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Great chemistry equals great chapter. Hope Sky keeps his feelings in check.
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Spirit Court and More Studio Time
dboggs9700 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Spirit Court and More Studio Time
Great chapter. Hope the kid rots in Hell! -
Sol, Part Two of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Sol, Part Two of Three
The mystery deepens somewhat but also lightens. Striker seems to be the answer, and Ed may be able to help him to conclusions. Then again, I could be totally off base. I am very happy @Boy Mercury X, that you divided this story up into three chapters and giving time to think between chapters. This chapter is truly thought provoking. -
I actually read and caught up on Role of a Lifetime first. I was hooked by the second chapter. I just started the first Jody story earlier. I am definitely a fan after reading some of your work. Thank you @KKirk for sharing your stories.
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The Geometry of Protection
dboggs9700 commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Geometry of Protection
We were all speculating at the value of the inheritance after the last chapter. It must be extremely substantial to have Niran spending so much money, time and effort to harass Kent, Marvin and Devon. It is time, as Joeseph said, for Pete to take action. If Pete does not, Kent needs to. I am so happy that more is developing between Marvin and Kent. Trust is key in their relationship, and they seem to have finally developed it. As Joseph said, thank you Tony for giving us this intriguing story. -
Thank you @KKirk for well written and great story. You are so good at making the characters come alive through your descriptions. The pictures you add are just icing on the cake. I still have a few more of your stories to binge read.
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Sol, Part One of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Sol, Part One of Three
Definitely a mystery with some interesting characters and plot. Ed should consider Gus as a good romantic replacement for the James. Got me hooked and waiting for another chapter. -
Such a beautiful story like everyone said above. Thank you for sharing @KKirk.
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Chapter 10 - Hospital
dboggs9700 commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Hospital
I 100% agree! Parents and Sam deserve to be put through hell just like they put James through. James needs to let Evan have a go round with them. Probably would not help but at least it would be a release of anger. Most parents have favorites but try not to show it. I this case they just want to brutalize James to prop up Sam.- 16 comments
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Great story so far and the character are so well developed (no pun intended). I just binge read all 9 chapters this afternoon. All caught up.
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R & R, Recording and Research
dboggs9700 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in R & R, Recording and Research
Glad there seems to be a backup plan for the band if and when Russell leaves. Eagerly awaiting to learn about Spirit Court. Great chapter Lee. -
Still looks like Niran in behind everything. Marvin took the fact Kent had not been up front with him better than I expected. Kent's new sense of purpose to keep Marvin and Devon safe. An important reason for living again.
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Thank you, @Mark Ponyboy Peters for this story and making us all think.
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Beautiful story. Bunji-bunji should be worn with pride.
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Chapter 9 - Aftermath
dboggs9700 commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Aftermath
Not sure what I think after reading this story. Obviously, with just three other people commenting, I am not the only one. -
Chapter 2 - Leaving Home
dboggs9700 commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Leaving Home
This is one of the most touching chapters I have ever read. Absolutely beautifully written and informative for those of us without understanding of Islam. Thank you so so much. -
Chapter 1 - Aftermath
dboggs9700 commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Aftermath
Looks like another great story. I will binge read this one like I have done several others of your stories. The characters are so well developed in your writings. -
I do not think it was ever said either, just that he inherited Ken's portion also.
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Great start to a story but sorry it is going to be so short.
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Marvin is going to lose it when he does find out about the pictures after making Kent promise to tell him everything. Keeping Marvin in the dark is just putting him and Devon in harms way.
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I hate that I mentioned Niran involving Marvin and Devon in my comment in chapter 14. I think not telling Marvin what is going on is a mistake. Pete needs to meet Marvin, and he will see that Marvin is worthy of his trust also. Great chapter Tony.
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Great work as always Joe. Appreciate how you filled more of the story in between this and Jake's Story. Not quite a HEA but an optimism that Junior, Sam, and Boon can become a happy dysfunctional family.
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Definitely a fun trip today. Good to see a little more focus on Daniel and see a slightly more mature side of him. Great chapter.
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Chapter 10 - Our Story
dboggs9700 commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Our Story
Truly a wonderful story with such great well-developed characters. It brought back some really bad memories from high school but also help me put those memories to rest. Most of all, thank you for a HEA because it easily could have gone the other way. -
Moving, Recording, and Haunting
dboggs9700 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Moving, Recording, and Haunting
Russell is a little cryptic (no pun intended). He is really looking out for his old band and the guys he cares about.
