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They had been doing so well, traveling and informing people of the dangers, and then his a settlement that is completely destroyed, save 1 survivor.
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Interlude- Search for Avalon Part I
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Interlude- Search for Avalon Part I
I never woul have considered Greenland as the place for Avalon, but with the orbs Merlin may have had the ability to do something like portal between locations, which could also explain the mysterious disappearance of people at the settlement. -
Some Surprising Turns of Events
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Some Surprising Turns of Events
He gets a new job, staying close to Mo, and even gets the case that is Mo's assigned to him. Talk about coincidence... -
Great Chapter... Wondering if the "Ritual" is something more like a Satanic worship kind of thing??? And I really don't like the Minister, he is involved somehow, seems like he possibly called this upon himself, but he is not telling Jamie very much, when he does seem to know a lot more. Jamie is very trouble by his killing someone, even if they were not alive. It was solid enough to flatten out bullets, and resist most of his attempts to slow it down. Looking forward to more.
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He had escaped for now. Unless Omar knew where he originally came from, they would not know who he was going to see. And he has a bit of savings, so he can survive for a while.
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Did Asher really do that Moses? Or is he just blaming Asher for what the cult people did to him? Hopefully Asher shows up before something bad happens.
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This mystery is solved, once Norm shows back up… Looking forward to more of these mysteries.
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Nice chapter, they were both nervous about this date, and it’s nice they are having fun, taking it slow. Getting to know more about each other.
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Chapter 58 - Epic-Log Part Five - End
VBlew commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 58 - Epic-Log Part Five - End
This ending was fantastic. It tied everything up nicely. They survived college apart. Got married, and are now starting their new life together. Thanks for a great story. -
Beautiful chapter, we have some resolution with Clara apologizing. Then you leave us with this cliffhanger in the literal heart of the labyrinth. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
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That was a crazy dream, but it did make Nathan realize how much he cares for Brohm. Then he revealed everything. Brohm seems all in, even with the background out in the open. Now they can possibly start a relationship.
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Very good chapter, we are now up to I in the murderer’s alphabet scheme…. They seem able to take advantage of people’s momentary being alone… J would be next…. Jason needs to be very careful.
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Fun chapter, Jamie kind of hazing the minister, but he did need to know how the vehicle handled. So we now know if the minister touches someone he gets information about them. That’s an interesting power.
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So, that was a typo, should be attention
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The boys talked through why Kenny was feeling overwhelmed with all of the purchases for him. The house rules are good th know and doing chores for that allowance is setting him up for good behavior in the future.
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Fantastic, captured my ATT all the way through. The control that Mike exerted in their one sexual encounter was very comforting for both of them. They survived this, now on to possibly more stress being on the bodyguard detail….
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Jamie missed the opportunity to tell Mike about his demand that the Minister change his public message on gays. But that could have led to needing to discuss powers, which he is not ready to do yet…
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Maka was good to set boundaries and have a good conversation with Charlie about expectations in their potential relationship.
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Bully saying he is not a bully was a bold lie…
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Their friendship continues to grow. And a couple of times are near being seen by people searching for them. A good nights sleep should help.
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Otis doesn’t know that Vegas is Hudson’s work name. If he sees him and calls him that around others that could be a problem. What are all of these other models going to be doing for this 3 person show? Hudson was so close to freeing Otis. The suspense is thick.
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Interesting chapter, Kaito playing along letting people think he doesn’t speak English… will they stay boyfriends?
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Jury Selection and the Prosecution's Case
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Jury Selection and the Prosecution's Case
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It’s good to see Liam interacting more with Mike. The date at the mall should be interesting.
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Great job finding Bailey. And they seemed to make some more friends at the game. Wondering who has a trap that big in an urban area? And what are they doing with what they trap?
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