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Happy Birthday, JC!
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Happy Birthday, LL!
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Happy Birthday, Jan!
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Happy Birthday, Rachel!
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I was a little worried that you were going to break Max and Elliot up, but I'm glad it worked out. Too bad the guards jumped in so quickly, because I would have liked to see Max smack Nate a round a little. He certainly deserved it. Great job and I really enjoyed this.
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Thanks again for your feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed this story too. Can you believe so many important people were born on the same day?
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Thanks for the feedback, Lisa. I'm glad you enjoyed it and it brought a little cheer to your weekend.
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Thanks for the feedback, Valkyrie. I'm glad it brought a smile to your face.
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My favorite, O Holy Night. This version gives you some variety.
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Happy Birthday, Allan!
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Thanks for the feedback, Wayne. I just took an idea that was already out there, playing it forward, and tried to build a story that had a positive, seasonal message. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Thanks for the feedback, Wayne. I'm glad you enjoyed this little deviation from the original. I thought it would be a fun take on the theme.
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That certainly wasn't your run of the mill Christmas story, but it was enjoyable. Christmas is a time of magic, or how else would reindeer fly and a fat old man fit down a chimney with a sack of presents? Therefore, it was perfectly logical that a warlock determine the fate of his magic during the Christmas season. I had the feeling the cats were somehow Lox's familiars too, although they resided with Max. Was that to help protect Max until Lox found and bounded with him? Thanks for sharing this enchanting tale.
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University of Texas at Austin
Bill W commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in University of Texas at Austin
James, a sad yet sweet story. Characters were well developed and made you care for and about them. I would have loved to read more, especially about what happened when they were all going to BA together, but it was a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Great job! -
Thanks for the feedback, Aditus. I included this entry to add a little humor and perhaps enlighten some about this song's existence.
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Thanks for reading and commenting. If only we truly learned from the past and didn't repeat the mistakes made by others. Unfortunately, that isn't always the case.
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Thanks for the feedback, James. I'm sure he's not the only gay whose contributions were negated or bypassed due to homophobia. It's a shame.
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As soon as the door to Kieren’s bedchamber was shut and bolted, the boys started talking excitedly about everything they had witnessed in the Great Hall. At first, Garreth and Romaric merely talked between themselves, since Kieren was still lost in his thoughts. Eventually, however, they attempted to get his view about everything as well. “Kieren, did you know any of this before tonight?” Romaric asked. After a slight hesitation and a few bewildered glances between them, Kieren finally r
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Thanks for the feedback, Mann. I only hope there are people that can afford and are willing to heed the message.
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What an enjoyable story. At first, I worried it was going to be sad, since Mike started off with such bad luck, but I'm glad things turned around for him in the end. Great job, Wayne!
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I'll never look at Santa or Rudolph the same way ever again! I take it Rudolph wasn't the only one drinking that night, because those visions could only have come out of the bottom or a bottle or a bong. Wherever you got the idea from, it was fun and very entertaining. Great job!
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A very enjoyable story, Carlos. I found it fascinating that the person carrying out 'Allah's Revenge' would start by infecting those on the Hajj. So in order to kill the infidels, he first kills unsuspecting Muslims. It's not like they volunteered for the duty, so I found it intriguing at how far an extremist would go to carry out his plot. I enjoyed the change in Jesse's attitude, but I was still mildly surprised by how much he had changed by the end of your story. It would be interesting to see what happens from here, but I won't repeat the rash of good ideas mentioned by the others. Good job!
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Thanks for the feedback, Robert. Yes, I thought making some minor twists to this old song would be fun for all. I'm sure there were some younger members that had never heard this before.
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Thanks for the feedback, sacred. This was my chance to add a fun twist to the theme and possibly make a few others aware of this fun song.
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Thanks for the feedback, Robert. Yes, this is something that shouldn't be confined to just the holiday season. There are plenty of people that could use help throughout the year.
