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Terrific ending to this story, The true bad guy is captured, but not before harming another innocent man’s life. Ethan is exonerated.
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This was a great courtroom chapter. After Roger is assigned as counsel he really too over. The ADA is gettin schooled. Now to find out why Thomas had the reaction to his uncle, and hopefully, be able to counter whatever the DA is trying to do. The ME surely helped out with all of the defensive bruising that the boys endured. I’m on the edge of my seat.
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This plan for them to share an apartment seems like a good one.
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Great intro to their time in Cairo. Who is following them, and is it the same who ransacked their room in Alexandria, looking forward to finding out. Reginald seems to sense they are being followed, so hopefully that will keep him aware and they are not assaulted.
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Chapter 5: The Boy From Argos
VBlew commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Boy From Argos
Amazing chapter, well worth the wait. This looks like the love story that Aelios had ripped from him so long ago is coming back to him. There is something different about Adrian. His willingness to witness all of the past and still believe that there is good in Aelios I triggered something in the pendant. The agreement for the turning is important and a decision not to be taken lightly. looking forward to the continuation of this. -
Sometimes the truth is painful, but leaving things unsaid lead to resentment, and that really is not good for a relationship. Well done in two chapters.
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So, was the Batman character the killer, the guy that Jake thought may have more info, or someone else related? I’m thinking Gilly was so angry she broke the car windows, but could have been Todd too. Whoever it was, it was not a nice thing to do. Killian was very up front about his relationship with Gilly, apparently she had other ideas.
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Wow, fast paced and engaging. The non call from the DA and the fact that Roger picked up started this off as a good sign fro Thomas’ defense. Can’t wait to see how this goes.
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With the reaction his mother had to the news of the war, it’s unlikely that many know the truth, and those who do will likely want that to remain secret. He needs to be very cautious. I’m thinking he will be returning to Rym in the not distant future, unless he is detained.
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Excellent story, the first love relationship with being closeted can be a challenge on a relationship as this story shows. And it can lead us to cherish our next ones where we can be open and accepted.
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I’m thinking that Ben may be Bi, if we’re putting a label on it. But acting on anything without disclosing it to Sam would be very detrimental to their relationship.
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This is a great adventure story! If you like stories with Wizards, Elves, Dwarfs, Humans, and other mythological creatures, this trilogy will have you clicking the next chapter. It is well written, engaging sometimes sorrow filled, as a band of mixed races comes together to save their kingdome from an evil wizard, and his minions. This is a true hero's journey as we follow this group through trials and tribulations to the final outcome, the people they meet and the bonds they form are endearing and hopeful.
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Happy chapter with Brandon meeting Rhett.
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Seems like Gavin was some help in helping at least explain that his non feeling was something that does happen to people with tragic losses. Chris is not gone yet, but he is also not available. The people at school do seem to care.
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So Marc is on military training now, finds out from the intelligence service that the area his family’s business is in may be attacked in a few years. Saves his friends from a pirate attack, and is back out mining to upgrade his growing mining fleet. The young man is going full tilt. Looking forward to this section of the saga.
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Beautifully written story about reconnecting wit that former crush that was not acted on. Now being honest with each other about their feelings, this opens a whole new world of possibilities.
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What an interesting revelation, not only the artifacts they have, also their biological history, and rejection of the society the were members of.
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It’s interesting what one person had done with mathematics to improve the knowledge, but has isolated himself from the rest of the world.
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This is amazing progress on the foundation.
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Death and Redemption, Pt. 2
VBlew commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in Death and Redemption, Pt. 2
Callum keeps bringing up his own ignorance of the real situation, and cause for the war, but doesn’t seem to be asking questions to better inform himself of the history from Rym… seems sad to throw away such a relationship… -
Chapter 12: The truth is out. But which one?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 12: The truth is out. But which one?
Is Carter going to be able to deal with this revelation? Is Dexter going to do something so crazy that it kills Jeremy and Carter? Will Elena’s will give any insight to Carter that she was his Mother? -
I’m thinking Todd too, because he is the only one that I remember fitting the description…. Of all of the characters we’ve met. And it has to be someone not mentioned previously because Seth didn’t know this person’s name….
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The young men seem a little overwhelmed with the new information. Jacques is now a very wealthy man, and Alex has a body that needs to be worked into the shape of a god, I’m assuming that he magic will do that with the workouts. 😁
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Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
VBlew commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Sacrifice of Angels
What an emotional chapter, just when it looked like things may be improving, we get this tragedy thrown in there. -
Terrific ending to this section. Looking forward to the continued story.
