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What an awesome flip of scenario. Steve is a genius and a sales shark. He and his sister accumulated these businesses starting with his initial investment of selling candy bars for a profit… he admits to not wanting to go back to not having his own time from an over controlling mother. And that is why he acts the way he does and is purposely falling tests… now that he has shared this with Kenny, will he also come out and say he’s attracted to him as well, soon? There is definitely chemistry between them.
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Drugs and strangers are not a good combination. At least he didn’t get raped. But that ending at the River is not looking too good.
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Mom is fantastic, Nick seems to have a lot of anxiety. Great chapter. They really got serious about how they feel about each other. And are progressing into the level of sex they are comfortable with. Coming out to Tommy was a really good thing, even if nail biting for not knowing how he would react.
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Great beginning. Seems like much more than a religious zealot with a following, although they can be bad enough for their followers. The preacher is releasing the spy. That’s a good thing. This is quite different from the others in this series.
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[Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
Even back then Brad and Alexander were posturing over Lyn. How was he so oblivious?- 36 comments
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Wow, what an amazing ending. Still so much more to go with all these characters. Maybe Billy will realize that Hugo had to kill Dottie before she had Alec killed, and was protecting himself and his husband from a whole lot of pain.
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Excellent story, love stories about cowboys.
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Yes, another Killian story! Micah is right to ask for a commitment to move forward together. Seth was a little cryptic about why Killian needed to learn more about his gifts, and soon. Looking forward to this book.
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Joel is such a great man. He is being the leader that he was chosen for the mission to be, even in his grief, he is thinking for the best of all humanity. Helping to rebuild Earth now that Gaia is fully operational.
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The dancing was fun till it got too crowded. They are both there for each other. The snuggles to stop Peter’s bad dreams as really good on Marty. Peter getting them out of that claustrophobic dance club was good for Marty. they support each other, and communicate, which is great for their relationship. Seems like Marty could be helped by therapy, but maybe not.
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Chapter 6: Hidden Agendas
VBlew commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 6: Hidden Agendas
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Wow, what a way to end a book… there is a lot of love between these guys.
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Another great chapter. The “parents” needed some alone time. I agree that a marriage proposal mid sex is not the best timing… the grandparents are very supportive. Slav did great with his explanation of his meeting Rory and subsequent interactions. They both really are enamored of the other.
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That fight scene was amazing. Kind of Matrix like in my head. Although how the paradox of having two Alecs in the same place is curious. Nobody died in this time to unravel the future… looking forward to the end of this book and the next one.
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It’s interesting how Jack smells like cinnamon to Theodore, and not sure why it irritates him so. Fated mates scents are interesting.
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Excellent work Hugo. So much better than getting shot, even with a bulletproof vest. Now what happens in the lounge with Alec and Harry?
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Leo seriously needs to go back to counseling…. Going out with an Egaro and lying about being bonded is very bad…
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A very eventful reunion. 30 yrs for Hugo… loved Alex’s marriage proposal then wedding ceremony. Will be interesting to see what happens differently this time.
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Vane went too far, will there be disciplinary action?
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Jace is still in love with Noah, Matteo is still the same snake spewing lies. The children are stuck between all of this.
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Loved the house tours. I liked the second one with the private waterfall. I can see why they liked the first one, it fits their artistic needs.
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It took both aggregates in the form of Stoker and Thomas working together to fix the transit station. And now Thomas is no longer trapped in the mirror universe, and had 2 friends, they just need to go get Hugo.
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Awesome coming out for Jasper.
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Very serious chapter, both sharing very personal things about their past and Max’s inner dialogue was almost out of control, but Roman calmed him down…
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The negotiations to this relationship were intense. Max had so much processing to do to get to yes. Especially with regards to what his relationship with Sam had been. So much insight. The whole thing about what their safe words meant was very interesting. Very happy they worked it out.
