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  1. Beautiful story. Happy that everyone ended up together and happy. I especially like that Mason kept his job for five months and has a spreadsheet budget. He seemed the most hopeless, but Julian helped him get turned around.
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    Echoes

    I am sure any phone calls are difficult because the people you call can read you just by your voice or by pauses. In Kent's and Ken's case that is magnified because of being such close friends and being twins. Misery loves company, so thank God, Kent and Randy have each other to lean on.
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    Chapter 26

    Great chapter and ending to part two @Mark Ponyboy Peters Great to see Levi confess and ask forgiveness from his dads. Hopefully the mystery of how Levi got home and how the keys were put in place will be solved. How will Casey react to being rejected? How fearful does Levi need to be of Casey and possibly trying to get "even" with him?
  4. This is such a sweet story full of deeper implications. I loved the way Ben evolved with Julian's help. I must admit at this point I chose to only see a love story with a HEA. I will have to really dwell on the AI aspect and form an opinion.
  5. I love that sentiment. Thank you for saying it.
  6. My God, Elliot quit overthinking everything. You are frustrating the shit out of me. You know you want to jump his bones, just do it. If Theo is hesitant, you can convince him.
  7. Is Shayna immune from any corrective action for her bigoted and racist outbursts? She seems to often go off on people and other than one reprimand from Doc Mac has had no discipline. Sorry, but she deserves to be put down permanently.
  8. We can only hope that all three will follow through and retract their complaints. Hopefully the review board will drop the review between the retractions, Tessa's notes, and the transfer paperwork. Unfortunately, I still think there will be another hoop to jump through before Julian can be transfer to Ben.
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    “Heat”

    What bad timing the blackout had to end. Theo, the hot muscle bear seemed to be about to kiss Elliot. Now we have to wait for the next chapter.
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    Chapter 17

    Vance is about as dirty a piece of shit as you can get. No wonder Jesse is as scared as he is. Things are finally coming to a head at or after 5:30.
  11. That was an absolutely beautiful love making scene. AI or not the feelings and the love was there between both Ben and Julian.
  12. Great chapter. Nathan was an excellent speaker at the school. Nathan just needs to keep himself together and things should go well with his family.
  13. I like Elliot and Theo so I think this will be a good read as chapters come. Personally, I think I'd kill Elliot if trapped in an elevator with him.
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    Chapter 25

    You are so correct. It took a lot for him to come to his senses on Casey but it finally happened. Coming clean to Luke and then Matt will finally give Levi the peace he needs.
  15. I would also include Cal and Orion as possible influences with Halcyon. Vera may have some real dirt on Diane that she could threaten her with.
  16. Great chapter and excellent story. The characters are so well developed, I will miss these three!
  17. It seems like Agent Bell does not expect to survive the end of this case.
  18. Was the sound Theo heard at the end his pack coming back alive?
  19. Honestly, why doesn't someone just shoot Arthur and put him out of his misery, at this point no one will miss him. I think the same thing about Sofia, but we need to know where Sebastian is first.
  20. I have read all the released chapters since this chapter was released. I am happy I had not previously read the old chapters, or I never would have come back to it. The story has my mind going in a hundred directions right now. I will comment later on regarding the story when I have thoughts together. Great story so far @CasualWanderer82 and anxious for the next chapter.
  21. Julian and Ben need to stay calm and be completely honest with each other. No hidden feelings between them. For some reason I have a feeling that Sophie or Grace may come into play in helping against Halcyon.
  22. I hope you are having a fun morning with Connor @mastershakeme.
  23. Great chapter @Vcs, the butt plug education from everyone was just an added benefit.
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    Cold Watch

    Seems Kent might finally be admitting to himself he is attracted to Randy. Unfortunately, Kent seems to see the attraction as a betrayal of his love for Ken.
  25. Great start. Military dads can always go either way, so I am excited to see how things go.
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