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Excellent chapter! What lingered in my mind during this chapter was the thought about Reggi's father's very specific bequest of the Egyptian amulet. I believe the amulet will have a great importance as we proceed into the future, of this tale. There may be untold secrets revealed from this mysterious artifact, as we progress ahead with this tale. Yes I do agree, that it should be kept well guarded!

Well done @Lee Wilson ❣️ The title "Confused - Until Bart Met Noah", was very predictive, and your usual roller coaster ride was not as extreme as it could have been. You ended this ride with me wanting many more details about their everyday involvement with their adopted sons; but I'm extremely pleased with your happy ever after conclusion! I'm a very "happy camper" with my visit into Bart and Noah's lives. Thanks for giving us such an inspiring story!

Another descriptive chapter of the ships arrival at the hideout and a drunken celebration of their stolen haul. The pet wanders away and hears the whispers of mutiny coming from some of the crew, and tales of deadly payback. Both Captain and Pet are now very much at risk. Is the captain aware of the coming danger? Did he hear the warning from his pet? I believe we shall find out soon! ⏳ 🗡️ Yes, their futures are very much linked together! ☠️

When I first thought about a special needs adoption, I had mistakenly assumed, much greater physical case needs, than has been presented so far. These two boys do have special needs, but not as drastic, as I had first expected. I do believe Bart and Noah could provide a much needed positive impact to these boys lives and futures, and in turn their own. ❤️ I do have hope this will all work out well, for all concerned, while also considering the boys tragic past experiences. Of course there could be unexpected obstacles ahead, both physical and/or emotional. But that could be met with great love, care, and compassionate support, provided by Bart and Noah. So far @Lee Wilson has been sharing with us readers, a very inspiring story. Please keep up providing us readers with this hope of a very positive outcome, Lee! Yes I will admit, I am a big fan of "happy ever after" story endings. 🌈

Well that was certainly an unusual tale. I did appreciate 606's sense of humor, especially Woodstock. My take on this is what the hell was that all about 606? May you now rest in peace, and enjoy your afterlife.

Apparently this will not be the typical "No Tell, Hotel" type of story? Room 606 is about to spin his story and come clean with what he knows! 😱

Grief, support and sadness filled the manor and its family and guests. Reggie's mother was a pillar of strength throughout this chapter. Reggie was a mix of emotions, memories, and yes some regrets. A very moving chapter 💔

Wow,things are moving very quickly in this chapter! Leave it to @Lee Wilson to shake things and us up, with his surprises. The title of the next chapter is "The Deciisions". I believe the couple will make a few loving and emotional ones. I doubt this process would actually be quick or easy, but we will see what Lee has up his sleeves❣️ 😀

The great fear of a seemingly out of control and crazed Lucas, is the ingredient that is causing the pot to appear ready to boil over, and no one wants to be the person who will suffer from the inevitable first-degree burns! Threats have been made against all of the group of classmates now, and no one wants to be found alone by him. Is Neil reading Owen correctly? 🤔 Maybe? I am afraid this statement will be tested, very soon, ☹️

“Land ahead!” What changes are ahead for the Clerk? He realizes that he had already sunk to a new low, but will Joshua's treatment of him become even more demanding at the hideout? What could possibly lie ahead for him on land? Probably. true! ☹️

Thanks @Gary L, for reminding me of the conversion formula. I had to look it up and write it down, so I can find out what the rest of the world is feeling. Without using this forgotten formula, I had little or no idea of how to relate to Celsius readings. It's hard if not impossible for us old Fahrenheit users to accurately convert and understand temperatures degrees without using it.

Wow! Big changes have been made for Bart and Noah in this chapter. A new large home, a great sex life, a planned marriage with a discussion of having children in their future. They are very happy right now, and planning for their shared future together. What new ingredients will @Lee Wilson add, when he starts to stir this pot of good times? We all know changes are bound to creep into and rock, this happy loving "unicorn moment". There was no mention of Bart's meetings with Doctor Carlo Marini. I doubt his input into this story is over, and all things will be smooth sailing ahead.

