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  1. VBlew
    Amazing chapter. “Buddy” thawing some. The carnival was a fun time. I geared up at the Dad part too. Being the responsible older brother raising his sister, has been a hard go, but does seem to be working.
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    Wet 'n Wild

    VBlew commented on Evan S.'s story chapter in Wet 'n Wild

    This was a fun game, and getting naked helped them win. Carter wants Hunter in the house but for his own purposes. Seems like Hunter is out and Carter is not… possibly seeing the unlocked secret room is Will and Benji’s way into the frat.
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    Homebound

    VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Homebound

    Back safely in the US. Randy and Kent haven’t communicated about what they are wanting to do on leave… spending some quality alone time would seem advisable.
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    What game is Elliot going to play with poor Danny, who was just trying to avoid going to war….
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    Flynn is still free for now, and Poitr is angry with him, but coming anyway.
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    Chapter 1

    VBlew commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Truth.
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    Weather Work

    VBlew commented on Kevin Snell's story chapter in Weather Work

    Evan is dealing with his past relationship, and trying not to compare the messaging from Cian as the same. They are growing together.
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    Chapter 16

    VBlew commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 16

    The whole preparation and the feast with the gift giving and dancing was wonderful. Daniel felt comfortable enough to share his honest feelings, and it was accepted, with the knowing that Sam already has Julluan’s heart.
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    Faking It

    VBlew commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Faking It

    Sakis was really gentle leading Marcus down the path of his first real sexual encounter.
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    Loved the characters introductions. Looking forward to the story.
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    Chapter 25

    VBlew commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 25

    They at least had time alone to be fully with each other before forced to be separated. Hopefully they will be able to reunite in the not to distant future.
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    Help found in unexpected places is moving them closer to safety.
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    Outsider

    VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Outsider

    I was thinking the bump was to pickpocket something but it seems that photo would have to have been a target. Did someone see him put it there? The mathematics book is very interesting. The list Ali is working on should hopefully narrow down the potential killers.
  14. VBlew
    Zafiro is poetry in motion when he is fighting.
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    Chapter 49

    VBlew commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 49

    So going back to Brazil without letting anyone know? And getting caught by whoever these mysterious human like beings are? Seemed like some kind of hive activity going on. The humorous banter was fun throughout. Az’gannil clearly wanted to clear his feelings about Q with Jacob. I was hoping he possibly has some intel on how to wake Q.
  16. VBlew
    Damn, it’s going to be hard for Marcus to make a choice. They are both so good to him in different ways.
  17. VBlew
    Tense moment there but both newly promoted officers did what was necessary to keep everybody alive.
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    Chapter 38

    VBlew commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 38

    Tissues needed for this chapter. A great amount of things covered. The difference with the season in US where it’s normally very cold at Christmas always makes me think harder. Like I would like to be there instead of my home. It has been a great year for Levi and all of his new family. There is a lot of love there.
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    Chapter 3 Ash

    VBlew commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 3 Ash

    Jack seems like he was tricked twice. I sense some retribution coming possibly.
  20. VBlew
    Tweak did not accept the new alternate reality. And did what he could return to the man he loves.
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    Love the pacing of this and the different parties all coming together to possibly give them a chance to get out alive.
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    Chapter 27

    VBlew commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 27

    Tuesday will be a telling day. Brant and Sky’s conversation was really good. They are both having feelings for Hector, and know they want to be strong in their own relationship. After the sex scene they do need to have a conversation with all three of them about the future.
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    Chapter 19

    VBlew commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Miles explained the intense emotions he was dealing with and the resurrection of memories about his sister who was being abused by their sperm donor… then the crossed abandonment issues. That was a lot, and Troy seemed to understand, it did give him a perspective he didn’t have and possibly a way to forgive, we don’t know his side yet. Their texting is pretty mild and friendly. Looking forward to more.
  24. VBlew
    This was a great chapter testing these guys for leadership potential. How about something in engineering with the Chief shirtless?
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    The Last Road

    VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Last Road

    There is a future, but what does it look like for these guys, they could have a conversation about what they would like the shape of it to be.
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