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Cottontail tried to warn Jamie about the show. Angus is just manipulating him. Wonder if he was worried about getting punched by Jamie if he saw what they did to him while they were in the car together? Good on Hearst realizing more about who he wants to be. Wen is really engaged in hurting Jamie for some reason…. He had a similar problem as the author of express with his other obsessions, and they all ended up in good relationships. So hopefully that is where this is headed…
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There are more Ekho there to help get rid of this Kara ot infused vase. Something seemed off with that “gift”. After the lovely morning this was a hard turn of events. Good cliffhanger. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Act I - Touch-A, Touch-A, Touch-Me
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Touch-A, Touch-A, Touch-Me
Slow, awkward, both of them seeming total virgins. That was a good place to start. Maybe if Gabriel tastes Ray, that might reveal the scent that seems to be masked. So fun, and I love the writing style. -
Part One: Bathroom Confession
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Bathroom Confession
Brandon is having a rough time, but he brought it on himself… he keep assuming Tyler is “straight” and he only had one opportunity with him. This seems so far from reality, but they are not talking today… -
That dinner seemed to go well…
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Finally the truth comes out. Zal being a jealous brother, is now facing the consequences for his actions, for thousands of years.
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Nice. He changed his mind. Hopefully the will be able to escape together.
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A very happy chapter, moving in, great sex, engaged to be married, and a job promotioN. Life is looking good for these two.
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Abel, got his name from Adam so he was no longer just a number… this was a sad chapter.
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It’s tragic that this happened to Reggie’s Father. It does seem that medical professionals then did not have what they needed to be able to save someone with such an attack.
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Your comment about the stories moving backwards in time is interesting. I noticed that Brandon did not admit he did what he was accused of doing behind the building, just “So you’re not sure if you’re jealous but you’re angry with me for maybe sucking a dick,” He may have feelings for Tyler too, but they’re both making assumptions here… Why was he staring after Tyler as he left? Maybe some emotional intelligence needed here.
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It’s too bad the people who started this didn’t die in the fire too. Jacques and Alex got out alive. They have so much more to learn. Maybe the hand will attach to Jacques an communicate more. It did to Alex, when it was in him.
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Great chapter they really are getting along well. It seems like Jim is way overthinking this. I think Alex is going to surprise him as well.
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Glad that the mental health connection was a good experience for Bart, an he seems to have overcome his challenges regarding anal penetration.
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Looks like the effort to disclose to this inspector was a good choice.
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Lovely chapter. Did not see the Vince and Peter connection coming. Yes, Vince needs to talk with Gray about that….
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Cal took another big step in confiding in his father about the possibility of nude photos and possible “special” parties, for a lot of money. His father was supportive but said he and his mother would be there to back him financially, so he really didn’t have to resort to needing to be compromised. Things once posted seem to stay around forever.
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Sometimes, in a Crystal Ball
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Sometimes, in a Crystal Ball
Jack already admitted that he’s a fake… totally making up stuff, but some of it was accurate. Now to this posh shop. Hopefully Ryder still comes to pick Danny up on time. -
Chapter 2: A shocking surprise hit the Sandovals.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: A shocking surprise hit the Sandovals.
Carlos is now getting to feel what Gaul felt with Natalie…. But what hold does Ian have over all of this? He’s way too happy about this. -
Great beginning. Looking forward to how Huxley gets along in his new country.
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Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
Gabriel has protected Ray since their first encounter. He doesn’t know why. This is an interesting twist with the quick transformation that did not happen before Ray. They do seem like fated mates. Will see if the sex changes Gabriel’s feelings or awareness. -
My condolences as well on the transition of your Mother. Noah really is working with Bart, and hopefully therapy will help. He is keeping his promise of not running away.
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Such a lovely day. Was this all on the estate? Loved the idyllic lake, swimming and playing. Nice that Jim and Kareem are getting close.
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Welcome back. Excellent chapter. So many people coming to support Zain. Hopefully they will get him out of jail, and put the blame back on the bullies. What is this entity in the museum? It seems to know so much. Looking forward to more.
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Love this chapter. They finally came out to each other. It’s been building for a while. Now spending the night together…
