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    I just love your "daddy" characters - they're irresistible! 😉
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    Ceremonial Burial

    Cane23 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Ceremonial Burial

    I think he's impressed by Larry's lance. The looks come in second! 😁
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    NO, not her...four minutes of wailing! 🤪
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    I got the impression that almost everyone displayed a touch of snobbery in this chapter - whether it was about music or Neil's woodworking. Kudos to Alex's mother; she comes across as the most supportive and down-to-earth person of the lot.
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    Ceremonial Burial

    Cane23 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Ceremonial Burial

    There's a lot of symbolism here. The false Socrates is buried, while the real one rises and returns to his rightful place. Veridien itself is much like the replica statues scattered throughout the school - an attractive but ultimately false imitation, while the originals remain hidden away. In the same way, almost everyone condemned to live within that institution wears a mask. Lawrence's challenge will be to look beneath those masks and discover what is real.
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    Chapter 4

    Cane23 commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Oh my... teenagers and hormones... Mark definitely made a mess of everything - his life, his relationship with Sandro, and the team. At the same time, Sandro didn't exactly make it easy for him to make amends. Well, here's hoping "The Annual Miller Twins' Extravaganza" will cool the heads of those two... and warm some hearts! 😁
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    Don't let @kbois mess with your head. @chris191070 is a chef, not a librarian. And, no, he didn't write "Sweet Sour Paradox Logic" either!
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    This might help authors recognize their own story... or perhaps not.
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    The authors, with the enormous help of HRH the Administrator Queen, have clearly decided to bamboozle us completely this year... Are you sure it wasn't two lies and one truth, or three lies, or three truths... or whatever? 🤪
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    A mysterious man arrives at the Nasser Ranch. He's a hard worker, a great rider, quiet and reserved - but no one knows where he came from or what he's running from. As the story slowly unfolds, so does the connection between Ash and Taggert. This is more than just a love story. It's about finding a home, loyalty, respect, and people who value you for who you are. @Wayne Gray tells this cowboy romance in a warm and unique way, with characters you'll easily care about. One of my favorite Wayne stories so far.
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    Chapter 3

    Cane23 commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 3

    I wouldn't complain - I do enjoy a good thriller. 😁
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    Chapter 3

    Cane23 commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 3

    It must have been deeply traumatic for Troy, but what happened was nothing like killing a brother. It was clearly an act of self-defense, and... as tormented by guilt as he may be, I'd even say he did the world a favor. Even if they had managed to find a psychiatrist, I don't think Tyson could have been helped. It would only have been a matter of time before he seriously hurt the rest of the family. Hehe, before the very end, I even came up with a little conspiracy theory - that Tyson wasn't actually dead at all, but was hiding somewhere, just waiting for the right moment to strike again. 🕵️‍♂️ Wow, I read this chapter in one breath. Amazing!
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    Chapter 3

    Cane23 commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 3

    First step is honesty - toward himself and then toward Sandro.
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    There’s so much drama surrounding the paranormal characters in the world you’re creating that it’s a good thing some of them are immortal… otherwise, there’d probably be a lot more casualties.
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    Chapter 15

    Cane23 commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 15

    Anyway...welcome back!
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    Chapter 15

    Cane23 commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 15

    I was just checking your story Return to Sender yesterday! Hope you'll continue that one too! Cheers!
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    Just, think of it - who is using stylistic devices like this: It smelled like sandalwood and ancient, intense regrets. It made my chest physically tighten 😉
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    "Moby Dick" in gay erotica...sounds naughty! 😜
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    "Help" ⁉️⁉️🤣😂🤣😂
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    Chapter 10 Godspeed

    Cane23 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Godspeed

    Amazing chapter. The Crawleys are such a close-knit family that this farewell is certainly hard for them. Yet, they know it is the only way for their son to find happiness. On the other hand, living in the same neighborhood as the Cooleys means they can gather information regarding August's father and brother... and alert the boys in time if necessary.
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    Just One Thing

    Cane23 replied to Myr's topic in The Lounge

    Sometimes, quoting a specific line or paragraph of the text is not possible, especially when using a phone. In most cases, you have to copy and paste the part you want to quote into the comment, and it usually appears with a different font and size. Additionally, spelling and grammar checks do not seem to be available on the phone (I am not sure whether this is a limitation of the program or the device). This feature is very useful for us...non-native English speakers.
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    I recognized 7 and 13 immediately. I’ll have to think about the rest…
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    Chapter 22

    Cane23 commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 22

    Hot, passionate, erotic, and deeply romantic. An amazing sex scene - I don't remember reading anything quite like it in your stories before. The scene is even more powerful because it is followed by their journey to the capital, where they step straight into a snake pit and face the daunting struggle of clearing the Sura clan's name before the law.
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