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Nice "Interlude". I can see where this is going and look forward to seeing how Ace (and maybe Devon) will fit into the ranch with Dusty, Zak, etc. Your writing is really good Andrew. I don't know who proofreads for you, but they do a good job of it as well.

This was an amazing story. I looked forward with great anticipation each new chapter. As I was reading this chapter I realized we were getting to the end - although I thought maybe another chapter or 2 was coming. I know I'm going to go into withdrawal now. Thanks Dan for this - all your stories are great and I look forward to the next. I'm so glad Dalen and Gavin got together - After what they both had been through in their lives (Dalen in particular) they deserved each other. I think if Gavin would have shown up earlier in the story Dalen wouldn't have been ready for him. This prooves your story was well thought out. Many surprises as well, as things happened we weren't at all expecting.

I agree with Phoenix. Chapter 33 is missing - even the previous chapter or next chapters don't appear. You have to actually go to the Jump to chapter list to find this current one. It is an interesting chapter. I don't know why everyone puts up with Shroeder the way they do. Does he being the President make that big of a difference? and give him the right to insult gays the way he does. He is like an out of control missile and needs to be defused and decomissioned as quickly as possible.

I read the chaper when it was posted but waited until I read all of the comments from everybody else and then some. While many find the decision to off the coach disturbing and hoping that it wouldn't work out that way I was kind of non-plussed by the decision. I think this is because I have put myself into the characters involved and try to think like they do. Now that doesn't always work and I get many surprises, decisions like this don't seem so wrong. I wouldn't condone it in real life. However I think this would have many advantages. The boys that have been raped and abused by the coach will get a sense of freedom from his demise. Some of them will even reveal to others what happened to them without it coming back to the folks at CAP. I doubt that JJ would - other than to perhaps his family, So, while Mark may change his mind on this, I support him - either way.

Glad to read something new from you. I'm liking Steven already. It's interesting reading a story taking place in Montreal, since I lived there for 35 years and recently moved to the Eastern Townships. I look forward to the next chapter.

This story is continually getting better and better. Although sometimes I don't fully appreciate the lengthly travels back in time, there are times when they are especially important. I especially look forward to the next chapter.

I don't normally enjoy reading stories about war and all the details related to it but this story was captivating and I couldn't stop reading it. Really good - I'll read more of your stories now.

What a wonderful story. I loved seeing in one chapter their lives from beginning till end (or almost). In fact, though there was a lot of the details of their lives missing because of the shortness of the story it was still complete. I appreciate that it ended the way it did, and not with one or both of them dying. As usual, Cassie, your stories are great.

This is the second time I've read this story and I was happy to do so. Thanks dk.

I am really enjoying this story. I can see where it's going - at least part of it. Remember the truck that Dusty saw at Zak's house? I think it was Danny. Somehow he and Zak are brothers (at least half brothers) and Danny has found that out. That's why both CJ and Angel are reacting to Zak like that - he reminds them so much of Danny.

This story is really intriguing. I like how you get us right into the lives and thoughts of all of the different characters. When I first heard that Paul had died I didn't believe it - and I think Sally is right. I'm sure the Prime Minister of Palestine is behind keeping that a secret and with good reason. I'm looking forward to more.

I enjoyed this story. Unfortunately things happen in life that throw us in another direction. You showed that, and how life can still show promise after a life changing event.

I love this story. Alexi and Joshua are a great couple, and I'm happy things are where they are now with them. It would be nice if Shane would become a bigger part of Josua's life now too.

I'm hooked. Looking forward to more. I like Sean already, even if he was a jerk with Tommy.

Great chapter. I was really surprised by the "Julie role". Sad that someone that Trevor had trusted in the past turned out to be working against him all along.

Now we're getting somewhere with why Simon wants to destroy Alex. When Heath refuses (and I know he will) he will be in danger and so will Alex. Things are heating up and I'm looking forward to it. Nina is gone - I'm glad of that - though not that way. There were other ways that it could have been done - but then we're dealing with Simon aren't we?

A complicated mess alright. I hope that Dave comes clean to Tyler real soon. The charade is wearing thin. I like all of the characters - even Dean now. Is Dave falling for Dean? I hope not .

Andy- you're doing yourself a great disservice by not starting CAP now. You will get hooked - its good reading and intriguing. You never know what's going to happen next and you get involved in the lives of each of the main characters. CAP is also one of my top favourites.

Danforth drama. I just love it. And now Nana is adding something to it. That should proove to be very interesting.

I didn't expect Min and Young Jae to connect (?) like that so fast. It's a good thing too. I'm curious what Min's uncle has over Young Jae, because it seems there is some control going on and Young Jae is going to have to come clean. Good story, I'm enjoying it and look forward to what's next.

Like others before me, this is a really good story, and I feel left up in the air. Hopefully there is more to this story - it has so much potential.

Wow! I was sure that Rachel and all were goners. It's a good thing Fowler was with them. It looks like there is finally a way to get to Gray and ultimately Bridget. Great chapter. Thanks.

I don't think Heath is going to tell Alex the truth - at least not for a while yet. Maybe Alex should do a background check on Heath - though it might not normally be appreciated, considering Alex's wealth and position it would be a normal thing to do. This would force the issue. Of course that might be the end of their relationship wouldn't it? Either way, Heath will not do anything to hurt Alex, even if it meant repercussions for himself. Good story, and I look forward to more.

You had me worried with the chapter name as well - but what appears to be going to happen in the next chapter is just as worrying. I can't imagine how the bomb on Kookaburra will be found. I can imagine somehow that Trevor and Shane will find the tracker and that might get them to have the Kookaburra searched - but that has to happen soon. Good chapter - Thanks.

I agree with Remijay. This is a great chapter. My only fear is that Billy's dad will catch him and David in a compromising situation. All hell would break loose then. I think Annie knows exactly what's going on between the two of them though (well, maybe not everything - but you catch my drift.) I'm looking forward to the next chapter.