Bill W
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I would think that once it started rolling, whatever was inside would do more damage to you than what was outside. Could you imagine being tossed around inside one of those? I wonder how many idiots bought one.
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Does the world end when we go from December 31 to January 1 each year. It was just a calendar, so when it ends it only means it's time to go out and buy a new one. Seeing they used large rocks to make their calendars, the Mayans just didn't want to have to go out and buy a new one every year, they made their calendar last a longer time. Now that it's came to an end, it's just time to get a new one. End of story. lol
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Happy Birthday. I hope it's a great one.
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Happy Birthday, Johnathan. Hope it's a great one.
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I would like to send my deepest sympathies to Roan's family, loved ones and friends. It seems as if this is the weekend for expressing sadness over the loss of a great number of young souls.
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I definitely won't be around for the series to recycle, as long as we get by 12/21/12 - which I feel confident we shall, provided the politicians are kept out of the process. lol
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Happy Birthday, Benji.
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Percy, thanks for the feedback, but I didn't see enough of a pause where they could enjoy their Red Man tobacky. lol I'm glad you enjoyed the action and the dialect. I guess spending the past few years in GA paid off.
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Thanks for the response, RJ, and I'm glad you enjoyed this.
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Thanks for the feedback, Dolores, and I'm glad you enjoy my stories. I've sometimes been accused on spending too much time 'describing and teaching' in my stories, but then again I've also had many favorable comments about doing so as well. I'm glad you appreciate those details.
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The Princess and the Wanderer
Bill W commented on James Hiwatari's story chapter in The Princess and the Wanderer
A Tale from the Portuguese. lol Sorry. I just couldn't resist that little play on words, while thinking of Elizabeth Barrett Browning's "Sonnets From the Portuguese." . Since I'm hooked on the television show "Once Upon a Time" and love fantasy stories, I enjoyed your tale. I'm glad you submitted it, enjoyed the subtle twists, including the cliffhanger ending. Nice job! -
Very emotional and very interesting that he sees the light in the darkroom. Was that the light seeping in that ruined his picture of reality?
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That's pretty much what I just told Cia too and I'm glad you enjoyed how this turned out.
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Thanks, Cia, and you're right. Life doesn't always work out the way we want and incidents don't always end fairly. I thought it would be better leaving the rednecks thinking that they had been bested by a gay man and possibly even owe their lives to him. Besides, they'll end up paying a bit to retrieve their belongings.
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It was an interesting solution indeed, but was the servant actually the leak? I also hope that she didn't get half of his estate.
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Yes, I'm surprised we even have an armed forces left, after all the dire predictions I'd heard about what would happen if gays were allowed to serve openly in the military. And attitudes toward gays and acceptance of gay marriage is changing as well. As someone said on television today, the opposition to gays and gay marriage is literally dying out, as those old, religious conservatives move on to their final rest. Either there won't be any gays in heaven or those people will find themselves in a different location. lol
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Thanks, Joanne, and I guess I've picked up a bit of the southern redneck from living in GA for the past several years. There aren't as many of them as I'd first expected, but the few I've met can more than make up for their lack in numbers.
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For the past month or so, I've been dreaming that I've passed on to another plain of existence, never clearly understood if I died or was merely transported, but I was surrounded by people in my life or people I've admired from the arts, yet I could select what ages I wanted them to be, including myself, and then proceeded to carry on from there. Your story reminded me of that, so does it mean our dreams are somehow connected, even if only vaguely tangentially?
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Wayne, I didn't realize you were into S & M. Very realistically done, although you didn't mention if they actually caught the dominatrix. I know they found her place and all of the toys, but you didn't mention if she was arrested or eventually tried. I certainly hope she wasn't able to slip away. Definitely an interesting read.
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Mark, I wish you would have gone into the father issue more, since I'm curious as to why whom it was hard to believe or accept. Another issue I have is with the boyfriend. You make it sound as if he spends time with the boyfriend and his family, yet state that these things happen via the World Wide Web. I'm confused about that aspect, but I'm very touched by the depth of feelings and the position he's in.
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Thanks, Wayne. I'm glad you enjoyed it, even though I opted not to take the Deliverance route. Instead, I left the Good Ol' Boys something to think about.
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Wow! As others have noted, a surprise ending. I expected problems between Gavin and his parents to arise, but eventually those problems would cause them to give in. I guess I was wrong. It's definitely a well written story, you did a lot of research into the subject and it was compelling. Great job!
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Sounds like my love life - all hype and an empty, disappointed feeling afterward.
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Happy Birthday, Charlie Brown... I mean Wayne. The little bald kid is getting old. lol Have a great one, just watch out for the crazy muppet.
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Happy Birthday Delaware. Are you possibly reconsidering the wisdom of getting mixed up with some of the other 49?
