Terry P
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I understand Avery is very naive and everything, but he is 17. Can't he really see he doesn't have to stay under the clutches of his Father. Speaking with Matt would be the best thing that he could do. I don't care what legal age is, but he wouldn't have to go back home.
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I can't believe that Alex would marry Mary Ellen. The arguments for it don't ring with me, no matter how powerful Wade's mother would be. Oh well. I guess we'll have to live with whatever you have in store.
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I feel we're getting closer to Matt knocking down or at least weakening one of the walls around Avery that keep him from telling him what really goes on at home (or at least a hint of it). Great Story.
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I can imagine with Avery's father has cooked up with Mr. Degasio. It's probably Avery. I hope he doesn't have to suffer much more before Matt comes to the rescue - even if it won't be easy for anyone.
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I look forward to continuing this story. Often homophobia starts at home - where it hurts the most. At least CJ has his father on his side. However the introduction of a new person in that household is raising some concerns. Hopefully its all good for CJ.
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Definitely a first date - and maybe even more.
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Marc has been really good for Brad. But, something seems off to me. He is too willing to let Brad foot the bill for everything, and that seems excessive to me. For both him and Brad, but he is too willing to let Brad to this. I hope things work out for them as they could have a good partnership. Will someone investigate this guy though? I know, in their place and with all they have, I certainly would. Maybe this is something Wade is going to do.
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A very good story. I am so happy to have read it completely in just a day. I will read the other story as well.
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I wish someone had stopped Suki before he got started. He's the last kind of person Sacha needs around him - even if Nik wouldn't be around. I hope Nik comes back right away.
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Chapter 12, Part 1 - The Wrong Twin
Terry P commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 12, Part 1 - The Wrong Twin
Great 1/2 chapter! No chapter is too long. -
You may have had a hard time writing this chapter, but you did really, really good. Now that Jason has a little bit more information he might want to pay more attention to what is going on.
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SOK: 1 - A Destiny Revealed
Terry P commented on Bill W's story chapter in SOK: 1 - A Destiny Revealed
The prologue was totally unexpected and horrifying. I really didn't know what to think and seriously wondered if I would continue reading. Of course, my curiosity got the better of meand I wanted to see what was next. It's obvious that Kieren is the one that was prophesied about - but how? I like the story and where it's going. I look forward to reading it as it unfolds. I'll do my best to make reviews as I go along. -
Chapter Nine: Out of the Frying Pan and Into the Fire
Terry P commented on JMH's story chapter in Chapter Nine: Out of the Frying Pan and Into the Fire
Poor Glenn. He didn't deserve to die - not after all he did for Daniel. And what about Andrew. If he makes it back to the Falklands he'll probably die too. Great story - I look forward to the next chapter. -
What could go wrong? or is it right? Jonas and Jen's boyfriend could hit it off so well that they may start dating. But that would cause a lot of problems between Jonas and Jen and he would have to move out sooner than he could afford it.
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Chapter 45: Final Chapter
Terry P commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 45: Final Chapter
I predicted long ago that Wade and Matt would end up back together. I'm sure it didn't take a rocket scientist to predict it (I'm surely not one). A lot happened inbetween to try and make that not happen but it all backfired and that is exactly what needed to happen to make both of them grow up (Matt more so), but Wade had a lot to learn during this time as well. -
I'm so glad that is over. James is in deep shit now. Perhaps he'll change his attitude and feelings about Sacha.
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It's great to see the way the little guys interact with Tony's parents. They are all great. Thanks for this story. I'm thoroughly enjoying it.
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I so get what Matt is going through. Sometimes letting go is so difficult. But in the end it is best for everyone. We'll have to wait and see what the situation is between Wade and Alex, and I'm hoping it's just a good friendship and Wade, who is definitely infatuated with Alex will get get over that. It's my hope that eventually Wade and Matt will get back together. There are things they both need to deal with and this separation is helping them to do it.
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It's good to see Sacha at home with his family. Obviously it will take a while for him to get use to it all and realize that it is really his home. It'll be fun to see that all happen. Of course, there is obviously trouble in the future, but his family will be there to protect him - especially Adam and of course, Lacy.
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Michael panicked. Now he has to take the time think about it and realize that he needs to fess up at work, even if it means losing his job - that is, if he really wants to keep Asher. As for Asher, I think he over-reacted and needs to get a grip. They both need to talk this out.
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I've been waiting for this to happen. Great chapter. But, I don't really think it's over. Not if Buzz's instincts about his brother are correct.
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Good for Buzz. He was running out of time so it was now or possibly never. Let the pack (or his brother) come after him. Which, they probably will.
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I would have thought Sam was the drama queen, but it's Brett. Sure Sam should have told him and he needed to let him know he wasn't happy about it. But it wasn't a lie. He just didn't tell him. Grow up Brett!!!
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A third wowwwww. We never saw that one coming. What seemed like a very nice and interesting story suddenly took a turn towards an even better one. This is really something!
