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I hate Liz father being over protective. But he does have a point she's a girl and you have to be a bit worried for you're daughter But he let the cat out of the bag. No telling what dirk could do. Liz has to tell the boys the danger lurking in the coming chapters Its going to a run and hide and have fun. Its going to send Trev to his trip around the world no matter what. I doubt if Liz can get the proof in time to stop dirk. I do hope Liz father will be able to help rather have been the cause to get Trev killed. I wonder if dirk will fly to europe and find his son. or if he will stay in florida - if he does leave the country - that will make the police think he a running fugitive. hehe - it be funny if europe is not co-operative like in the states if the cops can catch him fleeing then dirk be in jail then Trev can come home but maybe not since you still need proof. The proof might be on the boat or in austrailia The worst case its there and then Trev sails to america He might very well lose the boat and maybe gets rescued from the zodiac. What if Dirk is CJames miss understood good guy What if he's is trying to protect his son - what if his mom isn't who all cooked up to be. I guess we're on this trip with Trev and have to sail it on out.

3rd Person - Could be another character or the Narrator\God mode If its like a bibliographical - then sometimes all the info comes from sources you have interviewed Please note when writing in third person you're not in the mind of the character. Its all observation and conjecture. 1st Person - As a POV - you're always in the mind and perspective of that character but never in the mind of the other character. You can change POV - especially when the scene changes

Am i getting this right?? Eric and Lacy = a night of tequella and hot sex?? are they going to share a room with Brandon and Chase - all doing it - as couples!!! CJames going to love this fanfic fantasy!!! but what about Chris - standing between the two beds - two couples making out who gonna wub me!!!

cute avatar - like every uk gay boy - looks like mosely Emulated, you said about my idea of holding out for two years. Well - I came from a time where just being ( non-white and short ) you're open season and thats from the other non-whites then the whites. - add gay - the entire school will declare open season. I read a story that takes place in 2006 in LA, California HS - its bad there for being gay - if you're outed even worst - its not teasing it either death threats or not death threats - there is rape and beat ups to send u to hospital But what kind of school does Matt goto?? Any one openly gay? Gosh - "coming out" my knowledge is a death sentence you lucky - I not write little stories like justasboys site ok I will use more bleep bleep

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Lets just hope Eddie isn't BI. Can you imagine Sam Eddie Jamie in the same bed?? All doing the hokey pokey Matt probably wants to do twister (of course naked) But isn't four is a crowed?? Sure the boys at the prom. The guys get their hands on Matt While the girls - maul Jamie Shreds all his cloths - gives him the date rape drug Each girl making a man out of Jamie While he screams for Matt The boys bring Matt in all gag and naked Haley goes in to make Matt Matt wakes up from a cold sweat from his bad dream at the prom Matt turns off the dvd Picks up the dvd box to toss it when he see the title Haley does the boy!!! Matt screams as he sees his naked body on the box Jamie wakes up - from his drugged up dream Sees Matt sound asleep Jamie shuts the tv Notices the box Haley makes a man out of blondes!! Jamie screams as he sees his own naked body on the box Suddenly both Jamie and Matt wake up from their wicked dream Jamie: Matt?? Matt: Yeah?? Jamie: I think we should lay off the spotted dick Matt: Why your spots look find when I rub my dutch loaf in it Li and Haley screams ewwwww thats gross guys .. almost sounds gay!!

Test Scene 1 Trev - you still have go through customs to claim your speedos!!! Joel - Trev I got that cover ... see!!! Trev - mouth water - oh the boats other there !!! Trev - Need a wank my friend!!! Test Scene 2 Joel - Run Trev - your Dad's here!!!! Test Scene 3 Lisa - Hey Guys!!! Surprise!!! I got the proof... you dad was chasing me!!! We got to get away quick!! He's alerted authorities.

oh if there is dirt on Dirk - in could be in the boat itself. Some where Trev mom must have hid evidence that she was hiding. Trev hasn't found it yet. It could be in some secret compartment just like Trev made And they won't find it until Trev has a major repair. or Trev needs to fix something in a obscur part of the boat

Ok i skimmed around but I still have to read this Sure glad Dirk is getting dirt but he's worst than his son he's going about things as an antagoist he's not even working with lawyer or lover when is dirk going to crack if he's being invesitgated they are going to check his once a week rondevous hey cjames - you for got to have joel and trev hug each other a long hug - because it very danherous to travel at sea but i will re-read

what no one like microwave hot lava!! enlighten us on the physics!! o.w. my big mouth bro did say anything he usually does

