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Very intriguing. Looking forward to this story.
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Interesting approach to PT. That tech would save people a ton of time for recovery. He got a lot of points for that interaction…
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So, in this interesting trial he reaches to find the center and there is a young version of his boss on earth??? Truly a hero’s journey you are making this story into.
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So what was Pembroke trying to do with the incense? Build up an immunity? Maybe it was something that he found that allowed the rest of his pack to be killed. Now both Alphas have a reason to kill this Cassandra. Will they work together? So curious about Jack’s reading. Now they have a little of a plan of action. Surprise would be a good thing in their approach to the clairvoyant…
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Great short story. Brad is moving through life, seems like a nice guy, just unlucky with the guys he connected with. Hopefully Carl gets through his wild oats phase and realizes he can have a great relationship with Brad. Wesley was a prick for the way he left Carl.
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The mystery continues and just gets deeper. Wonderful chapter. The biometric device is interesting. Whose DNA will it be tied to? If it’s Joshua, will he remember the code to unlock it? Or the other inside him who is hiding? The biological definition of Chimera seems to be right in line with Joshua and the other that he is….
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Love the tension building between the bonded pairs. Their love of each other and I believe this consummation will make them even more powerful. Elion is a piece of pious work. Desmond is finally growing some thicker skin. Hopefully this book in the archives will give them the knowledge they need and once the souls are returned to their rightful bodies, that will change the war.
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Lyn really is dense… I’ve been saying all along that Alexander was in love with him from the beginning, but Lyn was so focused on Brad that he couldn’t see it….
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The baby is born and father and son are healthy. Elijah thinks coming in and taking the baby is forcing Noah back to the place he grew up, I wouldn’t call it home, because that would be with Jace. Jace who was cruel, and now broken, does get a little taste of what he had been putting Noah through….
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Beautiful bonding away from the office in a beachside destination.
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Chapter 6: How Do You Feel?
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 6: How Do You Feel?
Very interesting conversation with the psychiatrist. Why did he fall out of a window, was it the other Shawn? Or was he pushed? And, if so, is that person still out there after him? He has the AI to help him navigate this new world, college awaits. -
Joel gets to see what a loving supportive family is like. Cody seems like he may be an ally or possibly gay himself. Which would make a lot of sense for his loving parents. The confrontation with Joel’s mother said it all, she doesn’t want him in her house… that hate had to come from someone in her past. Very glad Joel and Cody will be able to see each other. Now back to the ranch…
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Love these guys Maverick and Randy are a great match. And not leaving Jules out even if he is married to Orion’s group. The businesses are going well, having more successful people to help guide the is very useful. Getting engaged is a perfect next step.
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Such a beautiful time with a loving caring family of Jon’s they are accepted and welcomed.
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This secret group is still slightly disturbing, and the further implication of having a tattoo of something that you don’t fully understand prior to initiation means you have to live with that decision for a long time.
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Love the scene on the beach, writing things in the sand to have the ocean wash it away is therapeutic. What had Jasper done? Or was this Chris stirring the pot?
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This interaction between Jamie and Hears was interesting. Jamie is still all pissed off and thinking Hearst is part of the plot to destroy his career.. when that is so far from the truth… they both have self image issues. Hopefully the full truth comes out and they can reconcile, but it may be hard.
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Interesting description of 5he difference in biology in this world, and the gamification with the AI. Do others here have AI? What else is making Shawn special, besides penis size, and apparently pheromones that allow him to influence people?
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Loved the songs, and the singing of Sam and Tim to their loves… the fireworks were a bonus. It did seem like Tony was aiming for the house to tell Aaron, but just not yet…
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Lucien keeps messing up getting a recording of the acts…. Daniel waking up and discovering them was an interesting twist. With what was being said at the time on this recording, there is not much evidence of Bruno wanting Daniel to be the object of his affection. Twisted as that is.
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He Thought It Was Just Bingo...
VBlew commented on Rafy's story chapter in He Thought It Was Just Bingo...
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Running towards a train wreck… telling Jack he was his best friend and that he loved him was huge. The disappointment coming when Jack finds out Noah was invited home for the weekend and he wasn’t is going to be a mess.
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Act III - It's The Hard-Knock Life
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - It's The Hard-Knock Life
All of your list of titles hold lots of possibilities. I vote for all of them 😏 This chapter shows the decrepit state the witches coven is in. Masked by a mirage that Ray was able to pierce. Unfortunately this is not where Gabriel is. So it’s curious as to why he was guided here? Was it to gain the knowledge of how weak the witches really are? And it seems that maybe the vampires were on another mission and not following Ray and Renato? They escape, onward to find Gabriel, and Renato has an idea of where to look now…. -
Jason just isn’t feeling it
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Jason just isn’t feeling it
Seem like we’ve now been introduced to all of the main characters. Loving the story so far.
