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You may be trying to keep each chapter "cliffhanger free" - but the whole story is a cliffhanger at this point. Really good and thanks. Hopefully Trevor will speak to Greg about the "reporter". At the moment that's the only way I can see getting Trevor out of the mess he's walking into.

Thanks Cia. I have my GA settings set to automatically receive updates on your stories. I read any new stories and their updates as soon as their posted as I really enjoy your writing. I realize authors have their challenges and the last thing you need is pressure from your readers. But you are appreciated.

Great Story. Can you tell us what the status is? It's been a while since the last chapter was posted. Thanks

I really enjoyed reading this story - but now wonder if you plan on finishing it. I don't mind waiting, but do look forward to more.

Are you planning to continue this story? I really enjoyed the first three chapters and could see something really interesting developping. I see it's on hold but? Thanks

what can I say? Everybody else has said it for me. But I can say - Thank you and Merry Christmas.

I saw everybody referring to this as a "Final Chapter" and wondered what was going on. After checking I saw that Mark referred at the end of it as the Final Chapter. Seems kind of abrupt to me, but there really wasn't much happening when you compare it to the other stories in the series. I look forward to more stories.

I'm not overly sad about what happened to Gathan and Kristen. Better sooner than later. Personally I never really liked Kristen. I think Gathan is basically gay - but he fell in love with Kristen and that made that relationship seem to work - at least for him. Knowing Gathan, and as shown what happened between him and Zack, I think he'll bounce back from it pretty soon and move on with his life.

I don't get this Gathan-Matt issue. Matt is being made to be like a real prick and I don't think he is. He's one of my favourite people. I sure hope we get this cleared up real soon.

I've missed this story so I am really happy to see it continuing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.

This is an amazing story. The characters are fabulous - other than Sean, Vincent and Matt I don't know which others would be my favourite - they make a great team of guys. The erotic scenes are some of the best I've read. Often I'll read through those parts fast because they can all seem to be the same. But not with Gabriel. I was disappointed with the Epilogue, only with the fact of Vincent dying. But it was a good one other than that and worked out okay for Sean in the end. It was nice to see what happened to the characters over that period of time.

Poor Trevor. He's going through hell with Shane. I think Shane might be gay as well - he doesn't talk about girls does he? They are probably both suffering for nothing. Except that when they do find out they are both attracted to each other they 'll laugh about it. Trevor has put at least one feeler out (reference to "the gays" in speedos) On the end of it all, I really enjoy the story. I feel its dragging a bit, but then I'm probably being a little bit impatient. Can't wait for Bridget to get her due in the end, and anxious to find out the whole story about Dirk. Thanks

Thanks Jack. Another great story and with a good ending. Nice to see recurring characters in your stories. Looking forward to more of your writing.

I admit that Evan was originally a bit of an ass, and didn't like him. But I'm now of the opinion that he could possibly be a good guy - just needs the right influence. Could Kris be that one? Either way I'm looking forward to the rest of this story. I hope that Marv gets his comuppance pretty soon.

Very good chapter Jack. It's great to see this story is going in the right direction. I agree with Scottie about Evan - and while I initially didn't like him I realize he's not nearly as guilty about some of the things that have happened. In fact he's made an good effort about him distancing himself from knowledge about his boss's activities. He might even be a good source of info for the FBI in implicating Marvin in Sean's murder. Looking forward to more.

I've really enjoyed this third part of the Splash Series. A bit of mystery and intrigue adds a real great touch. I notice that the description of the story says that the story is complete (after chapter 18). I sort of feel left up in the air a bit about the Rory story - even though I guess that might be because it's not all that important. I've read all that's written in the "That's the Chicago Way" *in fact reading that is what directed me to Splash. When they made reference to the guys from L.A., including Oleg it seems to me there might be something missing. Just inquiring - but I'm looking to read all of Jack's stories and followups. Thanks

Good first chapter Mark. I was surprised who the main character was - I was more expecting one of Brad and Robbies kids. Gathan is a real unknown and will present a whole different perspective to this series. I'm looking forward to the rest.

Great chapter Mark. A great ending to this part of the saga. I'm looking forward to the next part. The way Brad dealt with Mike at the end showed that he has class and doesn't want to hurt those who are innocent. Thanks.

This was a most disturbing chapter. In fact I waited till later in the day to actually comment on it. At first I thought that what happened to Carson was really too much, but after some thought I guess it really wasn't. Even if he was under Alexandria's thumb (or whoever) he made the choices he made all along with Robbie and then to actually do what he did to the Boys (or Will in particular). Whether he would have done something else with him or not, Brad couldn't take any chances. As for Brian - well - good riddance to bad rubbish. This is a story after all and not real life - so I think Mark can take the liberties he wants. I'm sure it made him feel good too.

I've really enjoyed this chapter. I'm really looking forward to the next ones. Any idea when it will be out?

The whole "Working It Out" Series was outstanding.I appreciate how it ended - letting us know what happens in the future with the whole family.Thank you Dan.

I couldn't believe it when I noticed that not only did this chapter not have any reviews, but none of them did - maybe it is only since GA changed the site. However, I have really enjoyed reading this story and hope that the next chapters will be coming soon. Thanks for your writing.

I've really enjoyed Redemption so far and am "patiently" (or not) waiting for the story to continue. Guardians was great, and I'm glad you focussed on it. Any idea when you'll be posting further chapters of Redemption? Terry

Rover should definitely go. For his own well-being. And Besides I'd like to see what happens between him and Slade.

I don't know what your critique said, or why he thinks your story is manipulative. Maybe some of the characters are though. I do like the story. All of the characters are flawed in some way or another. Beau for example is being unnecessarily jealous of Kan and is really getting carried away with it. It is probably the reason why Kan has reacted to him the way he has. He has taken longer than necessary to tell Kan how he feels about him and that is costing him dearly. I'm starting to like James more - although I don't want him and Kan to get together - just become good friends. When (I I don't say if) Kan admits how he feels about Beau and they do become a couple it would be good if James could be friends with them. Kan is dealing with a lot of emotions right now. Having never dealt with his mother's death and his conflicting feelings about how is father is dealing with his own loss, along with his conflictions about his sexuality - and the added diabetes issue are a lot for anybody to keep to them selves, let alone a young person like Kan. I think if he was to open up to Beau and let him it would help him a lot. I look forward to further chapters. - and Thanks.