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Great chapter, looking forward to the wedding.
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What an amazing story of two people looking for love, and finding it in a very remote place. Loved the two spirit part. It’s such a shame that the old was were so repressed by the new religion. I traveled to Alaska a few years ago and learning that the children had been taken from their homes to be educated with no sense of their ancestors histories was very disturbing. They now have projects to recapture some of that, but a lot of damage was done.
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Some good development. The boys are getting along, but maybe not progressing as fast as one wants. Opening up is sometimes difficult.
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I like the way your continuing on with brothers raising brothers. That Brandon and Rhett relationship is different from the prior version too. Looking forward to where you take this. The whole family is so loving and support each other, that makes this so good, even with the challenges they encounter.
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That was an extremely emotional chapter. That kind of abuse to deal with while raising children and protecting them from it must have been very hard. Glad they are back together and things move along better in their lives.
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Interesting chapter. I wonder if Jacob is not really imaginary. And something is going on with Annie. Overall a good weekend with the kids so far.
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It’s crazy how much abuse this family has endured. They continue to love and support each other in such a loving way.
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So angry at Abner, who at hind of deranged person does something like that. The phone call must have gone through… glad the caught him before anything else happened. Here is to a better future.
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Yes!!! Finally. It seems like Jason came to terms with his fears. And Devyn is enraptured with the Love he feels from his mate. Sweet dreams boys.
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So I’m wondering if this aberration with the kids powers are drugs or someone psychically attacking them. This is a mystery that needs to be solved quickly. Glad John is much more positive in this chapter.
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I agree with weinerdog there has to be another way to access that power. Blue lasers, wonder if they would freeze things?
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Alec needs to start communicating with Finn or he’s goin to loose out again. Finn is still is into him. I really hope they can make some progress.
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Very interesting that the school promotes fighting as sport, and they let that happen in areas outside the normal sparring venues… or was that just for show to get Rafe more interested in the school? Andre does need to learn some skills it seems, even if just to defend himself.
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There was a great progress in this chapter, they really do seem to be communicating at the end. Curious to see what this restart will be
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Now Is Always The Perfect Time
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Now Is Always The Perfect Time
That last bit about Jonathan’s family being all about appearances says a lot about where his thinking has been. He still needs to see the light about Maddox really wanting to be in an out and proud relationship with him. Hopefully that happens soon. And to realize that they are both up to being versatile rather than strictly top and bottom…- 29 comments
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Glad everyone is healing and out of the hospital. Sounds like it should be a relaxing time away. Hopefully we’re sone with Janet. But there will probably be some more drama in the future.
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The title made me think that the hope was for a relationship with Finn…. And there still may be. They need to talk. But the getting his Mother out of his head first seem a better approach. Now to see where things go from here.
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Good job Jason, getting the music right for Devyn to enjoy himself. Now back to Jason’s house for some more good times!
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Very interesting that, connection that Black did not know was possible. Was it something to do with is seeming agent upgrade?
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This sounds like it will be a great partnership for all of them, and keep LM from possibly getting sued or hurt in the future.
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Great chapter. Now that the know how each other feels, it’s going to be a wild weekend!
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Act I: Lost Property (part IV)
VBlew commented on buildercub's story chapter in Act I: Lost Property (part IV)
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Loving this tickle family. The Woodstock to go with Snoopy was adorable. That’s a good sign for their compatibility.
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It has been a long time coming for Jason to fully accept Devyn for his mate completely. It is worrying that the wolf neighbors are being unfriendly.
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Thanks for this story. I was thinking that Mithras was aime kind of advanced AI for a while, but in the end some other form of higher powered sentient being, maybe even the visible interface of the living planet itself. Great ending where there is new life and acceptance of the boys, and the reunion of Ned and Peter to live out their lives.
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