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  1. This story is one of those surreal fantasies that I haven't read in quite a while. It takes some aspects of the real world (rifle scopes and Pepsi), while injecting elements of fantasy like dryads and magical creatures. It could be an interesting Isekai (Japanese "Another World") genre type story, if you wish to pursue it with the revived dryad boy, looking for love with someone in our world. You've set up your narrator as someone who transitions between the worlds during his drunken dreams, which is how a few of these kinds of stories start.
  2. A haunting dystopian story with the background of a far-right government in the UK filled with repressive laws and gay conversion centers reminiscent of Nazi Germany. It's action-packed and dark, but there are still good people struggling to help others escape the hellscape. It's a reminder of what we can devolve back into if we allow it.
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    September 2050

    Very enjoyable and action-packed dystopian what-if scenario. A dark reflection on the rising tide of Far-Right ideologies flooding through the gates of Western Civilization. I found Tony's subtle notes about his experiences at a Conversion center were reminiscent of Elie Wiesel's experiences at Auschwitz, bar codes or stars, it is the same. There are too few with the force of will and resilience to resist such aggressive ideology, but I think if there's a lesson we can learn from recent history, especially in Ukraine, sometimes it is necessary to stand your ground and fight for what is right rather than fleeing for safety. However, that's my opinion, I know not everyone is willing to do that.
  4. I got pulled into a meeting on Thursday, so it couldn't be helped A lot of emotional punches being thrown in this batch of stories, I am really enjoying it
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    Promises to Keep

    Thank you @Quilah, it was an interesting concept that challenged me to experiment and offer something new for reading consumption I wish as I noted to others, the ending could be different, but the reality is just really bleak and tragic for nature.
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    Promises to Keep

    Thank you, I wish I could write a more pleasant ending, but sadly, the reality is grim. As such, I could not sugar-coat what was ongoing. It's rare to combine elements of conservation, naturalism, and LGBT issues in one story, I'm glad readers have enjoyed this experiment
  7. 3 more entries to go, @kbois wore me out emotionally in the best way possible, I'll start reading the rest in the morning
  8. He's...amoral Not in a bad way, especially when it comes to Xie Lian 😌 I think Hua Cheng is a good guy beneath all the bluster, he's just harsh with things. You will realize if the anime continues along the lines of the books, that "villain"/evil and "Heroes"/good aren't always clear-cut in TGCF. Before he became the cool and humble trash-picking god that exists in the current time of the anime and first book, Xie Lian went through a really dark period in his life. (We're talking genocidal dark, not just an emo phase). He's probably one of the most well-rounded gay fantasy heroes that I've read in fiction.
  9. Drew, I'll send you what I use for my background in a PM. I bought volumes 1-3 on kindle, but couldn't wait for volumes 4-6, so I had to get my hand on the rest of the story and read what other fans considered the most emotional and meaningful chapters. OMG, it gets really emotional like the temple incident with the thousand stabs to the heart will break you...
  10. Simply an amazing emotional story depicting self-discovery and acceptance with who you are. The author did an amazing job with the non-binary main character and narrator, Shay. They are not perfect, not selfless, and it's a testament to see the character grow despite the pain of having a parent with mental illness. In terms of narrative, the first-person narration and the midwestern setting of Illinois were perfect settings for such a complex backstory that draws the reader in. I think fans of personal narratives and coming-of-age genre readers should not miss this story.
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    Chapter 1

    @kboisYou deserve a lot of words from me as a reader, but words like "Perceptive", "Beautiful", and "Amazing" would only touch the surface of what I feel after reading your story. It's a fully formed story filled with tragedy and triumph, hope and despair. I hope Shay can find joy and love with Griff, I hope Shay will reunite with Tori and Andy, and most of all, I hope they, Shay, can learn from their past.
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    Promises to Keep