Actualy I would like to see all the girl mob him and grop him just to see if he likes what they think of him he has a temper so it be interesting to see how that works with all the attention ok maybe he make a good vibrator - like the power bunny maybe boo boo and Taylor should do something together to attrack the gay crowd

What about speilbergs "Amazing Stories" and the new twilight zone?? Are there any evil atheistic? No god - No Spreme Being - I am my old self made man. O.L. is still soft core sci-fi Always get into a talk issue with my co-worker years ago

Richard Hatch fought for the revival of BSG but I don't think he wanted this dark. He has written some novels for BSG. But the reality is the public love this dark genre. Gosh this started as way back as Madd Max and Max Head Room. Star Trek corrected this utopian society when I think rick Berman did "ST Next Gen" The darkness was the borg. Deep Space Nine - the cardassiens Voyager - the borg Then Enterprise they rewritten Roddenburys original work. For the original trekkers they know what it is but to attract the new audence a more darker Trek was made I do wonder this Dark genre invites encourging a negative aspect of human society. More rebellious, etc etc Its seems to go in like a free for all - mafia - the bad vs the badder look at caprica As far as Boxey - there's a big craz for Noah in his teen years. He really didn't get much of media career - just some sexual fire Now if you look at him - he like justin timberlake - at tattooed Anyway - good science fiction is a big arguement Its like arguing "Hard Core Sci-Fi" vs "Soft Core Sci-Fi" essentially Hard Core spits at Soft Core ie: Dune the book is great but Dune the Movie sucked iRobot - Well it was more like a short story for asimov but now its just a Will Smith Movie mmm another kinda of Dark genre mmm sort of like disney is doing now with skyrunners Dark Disney is coming Mickey Mouse could be dropped or maybe Dark mouse will be the new thing Media doing any thing to captilize on the market for the fast revenue But the message every putting out into the world is anarkey(sp) the complete opposite to utopia No more happy endings. Just lesser dark ending - to stand for Light a darker ending - to stand for evil But sinces its just all dark there is no Light etc etc Dec 21, 2012 - our society is to take a new path its said it be the better path but it didn't say we will take the darker path if so then kick in revelation The end of man - in favor of a new order hehe a Dark Lord if so then we will turn into all those dark creatures living in darkness and fire and brimstone ----------- To put another kink for the dark genre Its more towards inciting a riot to the religious people (pay back) hence fighting for when Church attacked Gays for seeing them as dark creatures of the devil but put it another way its the Religious mafia vs the Dark Mafia fighting over who gets the share of audience of $$$ -------- our society is right blended not black and white - all shades of gray neither good nor evil more like everyone at the end of the movie "Volcano" everyone is covered in ash - nuclear winter.

You expect the plane to land in the water and Trev will save joel and the survivors?? or they will dump joel out the plane so the both of them will meet in the water?? air travel is much safer than you traveling to work. better check what airline (joke) like not the concord

My condolences. I didn't know. Please provide a link to his and your stories - I look forward in checking it out.

But the fee would be for a passenger boat not an ocean liner or a freighter. Well it better not cost him more than $15,000 I don't think bartering the red and blue speedos is going to help or if they take kindly to two 17yo running naked in the canal locks then he won;t have much for food and repairs and maintenance

