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  1. Thank you for this wonderful series of stories @jkwsquirrel. I only regret that I wasn't reading as you released chapters so that I could have commented along the way.
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    Familiar Ground

    Gotta put it out here, will the dog be important or a factor later on?
  3. I must say that was one of the most meaningful first kisses ever @mastershakeme. I hope they call Tessa soon, so she is not caught off guard. Rachel's text was a start as was Mason responding to Ben's text. Diane needs watched carefully because she is not used to being challenged.
  4. I am sure he feels, his God will protect him, and he is on the side of righteousness. He is probably so insolated in this little town, everyone that matters to him will praise and honor him for his actions.
  5. Rachel is a real piece of work, what a bitch. I still think Ben needs to give Diane, Tessa's number so that the data does not get pulled when she files a complaint. Neither Julian nor Ben are going to rush things between them. No doors have been closed.
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    Chapter 21

    Evelyn is making the right move in turning Austin and making him alpha. Aaron will not like it, but he will recognize it as the best choice eventually. Austin should take Xavier as his mate asap. In many shifter stories, a mating strengthens both mates, Austin needs every bit of strength he can get. Great chapter @Painawakened, cannot wait for next one.
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    Chapter 23

    Wow, what a chapter. Levi needs to confess all the details he remembers. If Casey's family is still out to get Matt and Luke, who knows what kind of story Casey and his friends will tell to bring the family down.
  8. Ben needs to give all of them Tessa's phone number. I foresee Tessa telling them all that Julian and Ben are adapting very well together and that the family needs to become less dependent and demanding of Ben. Tessa is very logical and a guilt trip from Diane will not work on her. Rachel and Mason will whine to Tessa and probably hang up on her before they call their Mommy. Tessa will probably talk to Vera to verify what the others tell her and will get the truth.
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    The Cabin

    I must say I love your writing style, and your characters are so real to me. Thank you so much for sharing with us all @jkwsquirrel. On to part six.
  10. At last, Vee, Theo, and Jack will be reunited to defeat the enemy. As a pack, fighting as one, they can rescue Whiteflame.
  11. Looks like they finally have proof Sofia killed Robert. Is Sofia headed to where Sebastian is to finish him off? Will Julian help Aiden?
  12. I agree 100%. I only watched that movie because of her.
  13. It is from The Best Little Whorehouse in Texas. Dolly was the madam and sang it.
  14. Maybe just for you @Summerabbacat, Shayna could sing 'Rock Candy Christmas' at the ranch.
  15. Tessa's mention of "external complaint" is a concern.
  16. A lot to unwrap in this chapter. Shayna is even worse than she seemed at first. I always figured some of her relatives were involved in Mannly's attack, but I hadn't thought she had been involved. At least she has her dreams of owning a business to fall back on.
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    Chapter 20

    You are absolutely correct. They always have been. I hope the file isn't something Xavier can't get over. It doesn't seem to be since Xavier moved closer versus moving away.
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    Twelve Seconds

    Elina deserves a huge raise for how she handled Marcus. Ivo and Henry are extremely hot together. Great chapter Soren!
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    Summer's End

    Loving this series. Great writing @jkwsquirrel. On to part 5.
  20. Great chapter, perfect mix of story and sex. Will look for part 3 next weekend.
  21. I hope things go well with Tessa. Julian might be AI but he is good for Ben and they fit well together. Julian and Ben also have to put up with "the family" the same evening. Tomorrow will certainly be a pivotal day for both Ben and Julian.
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    Routine

    Hoping this is not the calm before the storm.
  23. I am glad you are going with longer stories. The comments on your stories are always asking for follow up stories on some of your characters. Interesting start to your second paragraph.
  24. I really enjoyed Roberto's flirt. Great start Joe and I can't wait to see what all Matt can get into on campus. This is the longest story you've posted here isn't it?
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    Dexies

    Travis is spiraling down so quickly he is going to hit bottom really soon. I see Kendo and Travis going at it like rabbits during the sleepover next weekend. Ideally, I hope Will walks in on them, but I think Travis will let it slip out in a phone conversation with Will while Kendo is still there.
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