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I like the official upgrade in James’ status to boyfriend. And the idea of him working on a project. Is the Trimaran going to be on the Lake in Geneva, or have ocean access?
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What a surprising turn of events. Crazy things people will do. At least everyone was safe. Hopefully the yacht was well insured, and he gets an even better one, and the culprits are caught this time.
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Very interesting story so far. These unseen creatures are something new to the were stories I’ve read before, and the mystical weapons are interesting too. Looking forward to this story.
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The first suspects would be the Chinese, but it could easily be anyone not liking the development that they are doing.
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Master Caspian's Collection
VBlew commented on Aditus's story chapter in Master Caspian's Collection
This was a very interesting development, and now we know the reason for the title. Mysteries, what will having all of the stones for the mirror do? Sounds like a power trip, and hopefully for good and not evil purposes. There is something about Guideon being so interested in Kavan, and now having to train together will bring it out. -
Where Did Rusty Parker Sleep Last Night?
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Where Did Rusty Parker Sleep Last Night?
Matty’s response should be not “dudes” just one dude, and let Rusty squirm some more….😏 -
Excellent story, great explanation for what caused the flood. And the idea for what could be done to reverse the damage of clear cutting forest. Glad that the both were ok after recovering in the hospital. And a nice happy ending.
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Wow, what a chapter, and a huge cliffhanger. Another example of climate change in action? Or a dream?
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This seems like there is some redemption for Corbin. I do question if this is Mike’s last attempt before he returns to his reality, and leaves Corbin? Hiding in the room having sex is one thing. Having an open relationship is something entirely different. Then there is Pete who he should have been honest with. Looking forward to more.
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Chapter 7- Some Assembly Required
VBlew commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 7- Some Assembly Required
Cliffie! Loved this story. Nice segue to the reminisce. Looking forward to where you take this story. -
Their discussion about dressing up as girls was interesting, the wake up about being focused on helping to do something about climate change was good too. I agree abut them being honest and forthright about being transparent with each other was good too.
