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Vanessa is very active in a group of gossips. Perhaps that item popped up, because it seemed to me, that many in Sidney seemed to know all about Jordan's history with Adam, and his family. The way his parents treated Jordan, I am sure she kept up with their actions, in order to protect her son. This is just my guess. Time or @Paladin will tell.
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I was afraid that there would be problems before the three were able to leave Stingray Heads, and start their trip to Sydney. The abusers are definitely trying to locate the whereabouts of Joshua. Vanessa's opinion of Joshua's uncle was very accurate. She could smell a rat, when one crossed her path! Jordan and his father need to assemble a first rate legal team and honest uncorrupted police, pronto! The bad guys are likely to make known the impact of their influence very soon. Joshua's safety is the top priority now❣️
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The guys seem to be starting to understand what may have been going on for years, with their relationship with Lucas. Lots of interesting developments in this chapter, that appear to be setting us readers up for new dynamics in the future. 🤔 Looking forward to see where @Ronyx will be taking us next, in his intriguing tale?
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@Albert1434 your cowboy poems are wonderful. The lonely and rough life of the cowboy in their environment sometimes sounds so very beautiful. but for me it would be "a nice place to visit, but I sure wouldn't want to live there". 😊 ❤️
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It was a sad beginning for Rick and Alex, that left both boys homeless and feeling lonely. Hopeful that good fortune comes to them, as they begin their journey to warmth and a better life. Too many youths end up in such dire situations. 😟
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"That big goober Lucas" is getting desperate, and will do anything to escape from his uncle and hide his long history of being sexually abused. Neil's family is becoming united in the idea that he should return to his school in Farmersville, and "not run away from his problems." Alex and Gerry may add surprising support, with that decision. Neil's former friends are learning the very high price of not standing up to a desperate Lucas. There is a lot happening in this chapter, and Neil remains justifiably skeptical, with good reasons. Another well written chapter in this complex story.
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Drama and tension is indeed coming to this newly formed family and for us, the readers of their story. I expect many tissue moments ahead! I will take hope from this quote taken from the Part 2 story listing page: ❤️ I will try to keep these happy thoughts in mind, when my emotions and my tears, get the best of me. 😢
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I am totally shocked and saddened by Joshua's revelations! There will be no easy fix to dealing with the powerful forces they will surely encounter ahead. I can only hope that Jordan and Cameron will be able to create a powerful force of their own to resist the evil that is sure to quickly come their way. What a highly emotional, and heartbreaking start to Part 2 by @Paladin. 💔 I hope that Jordan and Cameron are able to assemble, and provide the support and care that Joshua will surely need in moving forward. in the complex battles that will be ahead for this "new family".
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Another great chapter showing how much thought and care that goes into a Devlin-Major experience! Andrew and Ryan have worked very hard to ensure that guests, family, friends, and employees are all important to them. The yacht trip is just another investment that may pay off in future bookings and endorsements of their now many travel offerings! As always, great care goes into all of their decisions. ❤️
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Yay! Jonah won, but I expect to see more surprises in the next chapters. The announcements appear to be just a bit of a set up for a few more surprises that are yet to follow. Victor will be a constant problem regardless of any possible future election outcomes, and Jonah still needs to work out his guilt problems, with the accident that killed his parents.
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An interesting chapter into a much more complicated story! What will be ahead for Lucas? Nothing good, that ! can foresee. Alex reappears in this chapter, but what are his true interests? You have to love the friendship and concern that Sammy shows for Neil. The school's rumor mill just keeps spinning ahead. Can't wait to see what @Ronyx has up his sleeve for us, in his next chapter❣️
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My school district always had chili served with a peanut butter sandwich, all twelve years of my education. They were great for dipping, and I continue to enjoy this tradition still, fifty years after my graduation from high school. I put my put my piece in a bowl and ladle my homemade ham and bean soup over it. I enjoyed both the cast iron skillet cornbread with soup, and the chili with peanut butter, during our recent and extended polar vortex! Warm food, warm memories, equal warm heart ❣️
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I am impressed with the level of maturity that James has shown in this chapter. It appears that he has given their situation much thought, before coming to his wise but yet heart breaking 💔 decision. “It’s okay,” I say. “I guess. If he thinks it’s for the best, I have to trust him.” Jonah will now need to concentrate on dealing with his own multitude of issues that face him at this time. He won't be alone going forward. He has strong support from his new "family" in his new found...home! A moving and surprising chapter. Thanks @irivera, for keeping me on the edge of my seat with your story telling❣️
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A short but sweet out of closet story, with interesting and very likable "hot" firemen. 🤔 I would enjoy to visit with them again in the future, in a more complex story line. Thanks @chris191070 ❣️
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Dwight is right! Neil needs a better plan about returning to his school. I think he will have a positive influence on Neil. Sammy is sticking with Neil also. Neil needs to realize he does have some support despite Lucas's violent threats to his weak and scared schoolmates. Midas the dog will also try to lend his support to his new friend in the couples home. Waiting to find out where Lucas will end up next? There are still very many open barn doors after this chapter, and yet in this story, that will need to be closed somehow. 🤔
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Sad unexpected beginning, but life always moves on, often in mysterious ways. We try to close the door to a past heartbreak, until we happen to stumble onto a bright new window. ❤️ Just hoping that we are now able and willing to grasp our opportunity, and to move forward.
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Happy to hear that your creative juices are kicking back in, because you now have a lot of interest in how you will handle the situations you have been tossing to us readers. Yep, never a dull moment, so far! We now know that Victor is perfect and is seeking more power to enforce his status quo on all of his classmates and the school board. No matter who he has to trample upon to achieve his goals. He will be tossing his info and threat bombs at anyone who gets in his way. Looking forward to seeing what your now active creative juices come up with the growing Jonah, James, and Will situation? You are out of your creative slump, so just go with it, and have your fun❣️ Another great chapter, that just stirs the pot of our increasing interest!
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3's Company, but "Eight is quite enough.” This takes us back to the very beginning, and our discussion about the reasoning for "The Golden Boys" title of this fun tale. Touche' @chris191070
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Very interesting background information on your thinking, and your creative and thoughtful design. It is a powerful and very personal message,to add to one's body. I would not have realized the historical references, without your insightful explanation. Well done by the artist, and for you, and your convictions. ❤️
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Especially If that violent bum is his own uncle Frankiin! Totally agree with your comment about Neil and his father. ❤️ I believe Granny has a big soft spot for her son Franklin. Perhaps he was raised in violent home also, and Granny is not such a sweet old innocent lady? We shall see.
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Wow if Lucas is running away now, he better not let Franklin catch him! I have to admit that possibility didn't occur to me.
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I am happy about what I think will be a positive for Neil. His part in this story has been a tough read up to this point. This does not seem to be the same case for Lucas. I have to wonder, what direction his future reactions will be? 🤔
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Fate is everywhere within this chapter, and has been throughout Part 1. I am very much looking forward to seeing what Part 2 has in store for us❣️ Well done @Paladin
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Ken was such a repulsive character. It was very sad that his final actions had caused so much harm, to so many. 😟
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OOPS! I just found my proper read reading glasses. The quote was 405 and not 40'S. So sorry, never mind me, my mistake!!!! 🤓 🧐
