Flip-Flop

I thought I was well prepared for an emotional chapter, but I still shed tears as the chapter and details unfolded. Fate brought them all together, and I believe it is not done with them now. A strong bond has formed among the three, and it is ironic that Joshua's life is the one that was saved, not his brother. ❤️ Well done, and looking forward to the next chapter!

Neil reached his breaking point as Lucas's well organized plans took effect in school. But Lucas could not control his rage and also took it out on Mr. Bowers and the school, with his continued violent threats. What happened with Lucas after being dragged out of the office? Neil's mother called Neil's gay father Brian to handle dealing with Neil during his suspension from school, but her motives for this are unknown by Neil. Until she speaks up, Neil will feel abandoned by his mother, in addition to his past friends. A shocking chapter. in a sad and very depressing time for Neil. Yes the thought of suicide is still in front of mind for Neil. Problems appear to be compounding, in Neil's view of his future. Will Neil's father experiences, give him any insight on how to deal with Neil going forward? A very tough read delivered by @Ronyx to his readers, continues.

After reading your end of chapter notes, I can understand your excitement about this chapter, as the author. You accomplished your stated goals! You described it as so "wholesome". As a reader I would use the word insightful or intriguing. I could make comments on each of the different chapter encounters. You toyed with your character's thoughts and actions, to "flesh out some plot details" I am intrigued as to what part each of the characters will play, as this story moves forward? I also have made some possible guesses as to how Victor will aim his actions, to accomplish his stated goals. What possible drama lies ahead for us, as you, the "planner" of Jonah's outcome, moves us forward to complete your tale? I am hooked on the story, but have little idea how this will all play out in the end. Well written, well done!

Ohio here, Tues, Wed, Highs of 10 F Lows -12 F Wind chills down to -25 F maybe worse. Hoping that we do not lose power. We might get above freezing in about nine more days!

Sure we would be interested, but don't let it distract you from this story. You have gained quite a following for this story, so perhaps you may be better off to wait? There seems to be a lot of stories fighting for attention right now, but that can change quickly.

Great chapter. Jonah is stirring up the status quo of Southampton Secondary, and that would include Victor's rule by Intimidation. He will lose it, when Will joins with Jonah by running as his vice president, in the coming class elections. Yikes, I'm afraid things will get very ugly before this battle is over. It will be decided by the vote of their fellow classmates, to determine a winner and yes also a loser. Hold on, there may be some very rough sailing ahead! ⛵Remember if there is a "Will", there is a way!

Andrew and Ryan have been married for 10 years and we have had the privilege of @Andre Delport sharing their unique experiences with us readers. The couple and family, along with the addition of true friends met along the way, have given us an excellent view of lives well lived. This has been a "feast" for us to indulge into a world that that few of us would have a chance to live. Thank you, for sharing your efforts, even through your own struggles. It is very much appreciated. I am looking forward to your future writings.

Ken got a taste of how it feels to be tossed aside from his new boyfriend, and now wants to be forgiven by Harris. Sorry Ken, but "you reap what you sow".

Welcome @empath! Happy to have you here with us here at the Drop In Center (DIC)❣️ Feel free to join in and add to our group chats!. 😄

Is Harris a vacation fling, or next week's new renter at Bob's house? We shall find out soon.

This chapter was a whirlwind of memories, emotions, and regrets. Jack has made some progress in getting Neil to face his his fears, but also doesn't want him to feel forced to do so. Lucas is forcefully pushing his will onto his seemingly reluctant group. How Neil's father will get involved is a unknown, at this time. Things appear to be coming together for change, but it will take time to become a reality. Does Neil have any time before Lucas ups his attacks? Sadly, I fear not. 🤧 This story is still a rough experience for me, to sit back and only being able to watch!

Wow! Talk about the timing of this visit, ❤️ I feel a healing process will be taking place for both Jordan and Josh, which seems well over due for both. What are the odds of them meeting up, at such a crucial time? This twist by @Paladin, gives me a better understanding as to why this story is titled as Part !. Am I wrong? Great chapter!

