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It seems like Killian is gaining more abilities as he gets a little older. Where is he going to get help training these abilities? Looking forward to the next book.
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Erik is fortunate to have two successful artists mentoring him. He had to have had some help from his school teachers along the way too. His talent showed through in the art contest. This is what John envisioned with the barn/studio to have many artists working there.
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Dottie has completely underestimated Hugo. And I agree she needs to meet Thomas in the hall of mirrors too. What happens to Miller, does he die in the hall? Or does Hugo take him back and give him to Dottie? If he dies, then there is a watch available, like the watch Hugo found on the dead soldier back in the beginning.
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Jasper needs to lay off the alcohol. Blake was good to tell him that too. They are building a healthy relationship. Talking, even if it’s with the help of friends. Now they’re out to the band…
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Sounds like it was great fun playing with Romeo…
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The new kingdom is taking off. Seems like the different people are getting along, being who they want to be.
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Now that Henry has a watch, he will remember this time with Hugo! Going into battle together. Is this new watch for Stoker? That has been something that’s been missing, 30 yrs on Hugo’s par? Not physically aging, just living that long? What about project CHRONOS? Need to investigate that too. I’m so looking forward to D-Day…
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Lovely, even if a little cheesy.
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Act III - Hammer To Fall
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Hammer To Fall
This chapter was very hopeful, even with the 3 Sisters scene throwing some shadow in there. Apparently it’s not just big paws 😉will they even try mating in their new wolf forms? -
Jamie’s natural leadership just took over and saved many lives. He deserves to be promoted. Vane should be sent home disgraced…
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Great chapter, loved the run, and the guests showing up. There are a couple of paragraphs near the end that are duplicated.
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The Aftermath, Or, Nelson Hears the Truth
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Aftermath, Or, Nelson Hears the Truth
George is at least honest about his feeling with the experience. Not blaming just processing. A very mature young man. Cal is relieved he didn’t loose a friend either. -
Finally, Max came to realize what he was loosing and pushing away, it was just so sad Art had to go through that horrific experience.
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So making friends with the agents rather than killing them. Curious about getting someone to remember something in a dynamic stream…
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What is Vane up to with this request?
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Chapter 12: Silent Witness
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 12: Silent Witness
So Mason followed Eli, and now wants him…did he have to get drunk to ask for what he wants? -
So she was trying to protect the baby and was pushed on the stairs, hopefully the did not actually happen to Killian seeing this… was this the man in the rowboat?
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Art, is rescued, hopefully the police are called and the perps arrested. It will take courage for Art to testify, idiots video as evidence of their non consensual rape…
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Time loops, this specific watch is a key to a lot of things…. First Hugo finding it, then giving it to Alec, them both touching the liquid, which now seems how they are tied together. Very interesting. Alec was listening to his aggregate, physical exercises, planning. it’s interesting it took soldiers from the future to take down Stoker… Will he be sharing this 1981 Chronos project info with Hugo in the mirror?
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A lot going on in this chapter. From fun loving brotherly antics to training, and an abduction… ready for the sequel.
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Oh, a sequel. Hurrah… we do need to find out about Theodore’s pack.
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Great chapter, loved the shopping trip. They are so good together.
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It still seems like Hugo could get a watch somewhere, wait the year and go back right after he left the table with his watch, give this watch to Alec, then they both jump put of there, but that would not make an epic story… and might put them on the run from these US agents in the time streams. Seems like they need to get away and not be chased…
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Meet the parents, then first time full on sex. Are they going to Jack’s next? Will the parental reception be the same?
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It seems like their little play ended well. Now back to the garden or Taz’s place for a real relationship.
