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Bill W

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  1. I'm like James. I laughed at them and criticized those wearing them, but would never wear a pair myself.
  2. As Graeme pointed out, your explain of plural and possessive is correct, but the examples are reversed. I hope you can correct that mistake.
  3. Qaim awoke long before Kieren the following morning, but he continued to lie quietly on the rug and waited for his young master to awaken. Before long, the teenager began to stir and slowly rubbed the sleep from his eyes. Then, Kieren began to stretch every muscle in his body, in an unconscious attempt to get the blood circulating again. Kieren hadn’t quite finished his morning ritual when there was a knock on the door. Responding to it, he slid out of bed so he could see who was there. Qai
  4. Yes, there is a limit on the number each member can use in a day, but I appreciate your support and your constant feedback.
  5. Fitzhugh, I'm not sure if you were referring to the Josh/Jake portion or that it was Sept. 11, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the feedback.
  6. Fitzhugh, you are welcome and I'm glad you're still making your way through this rather lengthy series. As I've said before, the Curries, like everyone else, has their good times and their bad, and they struggle through the rough times just like the rest of us. Thanks for the feedback.
  7. Lenny, thank you for your feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed this story. As a writer, you know that not everyone is going to agree with your choices, but I included what I thought was needed and left out the rest. I agree with you that sometimes it is better to leave certain details up to the readers' imagination and let them draw their own conclusions. Thanks agains for your input.
  8. I love it, but I'd probably kill myself if I ever tried doing that. I have a treadmill in the house, but it's only used for my three-mile walks and doesn't include any of the acrobatics.
  9. Lenny, I'm glad this chapter touched you so deeply and I hope I've also helped at least a few considering this drastic option to take another look at their choice. I can understand why and how people might get to that point, but I hope they find help before they go through with it. Thanks for the feedback and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well.
  10. Yep, Jake works for UPS, so there's possibilities down the road. Thanks for the feedback, Fitzhugh.
  11. Yes, Kevin has had a bit of bad luck in the love department, but he's not about to give up. We'll see what happens for him. Thanks for the feedback, Fitzhugh.
  12. Kieren and the others followed their dwarf guide and traveled down a series of well-lit passages until they stood before another magnificent stairway. This one led even farther into the depths of the mountain, so when Qaim saw it he quickly sidled closer to Kieren. If it weren’t for the knowledge that they were going down this stairway to get something to eat, the creature might have refused to continue on. This new structure was a truly grandiose sight and even more spectacular than the
  13. Wow, you're really moving along on this series and I'm glad you're still enjoying it. Thanks for the continued feedback.
  14. Maybe Stone Cold's view will carry some weight with the good ole boys in the south that treat professional wrestling and NASCAR as religions too!
  15. The Curries have their ups and downs, but most years are very good to them. Thanks for the feedback, Fitzhugh!
  16. It sounds good, but unfortunately revised series are seldom as good as the original. I always looked forward to watch Scully and Mulder and only hope they can capture the same magic.
  17. Thanks, Fitzhugh,I'm glad you're still enjoying this series.
  18. “It was my fault Selvaggio died,” Kieren finally admitted, sounding somewhat bitter. “If he hadn’t volunteered to go on this mission or if he hadn’t stayed behind to protect me in the Murky Marshes, then that thing would never have been able to get to him and he’d be alive now. I probably should have also used the medallion you gave me to destroy it and then he would still be with us too, but I forgot I had it until later.” At this point, the young man was unable to hold back his emotion
  19. It may look that way on the calendar and we've had temps in the 70s during the day, but this weekend we're supposed to drop close to freezing overnight. I moved to GA to avoid the snow and cold.
  20. There are a few possible answers to this question, but to keep it fairly clean... possibly he tangled the key into the hair on his head or he had a subcutaneous implant that would allow him to activate the locking system, so he could leave the key inside the car.
  21. Thank you for the feedback, Fitzhugh. I'm glad you enjoyed this story and I hope you plan to read more of the series.
  22. Congratulations, Addy!
  23. The rear entrance into Thorold loomed up in front of Kieren and his protectors, now that they had finally completed the lengthy first leg of their journey. Each of them was exhausted from everything they had endured thus far, including the few days they had been trapped inside Briarwood. Now, they were looking forward to a decent meal, a warm bath and a chance to sleep in a comfortable bed again. Before that could happen though, they would have to signal the guard on duty and seek admittance,
  24. After a harrowing first leg of their travels, Kieren and the others reach the dwarf stronghold of Thorold. There they meet up with the wizard, Beraut, and continue their journey, but will their mission be successful?
  25. This is very well done and I hope a lot of people read it.
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