The chapter's title "Black Days" had set my expectations on edge, but not for this very sad development. There will be more sad days ahead at Thorne Manor for family, and all concerned. Reggie and his mother will really depend on the unconditional support from his fellow companions, in order to help them to deal with their family's heart-felt grief. 💔 The joyful feelings of a happy homecoming has now become a very great sorrow at the Manor, and for a now shocked Reggie.

This short concise writing style has shown the constant tension in the air for the clerk from the very beginning of this story. 🤔 His mind has been in a constant state of motion as he tries to understand his experiences, and his own reactions to them. He seems to stuck in a breathless struggle for understanding, that can be felt by the reader. Very well done @Rafy!

Happy to see that some important progress has been made by Bart, with Noah's support. Dr. Carlo seems friendly, and very understanding with Bart's long held problems and gives him space to work on them, without rushing him into any kind of quick fix, to such long established behaviors. So far, it appears to be going well. I hope this progress can and will continue to have positive results for this couple❣️

Jordan had done well in anticipating the steps Patrick O’Brien would have to make to properly move forward in their investigation of an out of state case. He also recognized that this case was "an even bigger crime than they had believed and one that would require more resources". What was very encouraging was the fact that he was prepared to cancel his previous plans of a personal vacation, in order to walk this case through the proper steps needed within the judicial system. He felt that the unique background of this case required that he and his staff pay extra attention as to whom gains certain knowledge of Josh's case, and how to shield Josh and his supporters from possible threats. This is exactly what Jordan, Josh and his supporters were hoping to see from him. ❤️ Another great chapter in this evolving story!

OK, I will admit that I have not read the 2 previous "Jacksonville Jaunts" stories, that appear to be all about Carlo Marini. Will I be totally lost due to this? I have to admit that I am now invested into this Bart / Noah relationship. Any advice @Lee Wilson? Do I need to first go back to read that history, to move forward in my understanding of this story? Yes, I am embarrassed to ask about this now. 😁

Quite a change from Egypt for Omar and Kareem. A good time was had by all❣️ The only downfall seemed to be ,,,,,

I feel we are digging into the weeds here, but perhaps there may be a dual role available, for a good bookkeeper

They say possession is 90% of the law and at this moment the captain is enforcing his law on his ship and crew! It is unknown how long previous pets may have lasted, or what was acceptable when he played this game before, but the rules should now be known by all aboard the ship. 🗡️ This will undoubtedly help the clerk to survive. Pet is a bookkeeper and not a seasoned sailor, and has been passed out, or slaving to the Captain's whims and chores for days. Unless someone slips about the hideout location, I doubt that the clerk has any idea of where they could be right now. His thoughts now are mixed with delusion, and his own self-imposed religious punishment. 😟

A lot is happening in this chapter on all fronts, and I am unsure what the future may hold for all concerned. There appears to be so many actions and reactions going on, that it is very hard to conceive where the next possible drama will occur, or who will be involved. I have the feeling that is exactly where @Ronyx wants us to be at this point, in his story. 🤔 ❤️

Sorry that Bart didn't find his desired closure, but it was only a very brief grave visit. Noah has been very understanding and supportive of Bart throughout their relationship from the beginning. I'm afraid that it may take a long time for Bart to work out his long term issues. 🙁

An impressive introduction into the scale of the manor and grounds. I know we have meet the main members of the staff, but that has to be just a small portion of the workers needed for upkeep and maintenance of such a vast estate, The money and number of workers involved in keeping it in pristine condition must be extremely costly. Reggie's wealth is unimaginable!

Golf also has the term FORE which means be careful and keep watch for the unexpected, Just saying!

I am hoping that they will be more creative then using the same ploy that Victor used, that is now subject to a much more detailed investigation. 🤔