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    Five

    Ieshwar commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Five

    Nice twist. To be frank, I was expecting something along the cat in the box with the bomb. But this was... unexpected. I will take it as a happy ending. In the end, they did get together.
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    Four

    Ieshwar commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Four

    You write exceptionally well, Fishie. I want to write more but the call for chapter five is way too strong. See ya at the end of the story.
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    Three

    Ieshwar commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Three

    Chapter 2: I liked Callen and Sage. Chapter 3: I love them. Now to Chapter four.
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    Two

    Ieshwar commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Two

    I LOL'd at the yellow page line. Really sweet. I like both of them. Maybe not such a sob-fest afterall... for now.
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    One

    Ieshwar commented on Fishwings's story chapter in One

    WTF? Argh. Fishie, I'm on the first chapter and I like Argggh. Ok, I'll try to make more sense. First of all, your descriptions are amazing. Especially the accident. I was holding my breath and hanging on every fricking word. And I already like Callen (awesome name, btw). Can't believe you're going to kill him. I think this is going to be real sob-fest (has already started). Should I get some tissues? On to second chapter.
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    To think that I was coming back home and was like "It's already 15th and the anthology is not up yet." And when I get home, ta-da! These stories look amazing. I couldn't resist. Already started reading. LOL.
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    Through well-thought words and lines, this poem gives an insight about the poet's life- about what her dreams/yearnings, her problems... The "episodic" set of lines felt like vignettes of her experiences, her daily life. And they all come together, telling us about her life. Nicely done.
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    Chapter 1

    Ieshwar commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 1

    I read this story on your blog. Was really sweet. Your descriptions are top-notch. Loved the ending. Good job.
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    I might give it a shot. Just because the guy is really cute. Cheers Ieshwar
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    Like Yettie said, we all wear masks. I'm in closet. So I know how it is. It's human nature to protect oneself. Just never ever stop believing in yourself. One thing struk me in here: "But, if he does, it will end up as a failure sooner than later." Why would you say that? Maybe things won't work out. Maybe they will. But this is life. You don't know what will happen tomorrow. You don't stop living your present because of possible hurts in the future. Well, these are my thoughts. Hope that it helped. Cheers Ieshwar
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    I know I'm quite late. But still... Ever since I have read "Should i" by carringtonrj, I have been a real fan. Every story by RJ is a real gem. Even before opening "Centaur", I knew it would be great. But the weird part is that despite my high expectations, it still blew me away. It's amazing! Hats off, RJ. You are a star! And amazing review, Joann! Loved it.
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    Haha. Really nice. Can't put it on facebook. Still in closet but I will probably put one in my sig here when it's official. The top one is really good but so is the blue one. Good job.
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    Klaine all the way! Kurt + Blaine = Cheers Ieshwar
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    This is so beautiful. Amazing song. Amazing video. Thanks for the share. Cheers Ieshwar
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    Chapter 2

    Ieshwar commented on Circle's story chapter in Chapter 2

    It's a great story. I like how you are letting us see everything in Dan's thoughts. He's so adorable. I want to grab him and hug him. And your end notes are great too. Really funny.
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    Ah, what would we be without beta-readers and editors?
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    Thanks Renee for featuring it here. It was a real fun to write and hopefully, it is as much fun to read.
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    Three very talented writers. Glad to know them a little bit more.
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    Yes, around four days ago. You can find the thread here. Cheers Ieshwar
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    Yeah, like Joann said, I feel some vibes in between Matt and Stephan. There's something in there. Very subtle but yet.... Anyway, great chapter!
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    Congratulations to all winners. And Congratulations to the team who organised the RCW. (SidLove, the banners are gorgeous!)
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    Till The Last Breath By Ieshwar I am finally here, held tight in his arms. I realize this is it- the end. The end of this mundane life, the end of my dark world, the end of me… I have heard that during your last moments, your whole life flashes in front of your eyes. I know it won’t happen for me. I never remembered anything about the earlier days of my life. Yes, a few times, I had felt something, a gut feeling deep inside me- a past sense of closeness, the presence of others, probably si
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    All love stories strive for that "happily-ever-after", to be together forever. This one is no such love story. It was doomed right from the start. It's just the account of one moment of utter passion, of fighting fates to the point of death.
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    Okay, I'll have a go at this. The first three are set, my life-long wish. 1. England (It's Harry Potter Land!!! Do I need to say more? ) 2. Australia (Aussie surfers *drools* ) 3. Canada (I always considered Canada as the most gay-friendly country.) 4. India (Bollywood!! I love the Rajasthan deserts too.) 5. USA (To see if they are as crazy as they seem in books and tv. LOL. And Broadway!) (6. Japan- simply for the mangas and the hot guys) I really hope that I get to go to those first three in my lifetime. It would be awesome. Cheers Ieshwar
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    Chapter 1

    Ieshwar commented on Yettie One's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A really interesting story with an interesting subject matter. I like your approach of showing ever emotion of the main character. Well-done.
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