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This makes sense, Tabby is like Peter was when Will first moved into Brody’s house. Just took his place and took over the gardening. Love their interactions and the fact that Granny knew both of them so well. I bet Alvin is up for the task of a meal from scratch.
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Charlie & his Aunt Daphne
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Charlie & his Aunt Daphne
Aunt Daphne is very full of herself. This may finally give Charlie a way out from their relationship. There are other buildings at Louis’ which Charlie could probably use for his work too, saving them both a lot of money. -
It’s not clear how his father found out he was arrested… having the solicitor there was good for Kieran. This whole hierarchy is interesting to see happening. But with Ben not talking, Kier is bound to make errors, we just found one… Riley.
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CHAPTER 6: THE FIRST DATE - PARKS & RECREATION
VBlew commented on LJCC's story chapter in CHAPTER 6: THE FIRST DATE - PARKS & RECREATION
Very interesting, why did Klebber go on the date in the middle of another date?.. since this seems to be in RomCon territory, they miss each other at the restaurant…. -
loved the geek out scene. Then back at the cottage Tabby did not stand for being objectified. Good on him. Then he tells Alvin what he has to do to be partners. The tension keeps growing they both want each other but Tabby says Alvin needs to ask for what he wants.
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Wow, the coach was anxious, but drew it out to make them both have an enjoyable time.
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Was Tristan the judge? Interesting twist.
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Eitan definitely has something to do with the bullies…. New clothes that fit, and getting out and playing with friends. Nice day.
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Ash and Axel! Hopefully it’s also a sexually compatible match too. We get some insight into Silas finally.
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Nice ending. Leo got enough help to realize that he could try with Jeisa. That’s huge progress.
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Nice, he seems to have healed the Great Dicku. That has to be worth a lot. What powers do the seeds have.
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Seems like Axel has a thing for Ash. Was he the rescuer at Halloween? Jasper is an ass and needs some behavior modification.
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Beautiful chapter with the coming joining of John and Ethan, Erik and Kahiau, the last paragraphs about John and Kahiau made it seem like they were joining?
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Who was the mystery savior?
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Love this place, it’s nice to see new characters. Love the letters and instructions from Grandma she really planned this out. Is Tabby just as clueless? Where is he living?
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It was a terrifyingly effective change to the story. It seems to be working. It’s a huge deviation from the current reality, but it’s an interesting fiction. I love the characters and want to see what happens with them through the struggle. Hopefully Will and Andrew can reconnect soon. It may be a while before the boys can join them.
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This is a very kinky Santa…
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Counter Swing of the Pendulum
VBlew commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in Counter Swing of the Pendulum
Very interesting, Jasper is part of this Neo party wanting Esper rights. Is Silas denying his sexuality and that’s why he doesn’t want the guiding? He could ask a female guide right? Ryder was sus and it was confirmed, he probably won’t get any more guiding from Asher… Does the professor have as strong political feelings as his son? -
Lovely beginning. Looking forward to this new world.
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Chapter 20: The Pursuit of Villainy
VBlew commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 20: The Pursuit of Villainy
Great ending, the good “villains” survived and are living a good life. -
Beautiful story. Have a great Christmas.
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So, Silas was a closet case, and had not had any good guiding previously… hopefully he won’t be as resistant in the future…
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Wonderful group of friends making Christmas just a little brighter.
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Welcome back to this story. The beginning of the treatment, the house progressing. A little sad, but family has come to be supportive.
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Excellent story and a cautionary tale to hubris. Viruses don't really care and destroy civilizations. Even advanced space travelers. The two explorers take what they are given, with a vow to share this with others. Not quite the treasure they started out to find.