    At least they had a few years of love and freedom Small consolation, but no one knows how long they have to be with their soulmate
  13. The English translations for Volume 4 is being released on September 27th 2022, Volume 5 is December 20th 2022 and the final volume, volume 6, is April 4th 2023. I didn't know you were a fan @Drew Espinosa I've skipped ahead and started reading the translated Chinese-versions (a few fan translations exist from Wuxia world), they are similar to the licensed English translated versions though you will need work through the idioms to understand some stuff. However, it's going to take some time for me to get through the remaining chapters, while still reading other books and working my real job 😛 To write my fanfiction, I skimmed some of the parts to reach the juiciest scenes and the climactic battle Now I am going back and forth to cover the bases of all the things I glossed over. I read asymmetrically, especially when it comes to translated stories. The Anime should be coming out pretty soon as well and we'll get the animated scene of their big kiss under the water from the books
  14. Nice poetry with a focus on life, perception, and memory of what we are and what we hold dearest.
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    Reunion

    This poem is heartfelt with a lot of introspection about life and relationships
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    Sometimes

    Awesome, I like the positive body image poetry
  17. This is a nice slice-of-life story told through a podcast format with a lot of good character moments. It's an understated story with main characters, who have been through a lot, but they literally get their cake and eat it (PS: I need to watch a few episodes of The Great British Bake Off now after reading this, thanks @Aditus for reminding me )
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    Story

    Aww, @Aditusthis is such a cute simple story with charming slice of life (Literally!)
  19. Just starting to read these today
  20. You are correct, technically those are terms from BDSM literature. As a very avid gay reader, I don't shy away from various content. Some books are actually made better due to adding aspects of that stuff, like some of Leta Blake's books. Light elements of this are part of mainstream gay literature. For example in omegaverse storylines, where male omegas are presented as female stand-ins, you will see some aspects during the heat. ---------------- @Ron Not sure if you're being fictitious or genuinely dislike the genre. However maybe your point is directed towards the general use of short-hands. As Page noted, DNF (did not finish) is used on sites like Goodreads and in local reading groups (there are a few in Massachusetts) to denote a novel or story that a reader just could not finish due to content. The author K.M Szpara after my attempts to read 2 of his books is just not my cup of tea, but I know plenty of queer people, who enjoy his writing. They find his social commentary on capitalism, sexual roles, and ownership/relationship dynamics intriguing. While those points may be true, I find his stories to be contrived beyond human understanding and cruel for only the purpose of adding conflict to the characters. There's too much shock and violence. His book Docile was nominated for a literary award, so it is mainstream gay literature and probably some folks on GA have enjoyed it. I know people like it, I just want to mention that I couldn't finish it and likely will not cover this author in my mainstream reviews. -------------
  21. Yeah, teenagers can have rich vocabularies, but still, you shouldn't make them too mature and turn them into Gary Stu's Flawed characters are easier to relate and recognize. ----------- In terms of DNF, I don't know why I started reading First, Become Ashes by K.M Szpara as I DNF'd his other popular novel Docile. Yet, the queer reading group I'm a part of recommended this book, so I held back my reticence and started reading it. I don't understand why his writing is so popular because it feels like I am reading stuff from the Authoritarian section of Nifty circa the early 2000s. D/s, punishment, and TPE are fine concepts in that genre, but his characters are warped and inhuman with their responses, along with the contrivances he makes in the plot so they can hurt each other more. (He's made it to my list of modern popular LGBT authors, I just can't review). ---------- Anyway, I've finished up some BL manga and novels, Heaven Official's Blessing I'll need to wait until December to finish sadly, but I am caught up to present story of Sasaki and Miyano and Given, I have to give higher points to Sasaki and Miyano over Given due to the current storylines of both. Book wise, I'll be starting on Husband Material by Alexis Hall
  22. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/49759865-omega-s-trust The second book in this series establishes the lore of this universe, which is something any fantasy writer needs. In the Omegaverse, it’s rare to see worldbuilding and detailed conflict resolution, along with long arc stories like this. Aiden Bates and Jill Haven were still trying to find their way in this series, so I do feel like some things may not have worked as well as in book 1, probably due to overcompensation. However, the
  23. And, in one more year, I can offer Gay Authors a special beverage 🍻 😛 Congrats GA and Admin team for two decades!
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    Promises to Keep

    Thank you for reading, I am a fan of Robert Frost and that poem helped me conceive this simple, yet apparently very affective, story.
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    Chapter 6

    Wukong's observant ability at human and divine interaction is a prelude to his famous canonical ability to see through evil, what will be known as 火眼金睛 in Journey to the West, it's one of his greatest abilities. Yes he is and I am glad others seem to enjoy my take on him.
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