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Ain is actually paying a lot of attention to Fenn’s mood and went out of his way to publicly announce their relationship. Ain is so supportive of Fenn helping him with his insecurities.
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Better to have the infection cut out than loose the leg. He didn’t call for Sakis during any of that ordeal…
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They are growing to know each other more. Damian now seems protective of Elian.
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That was a nice surprise twist, they are on the mend. And Jasper is now thinking of having children…
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One conversation two different interpretations. Very fun chapter.
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Fenn is so self-conscious of his powers and the stigma that goes with them. if they ever catch her again, she needs to be gagged. Using peoples prejudice to get her out of the troublesome situation was not a good thing.
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Chapter 1 - Confession
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Confession
This is a great start to the new relationship with Alex. Took him long enough to agree. Hopefully going back home and discussing the past with his and Jamie’s family will provide some more healing. -
Maybe the caught assassin was not lying and they didn’t have a soundsmith officially. Could they be a rogue going around stealing other’s powers? Glad Ain broached the topic of his affection for Fenn, that worked out well.
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It was good to see Irma help Slav through his jealousy at Rory‘s friend being around. And it’s very good that they had an open discussion about it. It seems like Gavin and Jason‘s proposal for Rory to live with them. Will generate some good discussion.
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Very nice chapter and a rather good discussion on transitioning.
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Accepted, Absolutely Unprepared
VBlew commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Accepted, Absolutely Unprepared
Very interesting motivation technique Rick. -
Ain finally confessed his feelings, hopefully he’ll remember this when he’s sober. The palace was infiltrated and the spy tried to get Fenn off by himself, possibly to kill him, fortunately Ain caught him. Then Fenn came to Ain’s rescue. Palace security is not good or has been compromised.
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Lyn, you crazy man. Just leaving the ring in the roses with a note? Alexander chased him down to get asked in person. They had both been mopey being apart. Glad they finally got together emotionally.
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So Nathaniel had poisoned himself in order to kill Antonio. Hopefully there is a solution to get him to live close by.
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Confronting Protective Lies
VBlew commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Confronting Protective Lies
Wow, Carter is so much worse than he came across before. Did he do the same to Jordan? -
Ain not remembering his most important conversation with Fenn is disappointing. It is very good of him to call out the people on their prejudice against shadowforgers. Fenn is a good guy. Just didn’t want the attention like Ain likes. Knowing he was blackmailed into being a General, is that still something the Herald uses to manipulate him?
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Excellent work, Elian being totally honest, may have broken through. Damian must have been lurking and following, to have rescued Elian from getting caught outside his designated area.
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The dinner with the 4 boys was surreal. The evidence that Tarquin had planted, then came to the jail to gloat about was just plain vile. Hopefully the security cameras caught it, and the attorney can get him out. Poor Orel’s devastation was miserable to see. An how did Tarquin have video of Orel if he was with Garrett?
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Who gave Graves the intel to track them down? Russians? That could be a big problem for a US security officer…
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Jasper is a badass, defending his sister and niece. Then accidentally gets high.
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Interesting first days on base, meeting new friends and getting on the baseball team. Several interesting prospects for future fun…
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Finally Ain shared his burden with Fenn, and told him how he felt about him, even drunk, it was the truth. Fenn was right, the same thing Ain had told him about using his powers and hurting the cat, it was an accident, and did save many others from being killed.
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Interesting decision. Did Nathaniel innately know something? That this turning would be bad for Antonio? Or was he just so angry for being lied to that he made a really bad decision?
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Oh, the clone of Q, Marco was interesting. The ending with the shadow was interesting.. great cliffhanger. Did it transport him to another dimension? “We are you, you are of Us” is this another god?
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More Hockey, More Bigotry
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Hockey, More Bigotry
Why would Donovan assume any rules in a street fight, not very bright. Hopefully he learned a lesson, but probably not.
