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    Learned to Lie

    Bill W reviewed Krista's story in Fiction

    This is a sad, but gripping, tale about a teen that is outed and how he and his family deal with the situation. Although this is well worth reading, I feel it requires another chapter to let us know how the situation is resolved.
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    Btw, I'll probably write more reviews, but I was afraid that if I wrote a review for every story except my own that would be a very glaring giveaway. For an observant reader it would be like erecting a flashing neon sign that said, 'I wrote this one!'
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    I'm flattered that the readers thought my story was written by two very accomplished authors: @Mancunian and @Cole Matthews.
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    And I was expecting you to talk about Dan Marino. I guess I should have checked the spelling.
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    Actually Steve, I didn't misspell bear, but bares was referring to people that were bare. I'm happy that the bear didn't create any problems for you, though.
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    You'll discover that Josh is noted for his campfire ghost stories, so I'm glad you enjoy it. The meeting with the older siblings will happen and we'll all see how it turns out.
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    Yes, you are correct, because Ricky doesn't seem to have the same hang-ups as many others. He's more open and up front when talking to others, and he even does that with Josh, so I'm sure he'll do it with Danny as well.
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    Thank you for the compliment, and I'm glad you approve.
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    Hmmm, I thought this term was referring to an in-law, but I guess that would be knowswheel.
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    Times have changed and boys are growing up faster these days.
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    At the present, Josh is concentrating on the boys and making sure they have the love and attention they need. He is also putting his needs in the background, but once he feels the boys are able to deal with things without him, then he will look for someone he can love and will also fit in with this crazy accumulation of boys.
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    I'm glad you agree. It should prove to be interesting.
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    Josh will tell his family when he feels the time is right, but he's worried about their reactions to what he's doing. I'm sure he feels they'll question him taking on the challenges of dealing with younger children again, and doing it all alone, especially at his age.
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    Thank you, Doha, and Ricky does tend to be nearly everyone's favorite character. They also appreciate what Josh is trying to do, so happy reading.
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    Thank you, Doha. I'm glad you like those characters. However, this is a much longer read than some of the other stories of mine that you read, so I hope you're ready for the long haul. 😜
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    Yes, unfortunately during the time in between we grown in different ways, so things are not quite the same when we're reunited. Thanks, Doha, for your feedback.
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    I hope it didn't drain you too much. It was an emotional ride and I hope you have enough strength left to go on to Chapter 2.
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    Here, here. I raise my cup and toast both @Libby Drew and @George Richard. Congratulations to each of you!
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    Chapter 21 S1

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 21 S1

    Exactly, drsawzall, and I wonder how many of us would be able to do it. It certainly isn't going to be easy for Mac.
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    Chapter 21 S1

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 21 S1

    Yes, Danilio, walking on four legs than most of us might envision. We see animals all the time, but we don't truly study their movements, so we don't realize exactly what they're doing. Devin hasn't changed into a horse, but he has transitioned into a deer and learned what it's like to walk on hooves. You are right, that is an entirely new experience. No internet, no phone reception, unless you had a land line, so Devin had to learn to survive as a throwback to previous generations while at the cabin. He did, however, live with his Grandpa Jacob while going to high school, so he had the internet and phone reception there, so he's lived in both worlds. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
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    Chapter 21 S1

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 21 S1

    And this will definitely help, although there will be much more to learn.
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    Chapter 21 S1

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 21 S1

    Moving on all fours is something that is best avoided at our age, especially since on occasion we have enough difficulty moving around on two legs.
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    Polestar is a guiding principle and also a model of electric car, while polecat is a nickname for a skunk and commonly used in the Old West and in cartoons.
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    Patience, Grasshopper or Care Bear. Patience.
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    Chapter 21 S1

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 21 S1

    Well, that can't be my story, since Mac and Devin both live and go to school in Colorado. Could that be a Comicality story?
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