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  1. Bill W
    Happy Birthday, Sasha! Have a great day!
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    A Storm is Brewing

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks, Wayne. I do my best.
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    A Storm is Brewing

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks, Percy. Trying to keep everyone focused and optimistic.
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    A Storm is Brewing

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks, Nic. A rally cry to the troops. hehehe
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    It's a truly varied and unique collection. I think everyone will find something that touches them.
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    Happy Birthday, Comsie! Has it really been that long? You were just a young pup when we first met. May you enjoy many, many more! Have a truly great day!
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    Bloomings

    Bill W commented on yoxone's story chapter in Bloomings

    Interesting scenes you paint with your words. Interesting descriptive phrases too.
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    Anthology Poem One

    Bill W commented on Toast's story chapter in Anthology Poem One

    Interesting descriptions and unique images. Definitely paints an intriguing picture of what's going on.
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    The storm of love, but with multiple lovers. The first two stanzas are riveting. The third made me cringe slightly, since it reminded me of the rantings of the Christian right wing. God's vengence for our sins. Ouch.
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    III

    Bill W commented on nostic's story chapter in III

    Interesting collection of poems about a unique and imaginative time and place.
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    I Wish I Had Tried

    Bill W commented on Celethiel's story chapter in I Wish I Had Tried

    Each of the three poems were sad. The emtions were very evident and made a power impact. Congrats on three jobs well done.
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    A Storm is Brewing

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks for the feedback, Cole. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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    Chapter 1

    Bill W commented on layla's story chapter in Chapter 1

    So sad. So depressing. To be alone with no hope of the situation changing. I felt every word.
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    How sad and tragic, yet I felt the power and emotions in your words. Well done.
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    Chapter 1

    Bill W commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A hot lover in a relationship stymied be a colder, unfeeling soul. It happens all too often in relationship, but never explained as well as this. Nicely done.
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    going to a party

    Bill W commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in going to a party

    And I used to like going to parties. The emotions you conveyed showed me the flip side of that coin.
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    A Storm is Brewing

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks for the feedback, Redsunshine. I hope they were the good kind of goosebumps, not the creepy kind. hehehe
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    Mark

    Bill W commented on Aditus's story chapter in Mark

    Short, but touching. I think Ashi hit it on the nose when he compared the 'in vain' to three tear drops. Nice job!
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    A Storm of Problems

    Bill W commented on comicfan's story chapter in A Storm of Problems

    I hadn't seen an end line poem before, but it worked very nicely. Good job!
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    A Storm is Brewing

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in A Storm is Brewing

    Yes, Ashi, the day will come. We just have to be patient. Thanks for the feedback.
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    A Storm is Brewing

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks for the feedback, Aditus. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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    A Storm is Brewing

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks, RJ. It can get tricky when you're counting syllables and trying to get the rhyme correct. Thanks for the feedback.
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    A Storm is Brewing

    Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks for the feedback and the help, Joann.
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    A Storm is Brewing The tension’s rising, it is plain to see Treated unequal, will no longer be Too long we’ve waited, for the time to pass We will not settle, to be second-class The Founders told us, in words very clear We’re created equal, a fact we hold dear Some may deny us, and claim we are not They do what they can, they plan and they plot The time has now come, no longer we’ll wait We won’t be abused, by those filled with hate We demand our rights, as proclaimed in law
  25. Bill W
    A poetic perspective of the movement for gay rights and marriage equality.
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