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Wow, didn't see that coming. So David didn't over-react. If he hadn't caught Jack in bed with a guy it would have taken a longer time (if ever) for him to find anything out. What is Jack up to? And now that they are at the lawyer's office what made David stop short? What, or who did he see? Hope we'll find that out soon.
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I knew Jed was going to meet his mate. It has been rather obvious. This will present new challenges for the Timber Pack as I doubt very much if the other Pack Alpha is going to willingly let his brother go. This should be interesting though.
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I can understand David's reaction at what he saw, but I would think (hope) after giving it some thought he would at least understand why his brother was hiding his sexuality. He was afraid that what his family did to David, they would do to him. Of course, I think if my brother was guy he would be the very first one I came out too, rather than being a totally ignorant and hypocritical fool he was. But, if the two talk it over (after David calms down of course) then things could be even better between them.
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I knew this was going to be the chapter where Zune returned home. Very heartwarming, but also very dramatic. There are some important truths going to come out about Zune - Darryl. Let the guilty one get what he deserves, but most importantly let Zune get better.
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This is a blowup that was due to happen, especially if Bernard and Jack are going to be able to move on. Now who'll be the one to make the first step to right things? I would guess it would be Jack. That being said, I can't believe Jack said all those things. They were very hurtful and he is way above that - or so I thought. Let's see how they work their way through this.
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I'm curious as to why Seth has not stepped in when he knows his father is hitting his mother. At almost 18 I would think any 18 year old would, unless his father is way bigger than him and that would mean he is acting in fear. Good story, though, and most questions get answered in future chapters.
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Peace and love all around. That's great! It's great that Matt and Wade are getting along now - and even if they don't get together in the future (I'm not ruling that out though) things will be good and they can both move on at some time. I'm glad for Brad. Having someone in his life (like Ben) would be so good for him. Is he ready? It hasn't been that long, but there is no rule on that is there? Even Matt and Will getting along is amazing. People are growing up and maturing. Great Story Marc.
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Matt is back! at least the one we learned to love before. Let's hope he has learned his lesson. Maybe he won't ever get back with Wade, but at least they'll be good with each other. Who knows what you have in store for him in the future. Both he and Wade deserve to be happy, even if it isn't with each other. But Matt needs to grow up first and he's taking the first steps towards it.
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I enjoyed this story. I was way off in my speculations though. I look forward to more from you.
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Thanks Rob. I enjoyed the story. End of book 1 eh? I look forwrd to book 2. There is so much more than can happen to make this interesting and worth continuing.
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Thank you CJ. Second time around on this story for me, but I enjoyed just as much as the first time. Because I forgot some things I was on the edge of my seat many times.
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Not a surprise there. As usual, Mother always knows. But I'm getting the impression that everybody else does as well. This is going to be a fun weekend.
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Very intriguing. Like others I have all kinds of ideas. Maybe that's from reading to many books and stories. Are the in something like the mafia? are they vampires? are they all part of some kind of secret experiment? Can't wait to find out.
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A moving chapter. While I completely understand and agree why Wade doesn't want much to do with Matt I really don't believe he doesn't love him anymore. Matt, on the other hand really needs to grow up. He says he wants to be with Wade but isn't ready to make the necessary sacrifices to do so (e.g. quit playing hockey). What's more important his relationship or his playing a sport with a bunch of college guys. Hockey isn't that important. Hopefully he'll realize that before its really too late (I can't believe it is too late). I am a little upset (perhaps more than a little) that Matt has turned into this jerk. I really liked him when he appeared in these stories and then all of a sudden under 9.11 he's a completely different beast.
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Zack has a new person on his side. Frank will be great for him, and he for Frank as well. He won't replace Robbie, but he'll definitely help Frank heal.
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I was enjoying the story as it was, but now with this big twist in it it is even better. Like other readers I am curious about the brothers and all kinds of ideas have popped into my head. I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.
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The next chapter is the wedding. What kind of drama do you have in store for us next? I guess it's time for some more. Will it be more Amber drama? What about Sam's father? I can't think of anyone else causing the drama - that is if there is some.
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I love Catherine. Everybody needs a friend like that (but only one). It's obvious Frank and Chris will go on a date, but the question is when? and who is going to make the first move?
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A few signs that strange things are going on. FIrst with Parker's dad and the papers he had - what's that all about? The silver earings that Parker pierced himself with? Something tells me that his dad did that on purpose? But why? We know he's not a nice person but could he really be worse than we thought? And what kind of trouble will he be for the new pack and Parker in particular? So many questions! I look forward to finding the answers. Good work Rob.
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I'm so glad Zune finally escaped. And to be found by Edward? I'm sure we'll find further explanations on how that happened.
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I read this story before and was surprised to see it here as I couldn't remember the name of the author who wrote it. After a little research I realized it was the same author. It was this story that led me to read Circumnavation. I like re-reading great stories like this as there are always some things I've forgotten - like this Scar guy and all. I don't remember it at all so look forward to that being revealed.
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This story is off to a good start and I look forward to reading more. By the way, the story is marked as being completed so you might want to check that out.
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Bernard has some big (pardon t he pun) obstacles to overcome. I can't believe his mother didn't go and clean his apartment, or at least get somebody to do it. What a sight for Bernard to come home to. Or maybe not - it might make him think more than once before he tries that again. I look forward to seeing what will develop between him and Jack.
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I've been waiting for something like this to happen. Now the fun begins. How will Parker deal with this. Obviously he'll accept Colton as well as his own new situation. How will he deal with his parents (of course they can't find out); how will the Alpha handle Coloton? New challenges for everybody.
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Love this chapter. A lot of the conversations/confrontations should have happened long ago. But they probably wouldn't of had the same effect. Matt especially needed this to get him on the right track. When he was first introduced to this story I really liked him and rooted for him from all fronts. But in 911 he's been a real ass and everybody let him get away with it. Now it's over. I feel confident he'll return to the real Matt we first met. Will has been great and deserves a lot of credit and respect. Thanks for this chapter Mark!