I am happy that Trev ok after that freak near accident. I can imagine Trev imagining his friends and father being horrified at his own death. I guess now he will be more careful and hopefully for Joel. hehe - I hope Joel - decides to stay with Trev for the entire route to austrailia. f**k school - seeing the world is one - but insuring the safety of his friend would be much more important. Look if Trev drops off Joel - its going to be five months before he gets to austraila and then to home in two months. If he makes it to austraila - I'm sure that his first time relatives are going to explode. Making the trip might be news worthy. But the adults will go out of their mind. I suppose its not going to take five months since he stay for a spell. Maybe four months or less. So he'll stay for 2.5 months before heading home. So far Dirk hasn't been contacted from Lisbon. Is Trev going to call from Gibraltar? Sure CJames says Trev is a teen that will get into trouble. More so than adults. Well - I have to say Trev is so lucky he's never been abused - that certainly would add more to the troubles. Well if Trev is trying to see if this will make a man out of him (cough, a gay one) I don't know if any of us would be a crazy or brave as Trev? or Would any of us have a friend like Lisa and Joel to be there for us? I suppose Trev does now know how much Joel means to him - that certainly he's gone on the limb for his friend. Now - I still wonder if now Joel would see Trev need of love and sex. There is no indication that Trev has relieved his sexual tension. He gonna explode soon and I hope Joel can help him out:funny: You can call that experimenting or helping out a friend. The favor can go visa versa since Joel wont see Lisa for 5 to 6 weeks that if Joel decides to return. I think in time Trev troubles will fade in his memory as he's busy to survive and make the journey. But as soon as he sets foot to relatives or seening Dirk again - all thats going to bring some thoughts - like will they forgive each other. Will Dirk learn to never push his son away? to be truthful? To be his son best friend?? It sounds like in the coming chapters that Joel and Trev will have such a bonding experience. Certainly they will much to talk about regarding things going on back home from all those concerned. Its surprising how Lisa father and Joels father isn't so much concern for Trev. Its heart break there's empathy somewhere except letting Joel go there. I hope Joel will fill us in on how his Joel dad feels about Trev and how he is helping through Joel I not sure if there's anything Dirk gave to Joel when Lisa and Joel visited him. I look forward to Joel reporting about Dirk? We have no indication what happen with Dirk since his sons disappearence. The story seems to center with Trev and maybe what Joel and Lisa have told him. So without any knowledge then know what going on with dirk is left to question. I hope Dirk wrote a letter to Trev being carried by Joel. We know that Dirk mouth gets him in trouble with his son. Too bad I'm a landlover by health choice. I'd love to be with Trev even if it was to give him so relief I look forward to Joel and Trev shopping for the important stuff. I wonder if Joel father gave more money for the trip and survial. I presume its pretty much a safe journey throu the med. Its the rest of the few months to austrila that can be dangerous It could be the sea or it could be other boats other pirates or the country itself that Trev be visiting. Sure Azores, Lisbon, and Gib ... turned out to be safe but who's to say other places are? more of that Teenage mischief to see Will Trev meet a gay boy along his journey will he have a stowaway after joel leaves him Will Trev make the journey alone in that final leg to austraila

I find Avatar not something new. Its really all entertainment and supporting the new form of movie making. Everything is artificial. In a few years they probably drive down that 500 million dollar cost. I think many people here can cite what similar movies is like Avatar. But the biggest reminder it sends is how we treat mother earth - and how we treat each other and how over populated we are. Through the eyes of aliens - they would most likely turn back to go home because they will instantly see how we are not one with out world. here's the first cite Pocohontas 1 and 2 They died with their Boots on Bury My Heart at Wounded Knee: An Indian History of the American West

First off - congratulations!! I'm sorry to say I have fallen off the writing horse. Its pretty much a year that I stopped writing. But any way I will look forward to your stories soon.

so Jamie taught Matt to do the hokey pokey!!! well more the pokey!!! I bet Haley wants a double pokey!!! from Jamie!! mmm Matt gets Li!!!

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oww General Graeme will give him the VIP tour and the Key to grass hut!! for Circumnavigating the GA Authors australian group will ask Trev for his blue speedos to bronze them so the county can rememeber him when he returns home Trev would love to sail NAKED!! back home. he can sail to nebraska - just that the boat will be on a truck going to the pacific. so he can save on the panama canal toll fee yaa the Title should have been LUNCH because thats what they had oh - Dirk will be serving the 190 school days in jail for his son missing school!!! then serve jail time - for his son's death being a bad parent!!!

mmm could the ares be caught by the jet stream - but gosh trev going to europe?? for the summer to oct its ok but it seems he hasn't really though where he's going or has he?? he would go to austrailia via the artic circle? it sounds a bit navigable but still dangerous I think its best to go via the canada side - its english speaking not sure how the russians feel about it even though it much easier to navigate so if he gets to austraila and then spends time and hopefull gets the relatives there to be on his side - sort out the issues I wonder if after going thru a couple month voyage would trev be up to it for a return trip would trev consider being austrailian and leave USA? it also means to leave his best friends I'm surprise there aren't any relatives in USA for him maybe they're on dirk's side? ---------- Surprising the day wasn't really celebrated special just meals, sailing, and sex. well thats two out of three for Trev I see Trev was bit hungry for some buns?? its funny - though?? but it seems thats where they draw the line imagine if Joel be willing to do it to help out his friend - sanity?? would lisa be willing to share joel to trev from time to time??

so lets go ahead and show them heterosexuals are bad!!!

hey you're a phone call away or a click of a cam!! but you don't have to sacrifice your dreams unless you're not pursing them --- go for your dream --- when u got a job and a apartment - they can visit as much as you can visit them --- love transcends all boundaries - just prove it to yourself.