Jonah is running for class president against Victor? 🤔 The phrase "out of the frying pan and into the fire" quickly comes into my mind. Will seems to be acting on his own without Victor's knowledge, so I expect more drama to explode, on that front. As a side note, I have triplet nieces who are all very different in looks and interests, but when they band together, they are truly a force to be reckoned with! This chapter is tinderbox full of side stories that appear ready to erupt and I worry about Jonah in this cut throat environment, that he is now in the middle of. Can or is Will able to break away from the hold on him by Victor? Then there is this tidbit from Lila. And this is just some of the highlights of the chapter❣️

Wonderful news ❣️ So happy for you, and your family! Your news has brightened my spirits on another cold winter day

The contrast between the lifestyle in a small mountain town in North Carolina and that of the affluent Southampton New York is vast. jonah has been dressed up to fit the image, of a "true Kildare" and is now known the fourth Kildare at Southampton Secondary school. William called him the already famous “long lost Kildare." Victor, William's' asshat boyfriend was not so happy to meet another Kiildare. I have a feeling living the life as the fourth Kildare, may not always be a "bowl of cherries" for an already troubled Jonah. How strong will the family bond become? Cousin Marty seems to take it very seriously ❣️ We shall see.

This author has an excellent story telling ability that weaves and builds his characters through this entire tale of contrasts, priorities, and families. You will feel the caring, the love and yes. the disappointments along the way. Allies and trouble makers will sprout as the tale is told, You will find yourself becoming very invested with the outcomes and situations of this wonderful story. I can't urge readers enough to experience this journey first hand! It is my belief that you will not regret the decision to jump in, and start reading this highly recommended five star rated offering!

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The three housemates are now four. Bob2 has left the house, hopefully for good. Original Bob has had a change of heart about a relationship with Darryl. That is where are at now, until our author stirs things up once again, in our next chapter, which we all should suspect to happen❣️

I am American and that stumped me also. I Googled the name Kyle and found out it was a old Scottish name that meant strait, as a narrow waterway. The straight/ / strait word play makes it amusing, but am also not sure if that is is the correct answer? Who would know that? Young people who hang out around the ocean waterways? Maybe or maybe not.

Wow, there are so many sad situations in this chapter to get our minds around! So many complicated unhappy story lines to play out. Neil's thoughts worry me very much. This chapter just raises my tension level, of an already difficult read for me. I feel like I am sitting back just watching a terror attack, on so many levels. about to take place.

Totally agree with @drsawzall on his comment on this matter and also think you should apply this thought to your wonderful first story too. The reviews will add interest and eyeballs to your stories. Any follow ups can be posted separately and refer to the the original stories, in the posting of the follow up chapters listings. I am sure others could explain / help with the best way to proceed. Reviews would build interest in your writings.

I enjoyed this story so very much, and sharing the experience with my fellow GA readers was just like "putting the frosting on a perfect cake". I know it took years for @Connectwriter to write and complete his story, but it was well worth his time and efforts! My excitement at hearing of the two expected prequels, is such an additional bonus❣️ I know they will be as thoughtful and enjoyable as this story was. Thank you for bringing your tales to GA and sharing them with us!

Hopefully Jonah will realize how much better off he would be here, with his New York relatives, than being in the NC. state social/foster system, and will try his best to make this placement work. He needs to accept the fact he has had some problems and do some mental therapy/counseling for depression, guilt, and anger. I think his NY. social worker Jay will be understanding with him, but Jonah needs to do his part also. Calvin and his siblings will be a big help, and try to make him feel better. 💗 This is going to be a process, and he will stumble at times, but I think his family and others will be there, to help pick him up., at least that is my hope.

@irivera ends this chapter with this comment: That part of your brain seems to be working quite well, but your "exercise" has also made my heart and brain to run faster because of it! I believe you have caught your readers attention❣️

It also states that Mr, Patterson has retired and turned over the further management of the company to Mickey and his team, which should ensure a steady stream of income for them all into the future.