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Very serious chapter, both sharing very personal things about their past and Max’s inner dialogue was almost out of control, but Roman calmed him down…
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The negotiations to this relationship were intense. Max had so much processing to do to get to yes. Especially with regards to what his relationship with Sam had been. So much insight. The whole thing about what their safe words meant was very interesting. Very happy they worked it out.
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Chapter 13: Roommates Share Everything
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 13: Roommates Share Everything
What is Mason going to be like after this? Will he be ok with it or be a jerk? He really got off on telling Eli exactly what he wanted… -
[Memory, Early December, Sophomore Year] – Don’t Read Into It
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Early December, Sophomore Year] – Don’t Read Into It
Another blinders on moment for Lyn. Not seeing Alexander’s true feelings for him.- 50 comments
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Danny gave great advice about loving who you love and not caring about what sex they are. It’s great to see that they love each other and know that they love each other even if it’s not being in love with each other.
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Will’s bad timed reveal about Edmonton almost got Jimmy spiraling. But Will knew exactly what to do to get him back…. This Andrew was not so fortunate, having a manipulative b—ch of a girlfriend, drove him to need real help, and Jimmy could not be that. Hopefully he survived and made it through. You said you spoke recently and got more perspective on what happened, so I assume he is ok now.
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What a cliffhanger, Billy manning up to keep Hugo from being lobotomized! Can Thomas leave the hall of mirrors? Will he need a watch, or his aggregate enough for him to travel? So may questions.
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Jasper, where is that man of confidence?
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That’s a terrific achievement, with nary an I to be seen. Beautiful short story.
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Glad the men have broken through the fever and are recovering. Avery, what were you thinking, telling that to the captain? Loved Andrew Pit’s reply to Blake, he does know his brother…
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Mark was driving the car, but did he have a watch then? Billy has the watch Hugo gave him. Could he do something with that and reset this timeline? Hugo with all of this paradox unraveling it being undone.
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This seems like a parasitic infection, especially since nobody not on the island has been affected. So much for “ fresh” water.
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Beautiful ending to this story, looking forward to the sequel.
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Wil and Jimmy are so good together. Funny how these stories get Wil worked up. Very good conversation about safe sex in there too.
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This chapter with the flipping back and forth between the 2 men was very interesting. What’s going to happen to Reed, the younger being shot, would certainly have some effect on the older version. Will Stoker get a watch and the go get Hugo??? What will Billy do, he has been taught well by Hugo, it’s his decision what to do with the watch he now holds. Seems like 3 options, use it himself, give it to Dottie, or give it back to Hugo…
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Chapter 6: Morning Mouth
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 6: Morning Mouth
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Alexander is very possessive of Lyn. And Lyn still seems ignorant of Alexander’s true feelings, and intentions. Seems like more than brother-in-law actions with Luke, nude wrestling on the beach.
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Progress, taking Jamie home to meet Adam’s mom was a big step.
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So this dinner is interesting and still didn’t get to the story, Jimmy seems to attract bi-guys or pan-guys… and most of them don’t last long… some do, but not most.
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It seemed like Stoker was living all of the memories that had yet to happen in his timeline. I like the preemptive strike. Don’t let the men get to the lounge to capture Stoker to begin with.
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Zain reveals who he is and fights a zombie battle. Meanwhile on his homeworld his mother and brother lead a fight against the beings that want Zain as a tool. Fantastic chapter. What does the bracelet do?
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Act III - No-one Mourns The Wicked
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - No-one Mourns The Wicked
The epilogue gave us the ending of the most evil characters. There is so much more for the future with the new king. Loved this story all the way through. -
It seems like Killian is gaining more abilities as he gets a little older. Where is he going to get help training these abilities? Looking forward to the next book.
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Erik is fortunate to have two successful artists mentoring him. He had to have had some help from his school teachers along the way too. His talent showed through in the art contest. This is what John envisioned with the barn/studio to have many artists working there.
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Dottie has completely underestimated Hugo. And I agree she needs to meet Thomas in the hall of mirrors too. What happens to Miller, does he die in the hall? Or does Hugo take him back and give him to Dottie? If he dies, then there is a watch available, like the watch Hugo found on the dead soldier back in the beginning.
