VBlew
-
Posts
4,801 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by VBlew
-
Fun short story, perfect for this holiday.
- 25 comments
-
- 10
-
-
-
Chapter 18 - Wedding Vows and Speeches
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Wedding Vows and Speeches
The vows, and then the toasts are simply amazing, the reflection of the lives well lived. Beautiful. -
Sometimes the flashback help get people to just hang on to the hope for a better future. Great chapter.
-
Friends rally around for support, Mickey’s mother is awesome, At least Drew has his sister on his side, and the reply about the financial manipulation was dead on. They can make their own way in the world as needed. Hopefully the paparazzi will back off soon. It was like someone “Dave” tipped them off about Mickey.
-
Interesting chapter. I especially liked the trip to the beach with Cior. Hard to imagine how tall the waves must be to make that much noise, and the perspective that they are somehow held back by the moon. Also that the moon has so much pull that it open the seabed for 10 days. That is a huge low tide… Cior was very interested in the relationship between Callum and Rym. Maybe he would like a mate relationship like that for himself? The journey begins.
-
The sparrow conversation, put some fear in Emmet, hopefully he will be able to explain why he ran later on… they guys did seem to be having a good day even it a little stilted in the conversation. You can see how much Finley is trying.
-
Finally the truth is out. Dave is a jerk for putting that confidential material out in public, but maybe it will be a help in the end. Will be interesting to see what the family’s response will be. Fortunately Drew is an adult and can’t be forced to conversion therapy program. With Mickey beside him, they will get through this.
-
Looking forward to the story within this world you are building.
-
Good background on the territory and terrain, and a little history of the political landscape.
-
Good for Pawn. Now maybe he’ll get some respect.
-
Mickey could only put up with so much belligerent behavior from Dave, then when he was attacked fought back and knocked Dave out, which he deserved. Then that soul opening talk with Drew on the bench, wow. Letting out all of the trauma he faced and how he got the scars. The request of Drew to not drink, was special, then the reaction seen by the neighbor emptying out his liquor supply, and crying. Drew was really touched. Seems like Drew has fallen in love, and is slowly coming to terms with that.
-
Interesting story of how Reginald came to have this divine gift. Does he still have the amulet? Or did it just unlock this ability? He is loved by Alexander and Omar.
-
Loved the visit by Gordy. Had to verbalize the words to get it understood. Interesting way to write the Scottish accent.
-
Sure, Lucas you’re in control. With Ethan having the key to your manhood. I think you have that backwards… very interesting story.
-
Awesome beginning to a new book in this series. Making friends with the neighbors, and being wary of potential enemies… It seems that the other Ark survivors abandoned ship just to survive. Hopefully with Ark II support they will be able to do much more. Wondering if Their fist visits will be in person or with the body doubles, as a precaution?
-
This was an awesome chapter, up to the last sentence cliff hanger…..
-
If only Zdain and Josel would talk to each other a little more they might figure out the liked each other as more than friends, then this blackmail would end….
-
Chapter 15 - Stars in the Sky
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Stars in the Sky
Wow, this chapter covered a lot of time, from when the children were born to when they are young adults. It’s a real shame that Robby’s family missed out on all of the love this family had to share. The growth and planning a legacy is awesome. -
Another great chapter. Drew just being himself. Mickey was all worried about something that was a non issue for Drew. Nate had very good advice. Looking forward to more soon….
-
This seems like a gateway drug to something more. Ethan is baiting him by taking away the “program” what will Lucas do now that he has felt this new strength?
-
So now that Drew knows Mickey could be interested in him, it’s time to step up his game. Daisy gave her approval!
-
The conversations with the parents went well. The scene at the gay bar was interesting, if you run into someone you know, then it is likely they are gay too, or very accepting.
-
Chapter 12 - Shadows and Light
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Shadows and Light
True love supports you where you are. Manny is doing this for Robby, they will make it through together. -
Another great breakfast and conversation. I’m thinking that someone is making assumptions about the other’s sexuality without talking about it with them….. it may not be what he thinks.
