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Chapter 24: Nothing sweeter than a fate fought for and won.
dboggs9700 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 24: Nothing sweeter than a fate fought for and won.
I enjoyed reading this one too @vanalas. I am starting to question my own sanity now. Thank you @vanalas. -
Happy Father's Day! Fun and enjoyable story. I wonder sometimes how you come up with some of your stories. LOL
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Margot is something else and exactly right for keeping Owen in the closet along with herself. The dating app, with a picture, will probably bite Owen in the ass when someone close to him discovers it.
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Typical Bavarian Breakfast
dboggs9700 commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Typical Bavarian Breakfast
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I agree Will needs to persuade Travis away from the cocaine. Unfortunately, Travis will probably decide it is because of Will's disdain of Kendo. I like Austin but he strikes me as a crazy stalker type ex. Will better keep a bodyguard close by now.
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Owen seems like a confused guy with a domineering and overbearing family. Telling any family member no, will probably be deemed evil and the devil's work. I am into this story already and I can't wait to see where we get taken. Looks like the possibility of several villains and unfortunately very few possible allies.
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I vote for chapters 3000-5000 words. Longer than that often cannot be read in a single sitting.
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Wonderful chapter. To me, the most impressive thing was that Johnny never thought about the money, just getting the roles that matter. No mention of Sam?
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So well written as kbois said. The storm truly felt real. Great chapter Wayne. Now we eagerly await the next chapter!
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I agree with you sandeman. I am so happy Marc is not quickly accepting Frank's apology. Frank had treated him like shit and deserves to work for Marc's forgiveness. I am apprehensive about how quickly Frank changed. Who decided the change, Big Frank or Little Frank?
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Levi seems to have been raised more by the church than by people. He loved his mother so-so much, but she seems to have primarily indoctrinated him with church rhetoric. Matt's approach to religion with Levi is making him think, without contradicting what he was taught by his mom. Levi is intelligent and will develop his own beliefs in time. Great chapter Mark!
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Chapter 25: Dead men tell tales!
dboggs9700 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 25: Dead men tell tales!
I just read 25 chapters in the last few days. I nearly quit reading after 4,5,6,7,8 chapters but for some reason kept reading. Finally, chapter 9 and Julian escaped and the story lighten somewhat. I was totally hooked on the story after that chapter. @vanalas you have created some of the nastiest villains ever. You have written them and I want to kill them all off, slowly and painfully. Your writing of the evil pieces of shit is absolutely fantastic. I usually do not hate characters to this degree but I cannot help it. Great story, unforgettable characters, and imaginative plot @vanalas. Thank you! -
I ask everyone to recommend this story so that more people may read it. @mastershakeme deserves it.
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I loved the ending @mastershakeme. Thank you @SilentandBroken for the suggestion of Noah's POV. Great story @mastershakeme. @Summerabbacat has painted the perfect picture of what George's life is now.
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I hope that Marc makes Frank suffer before he accepts any type of an explanation or apology. Doesn't Frank at least suspect that Marc has told Josh what is going on? Didn't Josh break a confidentiality with Marc in speaking to Frank?
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"What Are You Up To?"
dboggs9700 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "What Are You Up To?"
I agree 100% with you. We can only wish and beg @CasualWanderer82 to get the two couples back together. -
Unbelievable amount of filming education in this chapter. How much time did you spend researching @Albert1434? So much information in this chapter.
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At last, George's alleged abuse is known to the sheriff and others. Now we have to wait for the fallout. The sheriff seems to be protecting Colt. Trying to keep Colt's behavior between just the two of them and giving very limited details to others. I also get the feeling that Amy and Brett are truly there now for Colt and Noah.
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Levi's revelation that he is cared about and him being part of a family is huge. He opens himself up to the possibility of accepting Matt as his father now. Only time will ease Levi's grief and abandonment.
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Chapter 10: A chance too late!
dboggs9700 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 10: A chance too late!
I thoroughly enjoyed this story @vanalas. Your characters were great and you did allot of unpredictable things with what could have been a very predictable story. I am going to binge your current story next to get caught up. -
Excellent chapter. Great chemistry between Frank and Marc, very hot together. Can Josh be trusted with what Marc told him?
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I don't think Noah sent that text. I am thinking George took Noah with him and possibly stopped somewhere and grabbed his phone when the text came. Noah is really in danger if I am right. I hope my thoughts are totally off base.
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Beautiful chapter. Hopefully Austin will not have any regrets.
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This is how I feel too: “This is the pits,” he complained. “Can we get a little break or something?”
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Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
dboggs9700 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
First time reading your work @vanalas and you hooked me on the first chapter. Now I'll start a binge read.
